Hi, Dooka here

I finished reading Divergent and Insurgent a couple weeks ago, and like with any good story I started making a story with them in it.

This is what I have so far.

I don't own Divergent or anything except my Characters.

The video stops. The projector glows blue against the wall. I clutch Tobias's hand, and there is a moment of silence like withheld breath.

Then the shouting begins.

I try to cover my ears to block out some of the yelling but it's no use, they are just too loud.

One voice is louder than the crowd and draws my attention; not because it's loud, but because it has nothing to do with the situation.

"What's that?" exclaims a little Erudite girl who can't be more than 7 years old.

I look where she is pointing, to see the projector glowing blue again and almost immediately silence falls upon the crowd.

Then the video shows up and it shows a girl with thick, long dark hair obscuring her face; in a room that's so dark, she has to be in the pit.

She is reading a book that is very thick on her bed and she is already ¾ of the way through.

The door opens and a boy with blonde hair and pale blue eyes like mine walks in.

He is short but well-muscled like he could be a wrestler.

"Hi Will," she says without looking up.

'His name is Will' I think almost wincing, Will's blank, celery green eyes flashing through my mind briefly.

Tobias, sensing my discomfort, squeezes my hand.

Christina winces and I feel even worse.

"Hey Victoria," he says smirking, then he looks like he has just seen someone die in front of him and backs up silently.

The girl looks up and I am really confused because she has those wonderful dark blue eyes that look just like Tobias's but the hint of light blue is in her right iris on the top right hand corner, instead of the left iris like Tobias's.

She glares so powerfully that everyone backs up but Tobias and I; I guess she doesn't like to be called Victoria.

"How many times do I have to tell you William," she says saying William like it is the worst thing in the world.

"You can call me Vic or Tori, and that's it,"

She doesn't lighten up on her glare, and he flinches

"Don't call me William, it's Will," he grumbles crossing his arms.

She stands up and she is a head taller than him, thin and slightly boney but obviously very fit.

"What do you want, Will?" she says rolling her eyes and putting her book on a small desk opposite her bed.

"I found this," he smiles holding up a book.

It has a blue-gray background with the Dauntless seal in the middle, I see the title and get really worried, because it reads Divergent, the reason this whole war started in the first place.

She reads the title and her eyes grow wide,

"Where did you get this?" she says seriously, her eyes piercing.

"I found it on the Kitchen Table, I think Mom brought it back from the records yesterday," he whispers

Her eyes sparkle "Read it out loud, it sounds fascinating and if Mom just left it there it can't be all that important,"

"Don't tell me what to do, I'm 3 years older than you," he hisses

"That doesn't mean I can't beat you up," she says evenly crossing her arms and narrowing her eyes

He seems to think for a second.

"Fine, Whatever,"

She smiles and I suddenly see myself, smiling like I had right before I slapped Tobias on the day I visited Erudite headquarters.

Then the moment is gone and I'm staring at the girl that looks like Tobias with my features.

Wait, Tobias with my features?

Suddenly I feel very dizzy and Tobias doesn't look much better.

Just before I black out I feel Tobias's hand grip mine tighter.

Sorry if that wasn't terribly interesting but I'm not done yet.

In fact I haven't even started yet.