So I've returned to this little page with reviews and my reponses to them. Can I take a moment to just squee at how bloody amazing you lot are? 45 favs? How is that even a thing? I think it's terribly rubbish, but you guys enjoyed. And that is thoroughly just...mind-blogging and humbling to me as a writer who seems to have no self confidence in their art. So I thank you all. I know not all of you posted a review, so I wanted to say my thanks to those 45 favours and those 7 followers who may have or may not have said something, you guys really are precious.
My apologies for sounding like I just won an award. But seriously, the response (even if smal compared to others) is lovely. Makes me want to write more for you all. Now onto the reviews and responses. And if you make it all the way to the end, you'll get a nice little gift from me.
— sincerely, `crazy.{botch}.
maliceofhumansacrifice: Hahaha, I want to see Tony's reaction. I bet it'd be epic.
► Well, I was in the process of writing a reaction sequel, but I didn't like where it was heading so I just stopped writing it. I suppose I could go back and retry. Is there anything in particular you would like to see?
survivor girl1: I want to see Tony's reaction. Pronto.
► Oh gosh. Demanding, aren't ya? I love reviews like this, tbh. But again, I'll see if I can come up with something good.
Lazy Kitty Hyuu : This was really erotic and delicious. I loved every word. I would LOVE to see another fic with Tony's reaction and what happens when he gets home.
► Well, I'm glad you loved it, m'dear. The fact that you used delicious as a word to describe is just the cherry atop this lovely cake.
shucky motherfucky : jeSUS UH OKAY
THAT'S ONE WAY TO GET SOMEONE TO COME HOME QUICKER DAMN LOKI
that was hot and the absolute opposite of rubbish omgI want to see Tony's reaction. Pronto.
► Hahahaha. This review was one that just made me giggle uncontrollably when reading it. I'm glad you liked it, love.
TheGirlWithAThousandNames: Holy CRAP, that was amazing! Easily one of my favorites, I believe. Well done!
► Oh, this is lovely. I'm glad you liked it so and it ended up being one of your favourites. ;A;
SoraOokami12: Loved it!
► Thank you!
Loki'dWendy: *Cough* Well... I'm sure that got him home a lot sooner than he intended to be.
► Well, we'll just have to see, right? Or maybe I should just leave up to your imagination(s).
Shelk: I imagine the man choke on his coffee,trying to sneak peek at his phone during a violent blushing as he demanded a ticket home, redialing the phone the same second he could control his speech again.
► I must admit, I can definitely see this being a thing as well.
Now if you've read all the way down to this point, I love your faice. And to prove my love for your faice, I decided to post the original sequel. This is the chapter that got written, but then quickly scrapped do to the idea of it not clicking and it just seeming to be all over the place and no where close to what I want. Again, I may attempt this again, but we'll see. In the meantime, enjoy the tease.
— sincerely, `crazy.{botch}.
As board members and various other important people filed out of the large meeting room, only one man remained and it wasn't until the last person exited the room that Tony finally let his head fall to the large, maplewood desk that he was seated at and he sighed softly. He was exhausted, annoyed, and completely over the fuckery that came with having to kiss the asses of undeserving twits and overbearing board members who dared to question his genius. It was a long month and a half (actually it was one month, ten days, five hours, and twenty minutes...yes, he was keeping track—whatever) and he ached to return home.
He ached to surround himself in the coffee that only his home could provide him with, the tech in workshop, but most important, he missed being surrounded by the tight heat of hisGod of Mischief. It was horrible being away from the other male, both for the entirely too amusing banter, wordfucking thing they did and how the other male's lean body was laid out pliant for him, the other's need for his touch so damn obvious.
He groaned softly and knocked his head against the desk repeatedly, now wasn't the time to think about fucking Loki, he needed to get back to his hotel room and start working on something that would be enough to get everyone off his back for another year or two. He doubted that he could be away from Loki for such a long time again and as he rose from the desk to gather his things, he vowed that next time he'd drag the God with him so that they both, especially him, would never have to go without each other's bodies.
Sliding on his jacket, he grabbed his bag and made his way towards the door, making sure that everything was in proper order before he stepped out and made his way to the elevator. As soon as he stepped into the elevator and the doors closed, he found himself resting his head against the clear glass wall of the elevator and sighing softly, his eyes closing in slight exhaustion. A loud ping made him open his eyes and he straightened himself up before the doors of the elevator could fully open. Once the doors opened, he stepped into the lobby and made his way to the exit, smiling when there was already a car waiting for him.
"Mr. Stark...your chariot awaits you," and with that he let out his first genuine laugh in hours, courtesy of Happy.
"Why thank you Mr. Hogan, I'm quite pleased that you managed to arrive here in a timely fashion this time."
"That was once sir and it is hardly my fault that you are absolute shit at giving directions that us 'non-geniuses' can understand."
"Well then, that means you should try to achieve the goal of reaching my level, no?" he felt the tension wash away from his body at the playful bantering that he engaged in with Happy as he slid into the car.
As the door shut behind him, he rested his head against the tinted windows and seemed to sink into the seat. He was seconds away from falling into a comfortable sleep when a vibration against his thigh made him jump just a bit. Regaining his normal breathing pattern and his composure, he reached into his pocket and pulled out his phone.
"Sir, I have a message for you from Master Loki and it's urgent. I do recommend that you plug in headphones for this particular message," JARVIS alerted him and Tony found himself missing the feeling of having JARVIS all around him as he reached for a pair of headphones.
He glanced up briefly and silently thanked Happy for automatically putting up the partition's window and giving him the privacy he needed. Plugging in the headphones and tapping a few keys on his phone, the sight he was greeted with made him once again silently thank the gods above for Happy and his instinctive perfection. Pressing play on the video message, he shifted a bit to get comfortable. The camera came into focus and he found his mouth watering immediately. The sight of Loki's lean, yet beautiful masculine body bared for him, cock hard and arching as the bastard winked and licked his lips sent a jolt of pleasure down Tony's spine and his mouth ran dry.
He finally drew his eyes away from the body that he remembered so vividly to glance at the object that he noticed out of the corner of his eyes. He watched as Loki eyed what he recognized as the vibrator he molded if the other was ever desperate enough for him and couldn't have him. The small area suddenly seemed hotter to Tony and he one handedly tugged off his jacket and undid his tie. He shuddered along with Loki as the other trailed a finger along the underside the toy, trailing that long lithe finger along the vein of the toy.
He barely registered the fact that he was palming the front of his pants, biting his lips to stifle the soft groans of pleasure that threatened to escape his lips. He gripped his clothed cock as he watched Loki get on hands and knees and damn, that sight alone was enough to get Tony far harder than he thoguht was humanly possible and his lips curled into a slight growl as he watched Loki swallow down that toy as if it were his cock, the images of Loki taking him deep in his throat, taking it all greedily was sending Tony's mind on a whirlwind of intense want and lust.
A soft knocking on the partition window was enough to make him pause the video, long enough to fix himself up, hiding his erection as best as he could before taking a deep breath and grabbing his stuff as the doors open. He grunted softly as he steeped out of the car, refusing to pay Happy's slightly smug grin any attention.
"I take it Mr. Laufeyson has sent you something to make these next couple days incredibly unbearable for you and your...friend?"
"I'm baffled at how is it that you can't say cock, yet you've seen me in and out of the cars you'v edriven with people all over me and hard-ons hard enough to cut cocaine?" he asked, chuckling softly when the other flushed just a bit. "Anyway...you would be right. The bastard. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm going up to my room to finish this video, wank, call my boyfriend, wank some more and then promptly pass out. Hopefully in that order. Have a good night, Happy."
He didn't wait for an answer before heading into the lavish hotel and making a beeline for the elevator. He shifted slightly as he waited for the elevator, his hardness pressing against the fabric of his boxer briefs and rubbing against his slacks. He bit his lip again to stifle a groan and let out an audible sigh as the elevator arrived, his sigh turning into a slight scowl when he realized that the elevator wouldn't be empty before he stepped inside and making his way over to a corner. Paying no attention to the people around him and knowing he had a long way to go before getting to a room (hey, don't fucking judge him, okay? he had a thing for heights), he leaned against the elevator wall and resumed watching the video.
Glancing around briefly, he lowered his gaze to the video and nearly choked on his own spit, instead coughing apologetically and clearing his throat before staring at the screen, wondering when Loki had managed to get a finger in himself. He watched as Loki prepped himself while coating the toy in his saliva, the angling of the camera giving him the perfect view of both activites and he shuddered slightly, shifting on his feet yet again as he felt the bite of pleasure coursing up and down his body.
Loki didn't take long to prepare himself and Tony swore it was one of the perks of being a God. However, he knew that Loki knew that one of the things that Tony going the most was watching him prepare himself for Tony's cock and was using that information to his advantage. The next few minutes were a blur to Tony, his attention focused primarily on Loki kneeling above the toy, his ass pressing against the tip before implaing himself on the toy. He took in the sight of the God, body curving perfectly and head thrown back as cries of his name left for pretty lips and ached to be buried deep in the God instead of the toy.