Hi Guys,

Sorry for practically forgetting about this story/not updating it. It's been two years since I started it and whilst I am not actually happy with it/doesn't really fit in with the Lovely Bones, I want to continue it so it can actually be completed.

This is my first piece of work on FanFiction and first piece of work that has never been a part of an essay/assignment/project outside of work and school…

I thank everyone for his or her criticism.

Alice in a hole: I can understand where you are coming from, and I'm sorry for not making it clear in the story but the sun was setting during the kidnapping (so whilst it wasn't dark, it wasn't broad daylight at the same time) He has had his eye on her for quite some time now, but I didn't think to include it… Choosing to start the story just before the kidnapping and from her point of view. There was no village guard; her curfew was solely from her parents. Hopefully this clears a few things up, and please keep in mind that I, as a writer, am not pleased with the piece of work as it needs a lot of improvement and that it is my first piece… Anyways, Thanks for the review!

Guest: Thank you! I am currently working on a few outlines trying to figure out how I want this story to pan out! :-)

Searching For Wonderland: Thank you SO much! I've been doubting my "skills" hence the whole writing block. But I feel as if this story needs a middle and end! ;-) I'm going to keep my doors and windows open, so this story may have a different ending… Though, I have no idea which path this story will take! Oops.

Dessi16: Thank you so much! I'll try and get on it right away! J

Charchi8987: Thank you so much! :D

Jaigross: Thank you for those kind words! This has stuck with me ever since I read this review. I wonder what Ava's perfect world will pan out to be… I'll be keeping my ideas open! :-)

Betsybugaboo: Thank you! I plan on continuing it, I just need to think of some more stuff and how to work my way around where I want this story to go. :-)