Well this has been a long time coming I got alot of reviews from Ranger Wheatley some I will answer here in this handy dandy authors note
Ranger Wheatley chapter 22 . Jun 12
Why does Godric put a coin in Setea's mouth after killing them? WAIT HARRY GOT ARRESTED?!
At the time I was reading Assassins Heart by Sarah Ahiers where assassins called Clippers place a coin in the mouth of their targets after killing them for religious reasons I thought it was a cool idea so I included it having Godric do it to Setea as a sign of respect for a wonderful battle
For the record I do recommend Assassins Heart it's a wonderful book along with it's sequel Thieves Cunning I won't spoil but I do recommend for the record it's not a book for kids rated T just to be clear
Yes Harry got arrested Spoilers he got out in the next chapter
Ranger Wheatley chapter 23 .Jun 12
Why is magical America divided? And THEY'RE GOING TO HAVE A FREAKIN POKEMON LEAGUE?! YES!
Like I said in the authors note America is often portrayed as perfect while England looks like racist and unable to do anything
They are all of these things but that is not the point
I am American and I love my country but I know the government is not perfect there is no such thing as a perfect government something I feel is reflected in chapter 23
Ranger Wheatley chapter 30 . Jun 12
WHAT THEY GO TO EVIL UMBRIDGE'S OFFICE?
Yes they went to Umbridges office they had to find out what was going on with Umbridges evil plan
Ok enough questions time for the chapter I hope everyone stays safe during this crazy time here we go
Harry Potter of the elite 4
Harry and Hermione waited under Harrys invisibility cloak outside of Umbridges office Hermione tapped her foot impatiently
"Hermione it's an invisibility cloak not a muteness cloak she can hear you if you do that" Harry said Hermione stopped tapping her foot she was really irritated with the fact that SHE failed a test from someone so obviously evil and bigoted
Although it might just be pride from the brightest witch of their generation having failed at anything "when is that distraction going to happen" Hermione asked frustrated Harry looked at his watch "it should be any minute now" he told her
Suddenly there was a loud boom Umbridge stormed out of her office turning to the sound of the explosion rushing off with her wand drawn once they were gone Harry smiled taking off the cloak "let's go" he said as they went towards the office
Hermione followed "what was that" she asked
"Fred and George and one of their prank inventions it makes a loud bang but does nothing else" Harry explained "come on they're going to find out soon that its nothing more than a fancy noisemaker" Harry said as they went into Umbridges office
Harry had to cover his eyes for a moment there was so much PINK it was like entering a babies room and it was such an obnoxious shade of pink too it hurt his eyes to look at that and cats hundreds of magical china plates of kittens
Sure Harry had nothing against cats but there were so many of the things and they were all meowing at Harry and Hermione
Hermione looked horrified "this castle is over a thousand years old and she painted the masonry doesn't she realize the damage she could cause with all this paint and nailing those obnoxious plates to the wall"
Harry looked to Hermione "I thought you were a cat person"
"I prefer Gengars speaking of which" Hermione said pulling out a pokeball "come out Gengar" she called out her Gengar emerged looking around curiously before turning to Hermione "Gen gar gen"
Hermione shook her head "no we're not going to play I need you to be on lookout tell us if you see an old woman in a pink cardigan" she said "do a good job and you can have a biscuit"
Gengar saluted floating over to the door Harry looked at Hermione "you spoil your Gengar too much" he said walking over to Umbridges desk Hermione followed after
"And whose the one who feeds his Charmander and Wartortle Salmon" she asked knowingly Harry tried to pull a drawer open but it was stuck Harry struggled to open it Hermione just rolled her eyes
"Are you a wizard or not" she said pulling out her wand "Alohamora" she said pointing her wand at the drawer the two thirteen year olds heard a click and the drawer slid open Harry and Hermione looked into the locked drawer inside of the drawer there was a pile of parchment written on the top most parchment was a name Hermione Granger
Harry frowned "we have to show this to Kendra" he said grabbing the pile of parchment about to pull it out but Hermione shook her head grabbing the top most parchment the one with her name on it pulling out a blank piece "duplicous" she said the blank piece copied the writing
"Gengar Gen" Gengar called out getting the two wizards attention Harry and Hermione nodded returning Gengar closing the drawer putting on the cloak just as Umbridge entered the office
"Disgusting little Weasleys" she said hatefully as she walked into the office leaving the door open sitting down stepping on Harrys foot Harry grit his teeth as they moved slowly Umbridge turned to where she had stepped before "priori incantatem" she said pointing her wand through the office when nothing happened she shook her head
"Must be my imagination" she said as Harry and Hermione moved stealthily through the office reaching the door which thankfully was left ajar by Umbridge in her when she entered
Once outside of the pink toads office they moved stealthily and silently through the corridors once they were away from Umbridges office they let out a relieved breath
"That was a close one" Harry said Hermione nodded holding onto the parchment in her hand
"We have to get this to Kendra" she said as they moved towards where Harrys guardian would be
Kendra frowned as she read the parchment Harry and Hermione had ahem 'borrowed' from Professor Umbridges office
Harry obviously was mad too after having read the parchment
9.1.93
Hermione Granger showed poor aptitude and logical thinking on this exam therefore it is my recommendation
That Miss Granger not pursue a Hogwarts education following O.W.L's and should perhaps look for career in other more appropriate avenues for a person of her background
Dolores Umbridge
Kendra frowned putting the parchment down angrily "I'll talk to Albus about this" she said "but I'm not sure what else can be done"
Harry and Hermione frowned she understood why but her hands were tied this was a recommendation it wasn't exactly a smoking gun or a wand that had cast the killing curse
"But Kendra" Harry began Kendra raised a hand
"I'm going to open an investigation into Umbridge but until we get more concrete evidence of her doing something wrong we can't just accuse Umbridge of doing something wrong because of an opinion" Kendra said "she has the right to it even if it's wrong" she said looking at Hermione
Harry frowned "and if she's doing something more" he asked Kendra shook her head "than I want you to come to me instead of trying to deal with it yourself" Kendra said standing up kissing Harry on the forehead
"Promise me" she said Harry looked away from her
"Harry promise me" she said more sternly this time Harry nodded
"I promise"
Kendra nodded before walking off she had to go speak to Dumbledore she didn't trust Umbridge as far as she could throw her especially around her son and his friends she was going to have to work with Dumbledore and the other professors that 'test' was clearly rigged against Hermione perhaps all the other muggleborns or children of Squibs as well
But did she really think a career test would get rid of the Muggleborn students even in the muggle world career tests were seen as little more than a glorified personality test and even than they were usually wrong
What was she up to here
And that's the chapter everyone a rigged test wonder what else Umbridge is up to what will Harry do in response let's find out in the next chapter
Stay Safe everyone