This story is one I've been thinking about writing for a while. Out of a number of plot bunnies I've thought of, this is the one that a friend of mine liked best. The idea behind this story is a bloodline I've been thinking about for a long time. I wanted to create a powerful eye bloodline that actually had something to do with sight. I'll be publishing a second chapter in a day or two containing a description of this Naruto, his bloodline, and some of his primary techniques.

The gist of the Soragan is that it allows the user to get a birds eye view of the situation. Of course, in comparison with the Sharingan and Rinnegan, that isn't too much help. So, I gave it a couple unique properties and a huge level of elemental control. The complete description will be coming in a bit, but, all and all, I think I gave it the ability to compete with the Rinnegan.

Naruto does not have the Kyuubi sealed in him, and probably won't for most of my stories. In this one, its his sister. His parents are alive, and he left Konoha at age 8. A bit unrealistic, but Kakashi was a chunin at 6 and Itachi was an ANBU captain at only 13, so I think that Naruto, with a bloodline this strong and genius level intellect, could escape, especially if he's living with the Kage, who ignores him for the most part.

By the way, Naruto has received no formal ninja training. He managed to get ahold of a Rasengan scroll, but that was the only technique he formally learned from Konoha. He never even learned the Clone, Replacement, or Transformation techniques.

Check my profile for a list of stories I think I'll be writing and putting up for a while. I'll be setting that up in a bit.

Chapter 1

"Get out of here! Run! He can't move from this spot!" Kakashi ordered from the water prison. Zabuza smirked as he formed clones from the surrounding water with a one handed seal.

"Sure, go ahead, run. Just leave the bridge builder behind and I'll let you go."

"Like hell!" A girl with light red hair shouted. "I'm not going anywhere! Let Kakashi go, or else!"

"Listen to me, Kasumi!" Kakashi shouted.

"You think a little brat like-?" Zabuza's retort was cut off by the sudden appearance of a blonde boy and girl.

"That is Zabuza, right?" The girl asked.

The boy nodded. "Yeah, this is him, Yugito." The boy turned to look at Zabuza directly, ignoring the Konoha genin and the bridgebuilder. Zabuza saw his eyes and froze momentarily. They were perfect mirror images of the sky, minus the sun.

"Zabuza Momochi? We are here to collect that sword on behalf of the Kiri Rebellion. You can come with us to Kiri, or try to fight us and die." Mei Terumi, the resistance leader, had already sent numerous envoys to Zabuza, so he doubted that the man would come quietly.

"HA!" Zabuza laughed. "You think a couple of no name brats like the two of you can do a thing to me?"

"I take it you're not surrendering?" The boy asked, not bothering to correct his ignorance.

"Like hell! The only way I'd be going back is if I'd be made Mizukage!"

Naruto held out a hand to his side. "Last chance, Zabuza."

The swordsman laughed. "Just try it, brat!"

"With pleasure." Naruto smirked. A sphere of spiraling chakra formed in his palm. "Suiton! Enkai Yari!" (Water Style: Ocean Spear) He called out, causing a spear of water to erupt from the water beneath Zabuza, who leapt out of the way, before letting out a yelp as wind blades from above tore into his arm. The damage was mostly superficial, as he had already begun to avoid it.

"You little brat!" Zabuza roared as he raised his blade into a ready position, only to curse as another blast of wind exploded from the sky, nearly hitting him. The brat could do powerful techniques without handseals! He dodged back and forth, narrowly avoiding the wind blasts, not realizing that the blasts were herding him towards the shore. He avoided one last blast, before every instinct screamed for him to move. He brought his blade up, using the broad flat of the weapon to block Naruto's jutsu.

"Rasengan!" Naruto called with a smirk. He'd always enjoyed showing off his superiority with the Fourth Hokage's signature jutsu to Konoha ninja. Zabuza cursed as the sphere ground into his blade. The rapidly spinning sphere snapped off most of the blade, sending the half he wasn't holding flying away. Zabuza used the distraction to throw himself backwards, narrowly dodging more blasts of wind and the weakened Rasengan. He slapped one hand onto a seal on the blade, releasing a large amount of blood. The blade rapidly regrew.

"This is your last chance, Zabuza." Naruto informed the man. "Come with us, or I will kill you."

"Fuck you, you little shit! You broke my blade!" His hands flashed through hand seals. "Suiton: Suiryuudan!" (Water Style: Water Dragon Bullet)

Naruto smirked again and raised a hand. This was kind of a pain to pull off, but it would show the man just how outclassed he was. "Suiton: Kai." (Water Style: Release) The jutsu dispersed into particles of water, much to the shock of Zabuza. "Raiton: Yaiba!" (Lightning Style: Sword) Naruto called, his arm suddenly wreathed in crackling lightning chakra that extended a full foot past his knife hand.

Zabuza didn't even get a chance to react as Naruto lunged forward, his arm extended. The blade of lightning chakra ripped a hole in Zabuza's gut, piercing all the way through until his palm was flat against the man's abdomen, having opened enough not to be touching the hole. "Rikou." (Discharge) Naruto hissed.

Suddenly, the lightning chakra seemed to pulse and vanish, heralding an earth-shattering scream from the taller man, who's nerves seemed to explode. Naruto's eyes were cold as pressed two fingers to the convulsing man's chest, right above his heart. "Fuuton: Kazekawa." (Wind Style: Wind Stream) A beam of wind ripped a second hole in Zabuza, destroying his heart.

Yugito pounced onto the body, sealing it and the sword into a scroll. "We got it, Naruto. The war'll be over in a couple of weeks." She jumped back to land and turned back to wait for him.

Naruto nodded and moved to follow, only to be stopped by the voice of Kasumi. "Naruto? That's you, isn't it, brother?"

Naruto didn't even bother turning to look at her. "Hello, Kasumi. Goodbye, Kasumi." He made to leave again, only to be stopped again.

"Nii-san, please! Come home! Mom and Dad are sorry! We all miss you!"

Naruto let out an emotionless laugh. "Like hell."

Naruto's attitude set off a nerve in the strawberry-blonde girl. She'd spent years worrying about him, and he didn't care? "Then I'll knock you out and make you come home!" Her hand came out and a sphere of spiraling chakra formed. She dashed towards him.

Naruto's eyes flashed in anger, visible despite their current state. His own Rasengan formed, his spinning much faster. He struck her sphere with his own. It was obvious who the stronger of the two was as Kasumi was forced to retreat.

"Pathetic." Naruto spat. "Is that the best you can do?"

Kasumi growled before making hand seals. "Katon: Gokakyu!" (Fire Style: Grand Fireball) She breathed out a huge ball of fire.

Naruto snorted. "Suiton: Suigeki." (Water Style: Water Strike) A bolt of water erupted from the air before him, punching through her fireball and slamming into her gut with the force of a sledgehammer. She doubled over, crying out in pain.

Her male teammate moved to retaliate, only to freeze from an inarticulate scream of rage from the trees. "You killed Zabuza!" A voice shrieked. "I'll kill you! Hyoton: Hyoryuudan!" (Ice Style: Ice Dragon Bullet) A dragon formed of ice exploded from the trees, shooting towards Naruto. He began to turn to face it, only for Yugito to jump in front of him. "I won't let you touch Naruto! Katon: Gokakyu!" (Fire Style: Grand Fireball) The normally C-rank jutsu was a dark purple and slammed into the dragon, burning it away with ease.

The ice user, who'd leapt out of the trees, was shocked at their jutsu having been so easily countered. Yugito wasn't finished, and dragged her hand, held in a claw down. "Oniton: Kiriorosu!" (Demon Style: Slash Downward) Blades of purple energy erupted from each nail, slashing through the air.

The ice user cursed and threw themselves out of the way, their eyes widening as the chakra blades ripped through the trees. "Hyoton: Makyo Hyosho!" (Ice Style: Demonic Ice Mirrors) They called, summoning panes of water that froze into ice. The mirrors were in a dome that encompassed both Naruto and Yugito. The ice ninja tried to touch a mirror, only to throw themselves out of the dome as Yugito's eyes shifted, becoming purple and slitted. "Nekomata Endan!" (Forked Cat Flame Bullet) She roared. This fireball was enormous and consumed all of the mirrors in front of her, burning them into nothingness. The breaking of most of the mirrors ended the jutsu. Yugito's body was shrouded in dark purple chakra now.

The ice user began to panic, seeing Yugito's chakra wreathed form. They formed something like one hundred hand seals with incredible speed, before throwing their hands out, for what was obviously their ultimate jutsu. "Hyoton: Hyouki!" (Ice Style: Ice Age) What appeared to be a glacier exploded from thin air, growing and expanding towards the catlike kunoichi and Naruto.

Yugito's eyes widened, before they closed briefly. When she opened them again, her whole body seemed to shudder, before growing into a monstrous form: A two-tailed cat formed entirely of dark purple fire. Motes of dark energy began to gather in front of the cat's mouth, forming a sphere, which was promptly swallowed, making the cat expand almost comedically. "Oniton: Nibiko Imari!" (Demon Style: Two Tailed Menacing Ball) She roared, unleashing a colossal beam of energy that annihilated the ice and a half-mile of forest. There wasn't even ash left of the ice user, or the ground they'd been standing on.

Naruto glanced over at Kasumi, and was mildly surprised to see that she'd leapt in front of her teammates. She was wrapped in blood-red dark power, and had formed a sphere of that energy around her teammates to protect them from the blast wave's edge. Oniton: Nibiko Tate (Demon Style: Two Tailed Shield), was the name of the technique. One of the most basic jinchuriki techniques, but one that was quite useful.

"Impressive." Naruto addressed his sister, who was now crouched on all fours, the sphere splitting in half and shrinking until it became two tails. "Controlling two tails like that. For a pampered princess, anyway."

Kasumi's voice was overlaid with a dark tone as she spoke. "You're coming home with me, nii-san, like it or not!" She roared, hurling herself forward, a red rasengan forming in her palm.

Naruto just shook his head. "Ah, I see. You're not controlling it. Just giving it a goal and a bit of basic guidance. Disappointing." His hand came back, held just above waist level. A quiet screeching sound could be heard as a white rasengan with four small blades extending around the circumference of the sphere formed.

"Rasengan!" Kasumi cried.

"Fuuton: Rasengan!" (Wind Style: Rasengan) Naruto declared as he slammed his Rasengan into that of the demon-induced Kasumi, who shrieked as his expanded, consuming her hand to the wrist. She threw herself back, clutching at her bleeding forearm and hissing like a wounded fox. Her hand was gone, but was reforming. Naruto mentally shook his head. The fox's regenerative powers were impressive.

Naruto raised his hand, another Rasengan forming. However, Kakashi stepped up. "I'm sorry for everything that happened to you, but I can't let you harm my student." He spoke softly.

"I won't let her go on a rampage, and not even the great Copy Nin Kakashi can stop a three tailed demon alone, especially when he's just lost to one of the seven swordsmen of the mist. Isn't that right, Uncle Kakashi?" Naruto spat the last words out like a curse. Their parents had treated Kakashi as their honorary uncle, but he'd been just as bad towards Naruto.

Kakashi shook his head, his hand held towards the ground. "You can't kill her. I won't allow it! Raiton: Raikiri!" (Lightning Style: Lightning Cutter) His hand was engulfed in lightning. Naruto just shook his head as Kakashi charged. He knew full well that it was mostly a bluff. The man was fairly low on chakra, and supposedly had a thousand jutsu to call upon. He was just trying to get Naruto to run from the infamous jutsu.

"You're no match for me, Kakashi. Suiton: Junsai." (Water Style: Water Shield) Kakashi's lunge was interrupted by a wall of water erupting from thin air. He tried to just charge through it, planning to use the Raikiri to cut through it, but was shocked when it formed to his thrust, not allowing him to move any further. It didn't react at all to the presence of the condensed lightning chakra. The jutsu was specifically designed to act as a wall, preventing movement through it.

Suddenly, Naruto's eyes widened. The Junsai was dispersed, even as a blast of wind slammed into Kakashi, snuffing out the lightning jutsu and sending him flying behind his team. "Get behind me, Yugito!" Naruto ordered.

Somehow, even behind the wall of water, he'd seen the motes of energy forming a sphere in front of the now-3-tailed Kasumi, her skin beginning to tear away from the power of the chakra, which was several shades darker than the earlier cloak.

"Can you hear me now, Kyuubi no Kitsune?" Naruto asked as he released the Rasengan. He took the answering growl from the enraged Kasumi to be a yes. "I'll tell you now. You will not touch me with that jutsu, and your host cannot currently survive the power it would take to beat my next shield. Know this and remember: Stronger demons than you have been subdued by these eyes of mine." Even as the Imari began to take shape, Kasumi's, or, rather, the Kyuubi's eyes widened. Half-remembered partial memories from before her creation were flashing through her mind and vanishing just as quickly.

"Taiyou Soragan." (Solar Soragan) Naruto spoke aloud, his voice filled with power. In his eyes, the mirrors of the sky were made complete by the addition of the sun. Naruto's hands came together, even as his eyes released a pulse of power that matched that released by the formation of the Imari. "Gunbi no Susanoo." (Armaments of Susanoo) Naruto invoked, pulling his hands apart, even as Kasumi's mouth opened to swallow the Imari. A rift in the air followed the path of his hands, even as the air behind him swirled and changed. Kasumi's body began to expand, even as another mirror of the sky formed behind Naruto, like a wall. Within this wall hovered a number of different weapons, each of them clearly not normal. At the base of the wall was an ocean.

Kasumi's body had almost fully consumed the Imari and was getting ready to discharge it, even as Naruto called out the name of his selected tool. "Tate no Suijin." (Shield of the Water God) His hands moved in a wide, circular motion, even as the ocean behind him emerged from the wall, tendrils of water emerging from it.

"Sanbiko Imari!" (Three Tailed Menacing Ball) The Kyuubi roared through Kasumi's mouth, unleashing the energy it had amassed, even as Naruto's shield reached completion. As it did, the demon realized that, as much as it hurt its pride, Naruto had spoken the truth. It would take almost twice as much power to pierce this barrier. It wasn't more than an inch or two thick, yet there was the depth of an ocean between each side of the barrier. The Imari struck the barrier, causing barely a ripple.

Before the Kyuubi could do anything else, Naruto's hand came up, the shield already dispersing back into the wall. A Rasengan was fully formed already, and Naruto invoked his next attack. "Rasenhappa." (Spiraling Explosive Blast) A beam of energy erupted from the side of the Rasengan, striking it in the side. The concentrated energy broke the stage 1 chakra cloak, hitting Kasumi and knocking her back. Naruto drew his hand back as if to throw something, and a spear detached itself from the wall, appearing in his hand.

Naruto spoke the final words that Kasumi would hear in this fight, "Sanfuu Yari." (Three Winds Spear), before throwing the glowing white spear of wind. The spear shot forward incredibly fast, even as a pair of spears formed some distance above him, at opposite angles. Each struck simultaneously at the exact same point, tearing through the chakra and into Kasumi's arm, leaving an asterisk-shaped mark. Kasumi was knocked out as the fox chakra receded from her system.

Naruto smirked at the two remaining dumbfounded Konohan ninja and the bridgebuilder, before grabbing Yugito's shoulder and speaking two words. "Fukumi Sori." (Atmosphere Warp) The air rippled and the two were gone, leaving only a gentle breeze.

Jutsu Listing

All Japanese are from freedict . com

In order of appearance:

Suiton: Enkai Yari (Water Style: Ocean Spear): B-rank – Offensive – Mid Range – Elemental Ninjutsu: This water jutsu, created by Naruto, creates jets of water that shoot out of a nearby body of water towards the target.

Rasengan (Spiraling Sphere): A-rank – Offensive – Melee Range – Ninjutsu: This technique is the original creation of the Fourth Hokage, the result of reaching the highest level of shape manipulation of chakra. It creates a powerful sphere of spiraling chakra that expands upon contact, inflicting massive damage that drills through an opponent and sends them flying away. Naruto's mastery of this technique allows him to generate one hundred rotations within the sphere, rather than the dozen used by the Fourth Hokage.

Suiton: Suiryuudan (Water Style: Water Dragon Bullet): B-rank – Offensive – All Ranges – Elemental Ninjutsu: This technique creates a dragon shaped blast of water that shoots towards the target.

Suiton: Kai (Water Style: Release): N/A Rank – Elemental Chakra Control – Close Range – Chakra Control: This technique that Naruto developed can only be used by a ninja with elemental chakra control that both vastly exceeds that of their opponent as is of the same chakra type. The user can then take control of and dispel a used jutsu. This cannot even be attempted without the ability to interface with external chakra.

Raiton: Yaiba (Lightning Style: Sword): S-rank – Offensive – Melee Range – Elemental Nintaijutsu: Developed spontaneously by Naruto to pierce the Raikage's Raiton: Yoroi. The user floods their limb with an enormous amount of Raiton chakra, flooding the synapses in the same manner as the Raiton: Yoroi, allowing an incredible boost to speed and strength for the user's limb that can even propel the user's body. The chakra creates an aura of electricity around the arm, extending no more than an inch from most of the arm, but extending more than a foot from the fingertips. It allows the user to block almost any attack, functioning almost as effectively as a shield, but the piercing power it grants makes it even more effective as a weapon. On contact, the energy can be discharged with the command Rikou (Discharge). The result is almost complete destruction of the target's nervous system, obliterating the target's electrical impulses.

Fuuton: Kazekawa (Wind Style: Wind Stream): A-rank – Offensive – All Ranges – Elemental Ninjutsu: This wind technique, developed by Naruto, creates a thin beam of wind blades that travel along a straight path and cut through anything in their way.

Katon: Gokakyu (Fire Style: Grand Fireball): C-rank – Offensive – Close Range – Elemental Ninjutsu: This fire technique is one a rather popular fire jutsu that is useful due to its power and ability to be shaped by the user. The chakra requirements are slightly above what most genin are capable of producing.

Suiton: Suigeki (Water Style: Water Strike): C-rank – Offensive – Mid Range – Elemental Ninjutsu: This water technique was developed by Naruto, along with his other techniques. Effectively, a small blast of water designed to counter fire techniques or inflict damage with minor water attacks. However, with his level of water chakra control, it is easily on par with most B-rank jutsu.

Hyoton: Hyoryuudan (Ice Style: Ice Dragon Bullet): A-rank – Offensive – All Ranges – Elemental Ninjutsu: This ice technique creates a dragon shaped blast of ice. As a sub-elemental jutsu, it is stronger than most normal ninjutsu of the same level.

Oniton: Kiriorosu (Demon Style: Slash Downward): A-rank – Offensive – Melee-Mid Range –Ninjutsu: This technique is used by channeling demonic chakra through their body. This particular jutsu generates blades of chakra by producing the chakra through the fingers and slashing them through the air. The blades are extremely dangerous.

Hyoton: Makyo Hyosho (Ice Style: Demonic Ice Mirrors): A-rank – Supplementary – N/A Range – Ninjutsu: This technique creates mirrors of ice that allow the user to travel through them with extreme speed. The mirrors can be created in a variety of ways or locations. They can also travel through them, appearing in every mirror present at once. It requires an immense amount of power to damage or destroy one.

Nekomata Endan (Forked Cat Flame Bullet): S-rank – Offensive – All Ranges – Demon Jutsu: This technique is unique to the Nibi no Nekomata and its jinchuriki. It creates a fireball out of demonic chakra that is enormously damaging.

Hyoton: Hyouki (Ice Style: Ice Age): S-rank – Offensive – All Ranges – Elemental Kinjutsu: This technique is one of the most damaging known Hyoton techniques. It is a Kinjutsu due to the fact that it will kill the user if used too long. The longer it is used, the longer the body is frozen. If used to long, it could even freeze the user's chakra network solid. The end result is a glacier, forming out of the air.

Oniton: (Nibiko, Sanbiko) Imari (Demon Style: (Two Tailed, Three Tailed) Menacing Ball): S-rank – Offensive – All Ranges – Demon Jutsu: This technique is also known as the Tailed Beast Ball and is extraordinarily dangerous. The user forms a sphere of chakra, then discharges it as a beam of immensely damaging energy that destroys almost anything. The tailed demons are the only ones that are known to be able to use the technique. The technique can be increased in power by the number of tails of chakra the demon or jinchuriki puts into it.

Oniton: (Nibiko) Tate (Demon Style: (Two Tailed) Shield): A-rank – Defensive – Melee Range – Demon Jutsu: This technique uses demon chakra to protect the user and/or an area. It is extremely effective against normal ninjutsu and demon techniques.

Fuuton: Rasengan (Wind Style: Spiraling Sphere): S-rank – Offensive – Melee Range – Elemental Ninjutsu: This technique is a Rasengan infused with wind chakra. It is more powerful than a normal Rasengan, delivering its payload in the form of a huge number of wind blades.

Raiton: Raikiri (Lightning Style: Lightning Cutter): S-rank – Offensive – Melee Range – Elemental Ninjutsu: This famous technique is the signature jutsu of Hatake Kakashi. It is classified as an assassination jutsu. It is accompanied by the sound of birds, and must be hand delivered. The name comes from the fact it was once used to cut a bolt of lightning.

Suiton: Junsai (Water Style: Water Shield): S-rank – Defensive – N/A Range – Elemental Ninjutsu: A technique created by Naruto to help him against taijutsu users after his battle with the Raikage. This technique creates what is effectively a wall of water. It can also nullify most forms of ninjutsu, even those made to penetrate defenses. The wall molds around attackers, stopping their movements.

Taiyou Soragan (Solar Sky Eye): The advanced form of the Soragan, Naruto's Eye Jutsu. Activating this form is required to access the unique Dojutsu techniques. See the Description Chapter.

Gunbi no Susanoo (Armaments of Susanoo): One of Naruto's Taiyou Soragan jutsu. See the Description Chapter.

Tate no Suijin (Shield of the Water God) – An incredibly powerful defensive tool, this 'weapon' takes the form of a pool of water in the wall, which uses tendrils to form a barrier controlled by Naruto's will and gestures. While it is capable of blocking vast assaults, the true use is to block individual attacks of immense power. Only an attack that could pierce the deepest depths of an entire ocean can penetrate the full power shield. Only an Shichibiko Imari (Seven Tailed Menacing Ball) – class attack can pierce it (A specially designed S-rank jutsu may be successful, if used multiple times in rapid succession). The creation of this tool kept Naruto unconscious with chakra exhaustion for the full 77 days.

Rasenhappa (Spiraling Explosive Blast): A-rank – Offensive – Close Range – Ninjutsu: This technique is the result of the careful destabilization of the shell of a Rasengan. By collapsing just a single point of the chakra shell that contains the spiraling chakra, the chakra escapes with explosive force. The damage is lessened, but by using this technique, the Rasengan can be used at long range. (Drawn from Naruto Description Chapter)

Sanfuu Yari (Three Wind Spear) – A simple spear that creates three wind blades to attack whatever it strikes with the tip, leaving an Asterisk shape. As a wind weapon, it can cut through most obstacles and ignores wind resistance. This weapon took only a week of chakra depletion to create. (Drawn from Naruto Description Chapter)

Fukumi Sori (Atmosphere Warp): Another technique from Naruto's Taiyou Soragan. See the Description Chapter.

Gave Haku a bit more power in order to make her a match against Yugito (And yes, I think of Haku as a girl). I've also come up with a few jinchuriki techniques. I was surprised when the only thing that they could use was a Imari (Tailed Beast Ball), so I gave them some cool techniques, and will be coming up with a few more.

By the way, the pairing is not necessarily Naruto x Yugito. I'm not sure there will be one at all. But, I may take suggestions. Naruto x any girl from Konoha will not be the pairing.

Next time will be another two battle chapter. Naruto will be battling two opponents again, though on a much higher level. One will be Yagura, the jinchuriki of the Three Tailed Turtle, and the other will be a weaker Six Paths of Pain.

Remember, before then will be the description chapter, probably tomorrow or the day after.

Review, let me know what you think! If you come up with any ideas, I'll think on them, and if you find a mistake, please let me know.