Holy WOW! 160+ REVIEWS!
Well, I've been a horrible nightmare of an author for you all. ;-;
Gomen, (Sorry)
But, this year as a Freshman has been a joke for me, like I haven't taken it really seriously x.x
I hate this story
Got ur attention :), But I do, I like the plot but this was before I started writing 24/7 in my English notebook, so looking back how long...2 years? I realize how much better I have gotten at writing, (yes my ego has inflated a little). So, Im going to re-do this, I'm going to metaphorically stick a bandaid on each chapter I shat all over. And you can re-read, but Im going to fix all my major flaws in this story.
#1 Not focus on the whole outfit, shopping and cheer topic. This is because after reading someone else's Kick story I realized how annoying those scenes can be.
#2 Not rush the plot, In my other story I actually got a review about how I rushed the plot. Which opened my eyes, Im not the whole slow-burn kinda writer, so I'll take it at a Moderate Tempo.
#3 Getting off-topic and adding little side notes, its either a hit or a miss when it comes to understanding things and I realized(A/N srry f4 spelyeng mistcakes) how annoying they are. :3
But anyway, I'm going to re-do this as in like, copying all of my chapters again because they died on my Document Manager, and fixing them, then re-uploading all at once. I would prefer if you would re-read the entire thing. As I may feel like editing MAJOR plot developments.
I hope you enjoy Shattered Glass v2 (When I finish editing off):
~S