Hey everyone. So I believe that this story was good for my writing standards, but I think that it has the potential to be even better. There are so many talented writers on this site and I have decided that I enjoy reading the stories better then writing them. I feel like this story has the potential to be better and am wondering if anyone would like to, in a way, re-write it. Perhaps keep the same storyline and characters, but just broaden the story more. I would love to see what someone else could do with this story. If you're interested please leave a comment. Thanks!