So...I've been thinking about revamping this fic and publishing it on my A03 for awhile now, and after the plentiful Sebastian and Ciel banter we've received in chapter 138, I finally feel inspired enough to start working on it.
I know where a lot of weak points in this version are, such as length and descriptions. What I'm wondering is if any of you readers have any suggestions. Are there any certain scenes you would like to see happen? If I like your suggestion, I'll probably find a way to incorporate it in! (But remember, their relationship here is platonic!) I'm also wanting to hear any criticisms of this versions as it will help make the new one better.
Heads up, I probably won't include the twin in this story. One, because we don't know our!Ciel's real name yet. And two, because I don't see how he'd really fit. I want the relationship between Ciel and Sebastian to be focal point, and we all know the clingy twin would just get in the way lol.
Thank you!