The journey of a mew mew

The rain started to pour down; washing the streets of today's stains, for every new day brings more. Here a young girl runs, tears streaming down her face, as she looks for a place to sleep. Rose red locks lying limp form the rain with eyes the color of chocolate staring out sad and broken, unseeing to the world around them, Blank and dead as the grave. With a school uniform on that was as wet as the rest of her.

'How did this happen' came a lonely thought from the girl as she sobs, whimpers and soft mews. Everything had been good, but then the new mew whose name was Berry Shirayuki. She was everything that the girl wanted to be popular, smart, charming, beautiful, and talented. Not to say that the girl had a bad life. It had been a normal life plus a few adventures along the way. Now it seemed that life had taken a nose dive and crashed.

'And she got everything that I worked for'

The girl who's name is/was Ichigo Momomiya. She is a mew mew; the very first one, plus the old leader of the Tokyo Mew Mews. The new leader is berry. After being kicked off the team, one thing leads to another. So now Ichigo is now a homeless person because her former parents had decided to adopt Berry and disowned ichigo plus forced out of the house being told to never come back.

So here was Ichigo running down the street keeping an eye out for shelter to get out of the rain. Or as much as she could because dealing with shock and looking for a place to sleep is kinda hard to do. She didn't even think about going to Masaya's house because he was out of town with his new girlfriend Mint of all people. Everything in her life that used to be stable collapsed around her, her job, her life, and now she guessed her usefulness.

Ichigo had even thought about going to kisshu and the aliens… but that went against her mew mew DNA. ' it seems that I have nowhere to go' she thought. As she looked around to gain her bearings, ichigo noticed that she had ran clear out of the city and into the forest that was just outside the city. As the path she was on started to fade away, Ichigo soon came across a small clearing that held a cave. At first she was reluctant to go into the cave as it was dark and faint strange music began to float out of the cave. (AN. The song is come little children). Thunder roaring and lightning flashes signaling to the rain to start pouring down with a new found ferocity convinced her that she did not want to get sick. So slowly stumbling towards the cave on wobbly legs, her legs failed her as so as she was inside. Collapsing into the welcoming darkness of oblivion, she sighed and wished to have a new meaning to live.

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