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Slime Girl

Being an anthropomorphized slime, she appears to be made of some kind of clear/blue gelatinous substance that allows her to take form of something resembling human. Though, in this story, it appears that covering her in water breaks her down somewhat. While non-lethal to the slime girl, it's inconvenient. Her personality can be described as curious and playful. As a slime, she's the very first monster every proper Hero does battle with. She's also the cover girl for this fanfic if you haven't noticed the image.

As the slime girl sways back and forth...

So too does her chest...

"Ararara~? Have I gotten popular?"

The slime girl glistened slightly while standing in the sun. She clasped her hands together.

"I only appeared for a short while~ But having fans is nice~"

Pressed together, her hands started to combine.

"Thank you so much~ Let's meet again sometime~!"

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"I'll defeat the Monster Lord!"

Saying that stock phrase, Luka swung his sword down on slime girl.

"Ahn~!"

The blade slowly sunk into her.

"Y-Your stiff metal sword is ravishing my insides~!"

"Eh...?"

Blushing, the slime girl reached her arm out to close their distance.

"You'll... You'll take responsibility, right~?"

"R-Responsibility...!"


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Message: if you add monster girls who didn't appear in the game i suggest twin werewolf sisters one a fierce tom boy slash first ask never kind of gal (pounces in front of luka ) fight me! face me in one on one combat!(shows her fangs and claws) and if you lose your mine! get it? got it? good! (attacks) and her sister a bouncy bubbly ditzy air head (walk up to luka wagging het tail 3) umm excuse me i know this is sudden and we just met but (blushes) my mate i want you to be my mate (glomps luka) pweaase!(_)

Alright. Sure.

Luka was traveling along the outskirts of a forest...

When suddenly...!

A tomboyish werewolf girl pounced in front of him!

"Fight me! Face me in one-on-one combat, and if you lose you're mine! Get it? Got it! Rawr!"

Luka took a step back.

"What's with this unexpected development...!"

Backing up some more, the boy accidentally bumped into someone else.

"...!"

"Umm... excuse me..."

Taking a look... he saw another werewolf girl similar to the one in front of him. Somehow, she gave off a feeling of being a bouncy bubbly ditzy air head.

"I know this is sudden and we just met, but..."

This werewolf girl wagged her tail as she spoke up.

"I want you... to be my mate!"

In a swift motion, she dove at the boy with her arms outstretched...! And at the same time...!

"Hey! Don't ignore me!"

The first werewolf girl also leapt out in an attack!

"..."

Luka sidestepped and the twin werewolves collided into each other. The two immediately passed out on the ground.

"..."

And after a moment of hesitation, the boy decidedly walked away from the scene.

[ Luka gained 25 exp! ]


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Message: pretty awsome fic this update soon and even though you dont put in rape scenes at least have luka get some of the monster girls hug and kiss him i mean since he just got his arse handed to him by some bitch dragon girl and has a lamina calling him an idiot he should have some monster girls trying to comfort him (whether he wants it or not) like that slug girl and slime girl.

"Who are you calling 'some bitch dragon girl', huuuuh?-!"

Granberia contorted her face angrily. Standing next to her, Alice breathed a sigh.

"Don't get excited over something so trivial."

Granberia gritted her teeth in irritation.

"Y-You...!"

The lamia continued lazily:

"But... I suppose being nice to that boy every now and then wouldn't be a bad idea."

Later...

"GO LUKA GO! GO LUKA GO!"

"YOU CAN DO IT! FIGHT-O!"

"DON'T GIVE UP NOW! YOU HAVE SO MUCH TO LIVE FOR!"

Luka sweated.

Are they... Are they bullying me...?


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Message: Quote this one chapter..

"The boy used his fist to punch the top of her head"...

I prefer you use the word Bonk instead of punch, It sounds too harsh...

Luka scratched the back of his head.

"Was I too harsh...?"

He briefly thought over it.

"Well... I suppose I might've been, but... you can't take kids these days too lightly. If you don't show them the consequences of their actions, how else are they going to learn?"

Behind him, the Four Bandits gathered. They muttered several choice phrases at him:

"Demon."

"Monster."

"Baldy."

Luka pulled back his sleeve.

"Excuse for just a moment."

Rushing at them...!

( "WHO ARE YOU CALLING A BALDY...!" )


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Message: please update this soon id really like to see how you have luka meet tamamo & the rest of them. ps do you agree that monster girl quest would make a great anime series? i mean they'd have tone it down from hentai to ecchi but if they did id definitely buy the dvd.

[ sfx: SNAP! ]

Closing her fan, the nine-tailed fox revealed a fanged smile.

"My~ Someone seems eager."

Tamamo! The next 'Heavenly Knight' appeared...! And in an omake nonetheless...!

"I admit, the prospect of showing up on primetime television is very exciting."

"But, before considering an anime series, let's keep our ambitions relative. For now, let's focus on making this fanfiction interesting, okay~"

Tamamo frowned afterwards.

"Though, it does trouble me that the pace we're going at is pretty slow... it may take a bit before my appearance comes to light."

"Good for you..."

"...Hmm?"

The nine-tailed fox expressed confusion at the sudden voice. Springing up from the ground beside her...

"I said, 'Good for you.''"

"Erubetie...!"

Another 'Heavenly Knight' surfaced...! This time, a slime girl!

"That's right! You...! You probably won't show up at all in this fanficition, will you?"

Tamamo grinned.

"..."

Momentarily, the slime girl paused. She looked away.

"I'm not bothered by it."

"Ah~ There's no need to get so down."

"..."

"How about you make the most of what you have? After all, you made an appearance in this omake, right?"

Erubetie tilted her head.

"...Omake? You mean I'm-"

"Oh, it looks like it's ending now!"

"It's ending now...!"


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Message: ...Damn Luka, you suck. Even more than you do usually.

Alice approached a certain boy.

"What's this? A little criticism and you're already crying?"

"I'm...! I'm not crying!"

"Then why are you on your hands and knees?"

"...!"

Luka rushed to come up with a reason.

"This is...! I'm praying! To the Great Goddess Ilias! I'm a follower, so this isn't unnatural!"

"Is that so."

Suddenly, Luka was transferred to an abyss of grey and white! The Goddess Ilias showed herself to the boy.

"Is there something you need?"

"..."

Dumbfounded, Luka stuttered.

"Err, not really. Someone on the Internet just said I sucked... and well..."

"..."

The goddess sighed.

"Please don't call me out for something so stupid."

Luka was transferred back.

"..."

The boy really wanted to cry.


Thank you all for the input. As someone who doesn't really write narratives, it's always good to see other people's assessments. I don't claim to be a good writer and I never have. More so, most of my other works tend to have a more experimental format, and MGQ is probably the most normal piece of work I've done so far. ( Though, I'd still consider it experimental in concept. )

If there's a review I haven't addressed ( there are a few ), it's because I couldn't find anything constructive or entertaining to say about it. Nonetheless, thanks to all of you who took the time to contribute. I'll say that every review, favorite, and follow helps motivate me to keep going with this project. This says a lot, because I'm an extremely lazy person.

Anyhow, next chapter will probably be part 2 of Happiness Village ( if I ever get around to finishing it )

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