Hi! This is the 1st story I'm writing (or typing), so i need a bit of review and help. Thanks! ;) (By the way, I'm typing about my favourite character in W.I.T.C.H.)

Chapter 1: A New Day

'Morning class, how's the holiday? I hope is fun, but now is time for work, please open your history book now' Mr. Collins told the whole class. It was the 1st day of school after a month of holiday. 'Back to hell,' a girl with brown hair, blue eyes and the guardian of water whisper next to the girl next to her, which goes by the name of Hay Lin, 'The holiday was fun without these, even school days' she grin while whispering to Hay Lin without noticing the history teacher is infront of her.

'Okay class, since the holiday was fun and exciting, Miss Lair, can you tell me who discovered U.S.A?' Mr. Collins ask Irma with a grunt.

'Ermm...' Irma is in big trouble even on the 1st day of school.

'Well Irma, I'm waiting'

'Taranee, I need your help here...' Irma send a telephatically to Taranee.

'Sorry Irma, your on your own' sigh Taranee, who giving Irma that sign telling her that asking her is enough.

'Oh I'm gonna get you for that' she hiss telephatically.

'Well Irma, are you going to answer me or to the principle?' Mr .Collins ask impatiently.

'Ermm... Abraham Lincoln?' Irma answered with uncertainty.

'Wrong Miss Lair, the answer is Christopher Colombus, and you are either staying here after school or meeting the principle' Mr Collins say with a bit of anger in his voice

'Ermm.. Is there a third choich? Heh heh...' Irma say sarcastically.

'Choose, detention or principle' Mr Collins say with a grunt, while the other students were giggling silently.

'Humph... detention...' Irma say with a mumble.

'Now back to learning class, so...'

'Thanks a lot Taranee, and Hay Lin, you are so gonna get it for not backing up for me' Irma telephatically to Taranee and Hay Lin angryly.

'Sorry Irma, because you aare not paying attention to classes all the time, and your abusing my knowledge' Taranee is not happy with her, and so does Hay Lin.

'Taranee rights, Irma, these days your not concentrating on your school work, but instead on some adventure like a fight, but there's nothing we can do, ever since Nerissa, Phobos and Cedric were defeated.' Hay Lin telling Irma telephatically about the adventure they have a few weeks ago.

Irma knew they are right, after Nerissa, Phobos and Cedric were defeated, not that she complain, but it is kinda boring, a whole month without any fight, is like pressing the control without changing the channel.

(I'm bad at making these kind of sentence, I need some reviews here)

'Hay Lin, I know you guys are just helping me, but I was so bored at home and elsewhere, and I am thinking of what to do next.' Irma saying it with a sigh. But the other girls did not respond to answer her.

The class continue till recess, 'so Irma, how is going? Being in detention always suck right?' Cornelia say with a grin, Irma gave her the look to shut up.

'Just leave me alone, Corny, I was just bored to death, with no fight or anything, I mean I am not complaining that our enemies were defeated just like that, is just that, there haven't been any call from the Oracle or Meridian.' Irma say it with grunt, and the other girls knew what she was saying, its been a month since any mission.

'C'mon Irma, we are back to living our normal life again, aren't you happy?' Will say with a smile while putting an arm on her friend.

'I... got to go to my locker... see you guys later...' Irma say while getting off to exit the cafeteria.

'Hay Lin, can you go talk to her, your her best friends, maybe she can explain to you why she is acting this way.' Will asking her.

'I'm not sure whether I can, because she was angry at us during the history.'

'Now what happen, wait, don't tell me, detention again' Cornelia said with a smirk.

'Yeah, that's not it, she ask us for the answer that the history teacher ask her, but I told her she's on her own.' Taranee answered with a sad voice.

'Well serve her right for getting into trouble a lot.'

'Cornelia!' the other girls shouted at her.

'What? It's true, she always gets into trouble with Mr. Collins.'

'Well, we have to wait for her at the Silver Dragon to explain herself why she is acting this way' Will say with a demanding voice, the others node, they all knew what had to be done, by asking her why she is acting weird.

After school, Irma is in detention, with Uriah and his gang. 'Hey guys, guess who is here with us' Uriah whispered to the others with a smirk. He and the others walk to Irma's desk.

'What do you want jerk.' she say with a harsh voice.

'Oh nothing, just to annoy you' saying with a smirk while the others giggle.

'Just leave me alone, I'm not in a good mode.'

'Ohh... I'm so scared. Hahah...' Uriah laugh with the others while Irma was getting angry.

'Don't make me do it, Uriah' She whispered to herself.

'Hey, I can't believe your speechless, cat caught your tongue?'

'That's it!' Irma shouted at him, while staring daggers at him.

'Whoah, now she talks,' laughing while pointing at her, 'what are you gonna do? Throw water balloons at me? Hahah...'

'Well the matter of fact, yes' she though while flicking her fingers, then a spray of water is spraying at Uriah and his gang.

'Hey! Cut it out! *Blub* Who's doing this? *Blub*' Uriah say while trying to get away from the spray of water. 'Don't know. *Blub*' Irma giggle at the sight of it, then she flick her fingers again to stop the spray of water spraying at Uriah and his gang.

Uriah was soaking wet, 'I don't know how you do it but your going to pay for that' just as he was about to go to Irma's place, the detention bell rang and Irma ran out, while leaving Uriah in the detention room, 'Your going to pay Irma!'

Outside, Irma isn't sure whether she wanted to go home or to the Silver Dragon, just as she was passing an alley, she something like a fold opening, she went to check it, just as she went near it, a figure came out and almost crashing into her,'Hey, what the?' just as she turn around, the figure disappear but he fold is still there, 'Well, I guess I know where to head.'

Thanks for the review, I know that the chapter got some problems, but thanks for the help, and I will update it as soon as possible. And can give me an idea of a new world, can't think of one, thanks. And here is the updated chapter, with better sentence.