Hello. This time I would like to give a heads up at the plot I'll be going through on this story. I'm very excited because a master writer sent me a PM. "Thechilldude" is one of the best Fanfiction writers I have ever "met (?)" on this site. I look forward to his advice, and to any criticism any reader might have; I'm a nice guy so I'll take any feedback, but please tell me about my grammar and punctuation since I'm trying to look for a work from home environment (too much information? sorry.)
Anyway. These will be the points I'll be working on. Any suggestions on the changing of the plot can be discussed to.
Plot for Regrets
1. Ryoga finds a map
2. Akane doesn't like Ranma's female side
3. Ranma and Ryoga go after the jewel from the map.
4. Ranma looses male body, Ryoga falls for her
5. Ryoga's parents die, Ryoga becomes a Tendo or a fiancee
6. Ryoga declares his love for Ranma, she accepts him.
7. Akane convinces Soun to make Ryoga her fiancee.
8. Akane forces Ryoga to accept her in front of Ranma using P-chan.
9. Ryoga asks for time and leaves with Ranma. Struggle Love or Honor.
10. Old man reappears, male Ranma is alive.
11. Ryoga and Ranko rescue Ranma.
12. Ranma and Akane reconcile. Ryoga becomes a Tendo.
13. Ranko becomes Ryoga's fiancee. A wedding is set.
14. Unruly rivals and enemies.
15. Enter Happosai. Anything goes master title.
16. Saotome's Honor, Fight for the school.
17. Ranko's biggest challenge : Nodoka.
18. The proposals.
19. Wedding time. Chaos in Nerima.
20. Happily ever after.
Thanks.