A/N: Takes place during the chunin exams: after Neji puts down Hinata, also Naruto and Hinata have been secretly going out for YEARS, she in a brief moment of courage talked to him and they formed a friendship which has blossomed over the years to something else.
"Negji, why?" Naruto demanded...
"She was weak, she still kept getting up because of you! She couldn't see her place in fate's design, she is a failure, like you!" Negi spurt back still being restrained by the Jonin.
Naruto felt for a pulse on Hinata, finding it very weak and fading quickly... He screamed... "NO.. NO... NOOOOO..." before it became an animalistic HOWL...
It was if a bomb went off in the stadium, the sheer amount of HATE chakra and killing intent drove every single one of the gennin to the ground.. The chunin went to one knee.. The Jonin... Shivered shoke and tried to remain upright.. The Hokkage himself felt very nervous... "Oh no, I know that chakra... Dear Kami what have we done?... I didn't know she was that close to him.. I didn't know her cousin hated her that much... I DIDN'T KNOW so many things" was all he thought as he closed his eyes and prayed that his village didn't end that day.
Naruto's Mindscape
"HEAL HER!" Naruto screamed at the fox...
"Your throwing DEMANDS at me now boy?" Returned the fox... sounding bored and annoyed..
"HEAL HER!" Naruto screamed again... the fox looked at its jailer and saw something it had never seen before.. the boy was frantic..yes that goes without saying... but his eyes... they were something else... It had been around the world several times and knew a great many things... Those eyes, showed one emotion the fox had thought the most promising in humanity...
Madness... Total INSANITY... The fox smirked... "now it all makes since.. how he can be caring, to the very village that harmed him, how he wants to defend the people that want him dead, how he can bring others to his side and make them better, while still being a powerhouse.. HE'S FUCKING CRAZY... The village warped him and he made a mask... Now that mask has shattered.."
"Why should I help this feeble little girl?.. If it is her time then it is her time" said the fox
"Because I am TELLING YOU TO.. I can't do this ANYMORE... I can't be alone... do you want this place to be even worse then a sewer?" Naruto asked looking around...
"And I have one other thing!".. naruto said soberly with probably the coldest sounding voice he had ever taken on... So much so that the fox was intrigued... It sounded like the voice of his clanmates...
"Really? What is this other thing?" It asked... For the first time kind of interested...
"I am letting you out for a limited time if you do this." Naruto said frankly.
"Kit I have been out whenever you lose control, that's not that big a deal" replied the fox with a smirk...
"You misunderstand... Fix Hinata-chan... And you won't be out in my limited body... YOU will be OUT!" naruto stated..
the fox blinked a few times... "is he...wait... that's not possible... right?"
"What are you saying exactly?" said the fox.
"I am going to give you freedom for five minutes IN ALL YOUR glory, after you may use my eyes as yours and my other senses and talk to me at any time, that's got to be better then sitting here in the dark 24/7 isn't it?" Naruto says.
The fox looked at naruto carefully to see if he was lying, but other then the true insanity it saw in his eyes it couldn't see deception... "What's the catch?".. the fox asked... Actutally amused this human was trying to make a deal
"Your the spirit of chaos right?" naruto asked... seeing the fox nodding... "I want that rat bastard to pay with not only his LIFE BUT HIS SOUL.. I WANT NEJI HYUUGI soul to not EVEN BE RECOGNIZED BY KAMI IT'S SELF!" The last part was said with such venom and power the nine-tails couldn't believe it was a human that said it. "WOW they warped this one.." was all the fox thought..
"Kit?... I think we have a deal" the fox said smirking... extending part of a claw out of the cage which immediately began to emit electric shocks to it causing it pain..
"Deal".. naruto said shaking the claw then reaching up and tearing a fourth of the seal off!
Outside Mindscape:
The chakra was flying like crazy... It had grown so intense that the viewers of the battle couldn't even see the battle ground... the jonnin holding Negji couldn't move if they wanted to, it wasn't just the killer intent, it felt like the gates of hell just opened beside them... they were having a hard time staying conscious.. Then with a final BANG the chakra stopped.. the roof of the tower blew off.. and as the dust settled they saw something NONE of them wanted to see..
There was a prone Hinata lying on the ground with what seemed like a stream of VISIBLE red chakra wrapped around her... if one followed that stream one would see a 100 ft tall 9 tailed fox made of chakra...
"Negji hyuugi... you have committed a terrible crime against me and my mine, you are sentenced to hell...If you other ninja don't wish a similar fate I suggest you back away NOW!"
the fox bellowed... Almost at once the jonnen let go of neji and backed away.. they knew what they were looking at but... it was impossible... right?...
"I did only what I had to because she couldn't see that...".. Negji started but wasn't able to finish because the fox leaned down and ate him...
Hokkage box:
"Oh dear kami... the seal failed... It's free... Naruto I am so sorry, you paid with your life, maybe I can make it up to in the next one. My village... I hope that when we see eachother in the hearafter you don't hate me"... Thought the third..
Down at the arena:
the fox looked at everyone it's eyes evaluating everything... It looked at hinata-chan...(grr.. stupid brat... not chan)... looked at all the teams... It looked at every member of every team... "Hmm... so thats his team?... A fan girl obsessed with a runt, a runt that thinks he's an alpha and a sensei that lives in the past? .. seriously THIS is what it had to put with for it's container? No wonder he was deranged. ... ok 5 minutes is all it had... first off... PINKY... the fox swiveled it's head to the pink girl and said "Why do you hate my jailer?.. You have 5 seconds to answer before I end your life and your families as well"... Sakura jumped... and paled under it's power... " I don't... I mean I didn't really... It's he's so loud and annoying..." she trailed off... "I see... He cares for you as a close friend... perhaps it's a good idea to as they say "walk a mile in another's shoes".. A
tail lashes out shrinks and taps her on the forehead before her eyes fill with tears and she crumples to the ground...
The fox levels it's eyes to the third hokkage... "YOU ARE AN IDIOT... Do you know what I have had to heal this boy through?" asks the fox... "what do you mean kyuubi-sama?" he asks hoping the honorific will help it not destroy the village. "Not telling him... NOT EVEN GIVING A HINT... Does he even have an inheritance?... YOU ARE A FOOL FOR RELYING ON THESE BACKSTABBERS!... TELL HIM IMMEDIATELY.. and YES I will be giving him back to you!"
"ONE other thing..."... it crafty looked at the third... It's eye fell on danzo who instantly turned to ashes on the floor... "I CAN kill with a look, you village elders better remember that, I wonder if I should teach Naruto-KUN how to do it.." it said putting emphasis on the kun...
suddenly the chakra started imploding on itself... shrinking.. "AH well it seems our talk is done for now, all of you remember... DO NOT FUCK WITH ME" said the kyuubi's voice getting harder and harder to hear... when it was the size of a buss.. it opened it's mouth and spat out SOMETHING that looked to be human, once... it was missing arms and legs and twitching...
It continued to shrink untill the the only thing left was naruto with his arm around hinata holding her...
Medical nin ran to them, all three, from naruto they only found chakra fatigue,,, from Hinta strangely only minor injuries and a very odd.. chakra imbalance... The "thing" on the ground was another story... it was missing both of it's arms and most of it's legs and looked horrifying... as though it had been roasted on a spit... The only two defining characteristics were 1 the leaf headband that looked like it went through hell.. the other was when they pried it's eyes open... they were the bright white of the hyuugi clan... with bits of red running through them...The body was so completely gone they had no idea what to classify it as untill Hiyashi came in and look at it... "It's Negji"... was all he said before he left.
A/n: end of chapter 1, well there we are.. I always thought Naruto let Neji off a little easy, after all if your the mas...I mean JAILER of one of the most powerful demons in history.. A little smacking around for one who did such a beat down on someone that was OBVIOUSLY close to you and weaker than her opponent, well it never seemed right.. SOOOO I beefed it up a little :) But just you wait fox fans... There is far more to come... OH and Naruto is gonna shift all over the place.. Sweet and comforting, cruel and heartless..Before you flame... It's because his mask got broken and he's still trying to fix it, oh yeah... and cuz well... HE'S NUTS!.. Jay Ney.