Hey, first shot at writing a fanfic. So any constructive criticism would be nice thank! No pairings, there could be but so far it doesn't look like it. Not god like naruto but close to it. Inspired by Rise from the Shadow by vsizzel but with my own twist.

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto

"Tou-san! Kaa-san! I did it! I did it! Did you see that!" a girl about 8 years old cheered as sensed her chakra and attempted to use it. She had long blood red hair with a small tinge of blond at the tips, with bluish-violet eyes and had a round face. She was 3'1" (honestly don't know how tall an eight year old is) wearing a yellow shirt with Uzumaki symbol and combat pants.

"Great job, Narumi-chan!" cheered a man with spiky blond hair with to long bangs down the side of his face. He had cerulean blue eyes and an angular face. The symbol of most fangirls affection. He wore a white long sleeve shirt with dark sweatpants. Stood about 5'10". This was Minato Namikaze, Fourth Hokage of the Konohagakure. Also know as the Yellow Flash of Konoha. Presently, he was watching his daughter train. "You'll a great kunoichi in no time." said a redhead who just saw her daughter call out chakra. Said redhead stands about 5'7", who's hair was blood red hair and had a angelic face. She wore a yellow hair clip in her hair, and wore a simple red shirt and sweatpants. She had the body that women die for and men have instant nosebleeds. With long slender arms and legs honed thru training and impressive bust ranging C-cup to D-cup. This was Kushina Uzumaki Namikaze, wife of Minato Namikaze and Konoha's Red Death.

"Thanks mom! I can't wait until I become a great kunoichi like you!" Narumi replied with a smile. Both Minato and Kushina smiled at the girl's energy and attitude.

In the distance stood a boy who was the same age as Narumi. He had wild spiky blond hair that defied gravity, sapphire blue eyes and similar round face. Stood about 3'5" and was wearing a dark gray shirt with black sweatpants. He looked normal but, with one exception. He had three whisker marks on each of his face. His name was Naruto Namikaze, son of Minato Namikaze and Kushina Uzumaki Namikaze and older twin of Narumi Namikaze.

Presently Naruto was glaring at the tender family scene that was happening at the family's private training ground. He sighed and walked away to his room where he did his own training. When Naruto got to his room, he laid down on his bed and remembered what happen a long time ago that made to be what he is.

FLASHBACK 4 YEARS AGO

"Hey tou-san can you teach how to do cool ninja stuff!" asked a eager Naruto who was hoping he would say yes.

"Sorry Naruto, I can't. I have to teach Narumi." replied Minato, Naruto frowned at that.

"Why can't you teach us both at the same time!" argued Naruto ignoring the smug look his sister was giving him.

"Sorry Naruto but I don't have the time to do that." Naruto was about to continue arguing until his mother spoke.

"Naruto go to your room and don't ask your father again. He will teach you when he feels that you are ready." said Kushina in a demanding tone. Not wanting to argue with his mother, looked at the ground and walked to his room.

"Why can't I learn how to be a shin obi but Narumi can? How come she gets everything." Naruto said out loud to himself when he reached his room and closed the door.

Naruto would be considered a prodigy; if any would pay attention to him. He was smart beyond reason, and had skills to learn at an abnormal rate. If anyone ever really payed any real attention to him, they would compare him to Itachi Uchiha. So, it didn't take him long to figure out that his family favored his sister more than him, seeing as she got mostly everything she wanted. He also notice the villagers treated her like a hero. While him, the pariah of the village.

Naruto got barely anything, even on his birthday. He would maybe get one or two gifts while Narumi got plenty. When he would walk in the village alone, he would receive cold glares from the villagers. His sister also had a lot of friends; every kid would try to get to know her. While he didn't have any friends, they would avoid him.

Naruto knows that his sister has the Kyuubi's Yin chakra and he has the Kyuubi's Yang chakra. It didn't make any sense to him why they would treat him any different than him. But Naruto assumes that they think that because he has the Yang chakra that he would be corrupt by its evil power. That made some sense to him as he thought about it but his parents? Just because she made contact with the Kyuubi when she was three that they could favor him over him. He decided to close his eyes and get some rest.

Mindscape

Naruto suddenly woke up to see that he was in a sewer and some giant gate was in front of him with a seal. Not knowing where he was he called "Hey! Anyone there?" His response was a ferocious roar from the other side of gate, scaring him.

"Who dares to disturb my slumber!" roared a giant beast, which Naruto could make out as a fox with redish-orange fur and nine lone tails. He just stood there too scared and shocked to do anything. The fox looked down and saw Naruto and started to chuckle.

"So my jailor finally graces me with his presence." said the fox. Naruto got out of his shock and looked at the fox with fear written on his face.

"Y-y-you're the Kyuubi." Naruto stuttered out, who shakily pointed at the giant fox. The Kyuubi nodded its head. "A-a-are you going to kill me?" The Kyuubi chuckled and shook its head and look at him.

"If I wasn't in this cage I would but you interest me. I looked at your memories and I must say this village is filled with idiots." The Kyuubi said, and Naruto was confused and scared slightly. He tilted his head to show that he was confused. The Kyuubi saw this and continued. " Your father, who did the sealing, spilt my power into you and your sister and sealed it. This is also why he is still alive instead in Shinigami's stomach. Seeing that Shinigami didn't seal all of me into one of you, decided to spilt my power. But he probably lost about a fourth of his life." Naruto nodded showing that he understood it and is taking the information in slowly.

"Your father is training your sister early because he thinks my Yin chakra is trying to get out. Which is true but he should be training you more ." said Kyuubi. Naruto looked at the Kyuubi in confusion at the part. "Why I do agree that he should be training me also and not just her but why me more?" Naruto asked.

"My Yin chakra is... calmer than my Yang chakra would be the best way to put it. Since I'm the Yang chakra, I am much hard to control. And I will make more of an attempt to break out than my Yin chakra." Naruto nodded that he understoodbut didn't understand the difference between the Yin and Yang chakras. "Is there a difference between them? Except what you said though." asked Naruto

"Yes there is. Both chakra's give a healing ability, yours is stronger than your sister's. You will have huge chakra reserves but horrible control. Your sister will still have larger reserves than most shinobi but have much better control over her chakra. Now this would be the case if you both were the same but luckily this isn't case since your a so called genius. Am I right?" stated the Kyuubi. Naruto slowly nodded understanding what the Kyuubi said. "But why do the villagers treat me differently than Narumi?" asked Naruto.

"Many people died during my attack on your village, many lost family, friends, and loved ones. The villagers assumes since that you contain my Yang chakra, they think you contain my evil spirit. So when they see you, it reminds of their pain of the people they lost. They think you are the Kyuubi and that is why they hate you boy."

Naruto nodded sadly understanding what the Kyuubi was telling him and looked at the ground sadly, believing that the villagers were right. The Kyuubi saw this and said "Boy, do not think you are ME. You are my jailor and I your prisoner. As much as I hate too say it, you are their guardian from me. Even if I was ripped from your mother by that bastard." the Kyuubi mumbled the last part. Naruto heard that last part. "Who are you talking about?" asked Naruto.

"It doesn't matter, right now. I have offer for you though."

"What offer?"

"I'll open a link so we can communicate without going into your mindscape."

"Why would you do that?"

"To assist you in your training. You're waking up from your nap right now, so prepare because I will not have a weak container." Naruto nodded happy to train even if his reasons are selfish. Naruto faded out of his mindscape and woke up in his bed.

FLASHBACK END

Throughout the years, Naruto has and still has been training till he drops everyday. Everyday he would train himself until exhaustion and couldn't move. He usually train in his room or in a secret training ground where he couldn't be caught.

Since, he just was a child, he couldn't lift weights or would stun his growth. So Kyuubi set up a routine for him to follow everyday. Naruto work mostly on his endurance and did exercises like push-ups, sit-ups, and pull-ups. He also focused on his chakra control since he had really high reserves which currently at mid chunin to high chunin.

He would do his daily routine which consisted of one hundred and fifty push-ups followed by one hundred and fifty sit-ups. It usually took him an hour and a half to complete, then take a small break and then do same with pull-ups and crunches this also took about an hour and a half. After that he would run around the village five times, which took two and a half hours, and final spend three hours focus on his chakra control and his sensor ability that he discovered three months before he turned seven. He did this everyday and never took any shortcuts.

Eventually he grew interested in seals and began to read about fuinjutsu, he assumed it ran in the family seeing that his father and mother were seal masters. He started to basic seals like the storage seal. He figured out how to make a basic storage from scratch, but during his study he came across a seal that caught his attention. It was called a gravity seal, which applies extra gravity on you making it harder to move but when you released it you became faster. Naruto knew this would help his training his greatly, but it would stunt his growth and it could be harmful to his body. So he continued to look until he came upon a the resistance seal. Similar to the gravity seal but instead of increasing gravity, it increase the resistance of every movement. So with the help with the Kyuubi he figure out how to apply to himself and to work it.

During his training he went to the library, like the Kyuubi told him, to read some books or scrolls on jutsu, tactics, history, and chakra control and affinity. Impressed by the boy's determination and drive to become stronger and survive, on his seventh birthday he taught him the Kage bushin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Jutsu) and told him the secret of it, how when a clone dispels the user receive all its information and experience. Naruto was surprised on how useful the Kage bushin no Jutsu was and how it could greatly boost his training.

Even with all this good, the bad out weighed it. As time went on, the villagers went from cold glares to beats here and there. Once every few weeks, a crowd would corner Naruto and beat him senseless. Nothing to crazy happened because he still was the son of their beloved Yondaime but they still put him in his place. At first, he fought back but quickly realized it just made it worse. So now he just lets them beat him even thought it didn't really hurt him at all since they were just civilian punches.

The children at Naruto's age wouldn't talk or hang out with him; instead they would all flaunt over Narumi or give him cold glares. People only tried to be his friend so they could get close to her. At the academy, he was ignored. It didn't bother Naruto since he was on his own since the beginning.

There were a few people that befriended him. Them being Ibiki Morino, Anko Mitarashi, Yugao Uzuki, Hayate Gekko, Izumo Kamizuki, Kotetsu Hagane, Itachi Uchiha and Mikoto Uchiha. Ibiki, Anko, Yugao, Hayate, Izumo, and Kotetsu helped Naruto a couple times when the villagers beat him, after he became friends but decide he stay a safe distance away from them so that the villagers wouldn't hurt them too.

Itachi found him in the middle of his training and watched in silence. He was impressed by his determination and hard work and talked to him. He asked why Naruto was training by himself and not with his family. Naruto gave a simple answer "I am nothing to them, only extra baggage." Itachi was shocked but understood what he meant, as he often had seen Naruto walking behind his family with an expressionless face. After that Itachi often visited Naruto as much as he could and help Naruto with his training, seeing Naruto the same as him. Itachi even saved from an assassination by Iwa missing-nin.

FLASHBACK

Naruto had just discovered that he was a sensor barely a month ago and was working with Itachi to increase its range and strength. Right now, his range without focusing is ten yards, he just finished his routine and was about to start on training his sensor ability. Nearby him was a chunin Iwa missing-nin, glaring hatefully at the son of his nation's greatest enemy. He became a missing-nin when he failed at an assassination on a minor lord and was spotted. He greatly missed his home but brought dishonor to it. So he thought if he brought the head of the Yellow Flashes's son, he would be given a hero's welcome.

As he slowly came behind the boy to slit his throat, he had no idea he was spotted by Naruto. Naruto sensed his assassin when began to broaden his range to see if Itachi was near he found him thirty yards away. Naruto remained calm and acted like he didn't know he was there but was getting ready to cast a jutsu that Itachi showed him a few days ago. Just as the would be assassin was no more than ten yards away, Naruto turned around and yelled "Katon: Gokakyu no Jutsu!" (Fire release: Great Fire ball Jutsu)He shot a fire ball about fifteen yards in diameter at the Iwa missing-nin. This was the scene Itachi came to, Naruto shooting a large fireball at a Iwa nin who barely got out of the way but suffer burns on his arms and torso. Itachi went into ANBU mode and kill the missing-nin with one stroke. Once he confirmed the man's death, he turn to Naruto to check if he was injured. "Naruto, are you okay? Are you hurt?" Itachi asked with concern edged in his emotionless face. "Yes, I'm ok. Thank you. Who was that ninja?" asked Naruto who relived that Itachi saved him.

"A missing-nin from Iwa, I assume he was here for you. I will inform Hokag-"

"No. Don't."

Itachi looked at him concern and shock." Naruto, we must tell Hokage-sama of this so he can have ANBU protect you. You do understand what just happened."

"Remember, I am nothing more than extra baggage. Please don't tell, if you do they won't let leave the house and I won't be able to train." Naruto pleaded with the man who he looked up to like a older brother.

Itachi sighed, Naruto was right. On both points, sadly. He looked at kid in front of him who he saw as little brother."Fine. I won't tell Hokage-sama or anyone else." he pause for a moment and gave him a small smile " Good job with jutsu, ototo. I'm proud of you."

Naruto to looked at with tears in his eyes and hugged him and said "Thank you, onisan."

FLASHBACK END

Since the attack he push Naruto harder than before to make sure he is ready. Itachi tested for his elemental affinity and was shocked when he found that Naruto had not one, not two but three. Naruto was just as shocked because he read that most only had one and two was rare but three? Naruto had a Wind, Water, and Fire affinity, The Kyuubi told Naruto that he had a Fire because of him and the others were from his parents. Naruto pondered that for a second and thought neither his father or mother and a wind affinity but decided not to look a gift in the horse mouth. Itachi, when discovered that his affinities he taught Naruto two jutsus: Futon: Reppusho (Wind release: Gale Palm) and Suiton: Mizurappa (Water release: Raging Waves).

Mikoto Uchiha saw Naruto walking around Konoha alone one day. She asked why he wasn't with his parents but, she received the same answer as Itachi. Mikoto was furious and was about to march over to the Namikaze estate and give them both a piece of her mind. Naruto told it didn't matter but she wasn't listening and dragged him with her to the estate. He remembered what happen then. He still shudders just thinking about it.

FLASHBACK 1YEAR AGO

Mikoto charged into the Namikaze estate dragging Naruto with her, who shaking in fear at the rage and fury Mikoto had in her and was glad he wasn't on the receiving end of it.

"Kushina Namikaze! Come out here Now!" yelled an enraged Mikoto. Moments later Kushina and Minato came to the front door to find Mikoto holding their son. Naruto at this moment would rather wrestle the Kyuubi than face her. The Kyuubi could only nod in agreement.

"Mikoto, why are you here and why is Naruto with you?" asked a confused Kushina, she thought that Naruto was in his room.

"I'm here because I found your son walking around Konoha alone!" replied Mikoto loudly.

"Really! Oh! Thanks Mikoto-chan for finding my we will take it from here, thank you." Said Minato telling Naruto to go to his room, which he did. Though Minato stayed back so he can hear the rest of the conversation since Mikoto didn't go home yet.

"Did you even know that he was outside?" asked Mikoto still pretty angry.

"No but I thank you again for finding him." replied Kushina. Mikoto narrowed her eyes and in the corner of her eyes, she saw Narumi was training in the family training ground. This brought a question that she wanted to ask them.

"Why is Narumi training to be a ninja early while Naruto is sent to his room."

"We decide to train her early."

"And why not Naruto?", Mikoto's voice getting colder by the second, which was starting to scare Kushina and Minato.

"That's because Narumi accessed the Kyuubi sealed in her early and she needs to know how to control it, we will start teaching Naruto when he is in the academy." Mikoto stood there glaring there with hot-white fury at the two."I understand. Sorry for asking a stupid question Namikaze-san." Minato and Kushina flinch at the sudden change in their friend but just tossed it aside thinking it wasn't anything serious. Mikoto turned around and walked away too mad to say goodbye.

FLASHBACK END

After that, Mikoto would always help him as best as she could. Sometimes cooking him lunch or giving him advice on his training. She tried to get Sasuke to befriend him but to her disappointment he adopted his father personality at a very early age, which was being arrogant to the max. Sasuke would state that Naruto wasn't worth his time or that the Uchiha are the best.

As time went his relation with his family became worse. As his parents trained his sister in the family styles and jutsu, Naruto would watch in the background always hoping for any attention. When they went out he would suggest something, while his sister would suggest something else, and too Naruto's disappointment they always chose whatever Narumi would suggest. After awhile of hoping and watching he gave up and trained even harder to show them that he didn't need them. He stayed in his room not bothering to go out and talk with his family. The only time he saw them during the day would be at dinner but even then stay silent, he would just finish his food as fast as he could , wash his own dishes and go to his room and train.

Whenever they go out on walks around the village he would always stay a few feet back from the rest of the family while Narumi would usually lead. He avoid attention as much as possible by being quiet or staying in corners where no one would see him. During parties he would only be there for an hour or so until he got tired and left. Narumi would sometimes ask him to play with her but always declined and said he was busy.

On his free time, Naruto would usual read books about the shinobi wars, jutsu theory, seals or anything ninja related. He also painted and drew on his free time. When his parents weren't near he would try on improving his fuinjutsu, in hopes that he could surpass his parents since they were seal masters.

Naruto finished the first part of his daily routine. He took a short break, walked to his desk and stared outside wondering why he didn't just run. The rational part of him told him that he would be hunted down and brought back and put under surveillance. All he do is wait till became a chunin and moved out and get away from this house. Naruto sighed,'Another day in paradise.' he thought. Then he look at the calendar. Today was Oct. 8, only two days till his and Narumi's Birthday.

Hoped you enjoyed it. Please review. Gonna try to update every few days or so.