Who can help me, polish my grammar for this story?

Someone message me, explaining to me that, per story, i should have a different beta, something like that. well, just a huge thank you to CandiceFf for my first ever beta, .. and advance thank you, for the person who wants to be my beta.. :)

Present, I still think its a working title... well, lets just see :)

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"Nik…klaus"

"Caroline?"

To what felt like hours, Caroline and Niklaus were speechless and just like dumbfounded. Caroline tried to process the bittersweet dream she had, after processing it, Caroline began, "Those dreams_" Caroline did not knew how to continue or what to tell, because while she is still taking it all in and understanding that dream at the same time she is dumbfounded that she is an a room with the most feared original, that tried to sacrifice her in a ritual. Million thoughts were running on Caroline's head, she wanted to scream and just run away because of the dreams she had, and she doesn't even know why. To what felt like hours again, Caroline began again, "Those dreams_"

Niklaus who just remained silent and patiently waiting for Caroline to take all the events that is happening around her, answered Caroline, "are your memories"

Caroline was just speechless, the most feared original who tried to kill her best friend, who killed the Jenna, who tried to sacrifice her, who is known as a mass murderer just said that those are her memories. Caroline cannot form a question, even if a million questions are in her head.

Niklaus then carefully approached her and just wanted to comfort her, he understands that everything is a lot to take in, but he was shocked and disheartened when he felt that Caroline flinched when he gently held her hands.

Even if Caroline did not understand what she is feeling then, she just felt that tears are just trickling down her eyes.

"Caroline?"

Caroline then looked up to see Niklaus eyes full of concern.

"Caroline?"

"I'm not her." Caroline heard herself say the words to Niklaus, but she felt that it wasn't Niklaus she was trying to convince but herself.

Niklaus was just disheartened and did not answer Caroline.

…

Rebekah was just outside the room, she could hear clearly all that was happening that she could practically visualize what was happening inside. When she heard what Caroline said, she felt really numb for the years of waiting for her best friend, and seeing her brother long for her. Rebekah then snapped out of her hurt state for she knows that her brother is more hurt than her, that's why she decided to ease everything up and entered the room.

"I hear nothing, is it safe to come in?" Rebekah tried to sound anything but hurt, but Niklaus knew her well and what she intends to do, and just looked at her sister. Rebekah saw pure hurt on Niklaus eyes and fear, confusion on Caroline's eyes. Everyone was just speechless in their situation.

Caroline then looked at the blonde who snapped her neck, she remembered the dreams or the memories clearly that she felt the deep friendship between her and Caroline. Caroline then said, "I'm sorry, I'm not her."

Rebekah then looked at her brother searching for signs to what to do, then we she got no response, Rebekah finally gave up and said, "Caroline, first day of school"

Caroline looked at the blonde girl, confusion running on her face, and then started to realize what she meant.

Rebekah then said, "Since I dragged you out here, I'll give you a lift. Let's go. I'm sure you don't want to be late for the first day of senior year."

Caroline not knowing what to do just got up of bed and silently followed Rebekah. But before she left the room, she doesn't even know why she felt she had to do it; she turned back again to face Niklaus and said once again, "I'm sorry."

…

The whole ride was just pure silence. Rebekah wanted to explain everything to Caroline, but every time she would start to open her mouth she would just close it again.

After few minutes, Rebekah was thrilled that Caroline began to talk but only get to be disappointed when she heard her only give directions to her house. When they finally arrive at the house, Caroline said, "thank you for the lift."

Seeing Caroline get out of the car, Rebekah was just shocked to hear herself finally talk to her, "Caroline, wait. I know everything seems weird but can I talk to you after class?"

Caroline was just exhausted with everything but when Rebekah just looked at her and said those words to her, she just can't bring herself to reject Rebekah's offer to possibly explain everything. "After class."

When Caroline got out of the car, she said to Rebekah, "But I'm not her, I'm sorry."

…

"Nik?" Kol began.

"Kol, just stop please."

"I know you are hurt Nik, but I still think it's her. I think something just went wrong with the spell, she still has the necklace." Rebekah said, as she enters the room.

"Please stop, Bekah."

"I understand what you are going through Nik, but_"

"But nothing, just stop Bekah!"

"Alright Nik."

…

"Bekah! Where are you going?" Kol asked as she follows her sister outside. "Smells like trouble."

"None of your business." Rebekah snapped.

"I want to come, I raced here last night to see h_," Kol stopped for he is also disheartened to what happened. "I raced here last night to see all of you, and now you are just going to leave your loving brother." Kol said with a smirk.

Rebekah knowing that Kol will never leave her at peace, decided to finally give up and tell him, "It's my first day of senior year."

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