Okay, soooo, I was watching the Breakfast Club the other night, and this idea popped into my head. Let's see what happens when I put a
victorious twist on this movie. ONTO THE STORY!
Robbie POV: October 1st, 2011, Holywood Arts High School, 6:45am. Dear Principal Ikner, we accept the fact that we had to sacrifice a whole Saturday in detention for whatever it was we did wrong, and what we did WAS wrong. But we think your crazy to make us write an essay telling you who we think we are. You see us as you wana see us. In the simplest terms; the most convient definitions. You see us a brain, an athlete, a basketcase, a princess, and a criminal..correct? That's how we all saw eachother this morning. We were brainwashed.
No Ones POV: A brand new silver convertible sit infront of the school. Inside the veichle, 17 year old Tori Vega, or as some might call her, princess,future prom queen, any of thoes count. " I can't beleive you can't get me out of this.. " The girl whined. " I mean in it's so ubsurd I have to be here on a Saturday.
It's not like i'm a defective or anything. " " I'll make it up to you. Honey ditching class to go shopping doesn't make you a defective. " The young girls father said in an understnading tone. " Have a good day. "
The girl simply roll her eyes and step out of the viechle to head to the library. " Is this the first time or the last time we do this? " Questioned an irritated mother. " The last.." muttered an ashamed Robbie Shapirro. " Well you go in there and use the time to your advantage. " " Mom were just supposed to sit there and do nothing. " " Well mister, you figure out a way to study! " " Yea! " piped up his little sister.
"..Well go! " The nerdy boy got out of the car and headed up the steps. " Hey I screwed around. " " Girls like to screw around sometimes, it's natural. Except you got caught honey. " Yeah, dad already read me alright.." Muttered an annoyed Trina Rays. " You wana miss a race? You wana blow your ride? " She shook her head. " Our school isin't gona give a scolarship to a discipline case! " The athletic girl simply turned to look at her mother one last time before giving her an eye roll and slamming the car door. A tall girl, dressed in red and black flannel t-shirt, black jean jacket, black jeans with a chain,
and wearing sunglassed started crossing the street, completley oblivious to the car rushing down the street towards her. A girl in all black stepped out of said car, looked in the window and watched as her ride sped off. Tori and Trina were sitting next to eachother, Robbie was going to sit at the tabel behind them but Jade( The girl oblivious to the car) made him move. The girl dressed in all black ( Cat )
came in, and took the farthest seat away from everyone. Trina gave a light chuckle when she caught a glance at the girl, causing Tori to also release a quiet chuckle. A man walked up to the teenagers,
a smug smile on his face. " Well, well.. here we are. I want to congratulate you for being on time. "
" Excuse me sir? " The man turned towards the princess. " I know it's detention but, I don't think I belong in here. " He simply ignored her comment and went on with his speech. " It is now, 7:06. You have exactly eight hours, to think, and ponder the error of your ways. " Just when he had finsihed his sentence, Jade made some spit from in her mouth, spit it up in the air and caught the spit glob with her mouth, causing a Tori Vega to shudder in minor dsiust. " And you may not talk. " he stated as he pointed a finger towards the girl. Just as Robbie was about to move to the seat next to him, the man in the suit stated: " You will not move, from these seats. " Causing the shy boy to remain seated where he was. " And you," he started as he removed Jades feet from the chair she had placed them on, " Will not sleep. " Alright people, were gona do something a little different here today. We, are going to write an essay. Of no less than 1,000 words; describing to me who you think you are. " This a test? "
Questioned Jade. " And when I say essay, I mean ESSAY. I do not mean a single word repeated 1,000 times. Is that clear miss West? " "Crystal " The young girl responded calmly. " Good. mabey you'll learn a little something about yourself, mabey, you'll even decide wether or not you'd like to return. "
Robbie then stood up. " Uh, you know I can answer that right now, that'd be no, no for me sir beca- "
" Sit down Shapirro. " " ..Thank you sir.. " he stated quietly as he sat back down. " My office, is right across that hall. Any monkey business is ill advised. Any questions? " Tori and Trina both shook thier heads. Just as he was about to walk out, Jad spoke up. " Yeah. I got a question. Does Barry Manaloe know that you raid his wordrobe? " " I'll be giving you the answer to that next Saturday. " Jades face dropped. " Don't mess with the bull young lady, you'll get the horns. " When he was far enough away Jade decided to speak up again. " That man, is a brownie hound. "
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