My first fanfiction! You know about the six journeying cats' right? Tawnypelt, Brambleclaw, Squirrelpaw, Stormfur, Feathertail, and Crowpaw! No harsh comments!

Chapter 1

Feathertail didn't move when she hit the ground. Crowpaw anxiously watched and pressed his muzzle through her fur. "Feathertail?" he asked. "Feathertail, wake up! You can't die!" After several heartbeats, she stirred. Stormfur gasped. Her clear-blue eyes met Crowpaw's amber ones. Feathertail made a low rasping noise with her throat, as if she was talking. Crowpaw, who could take it no longer, licked her cheek and said, "No… Feathertail, don't leave me!" "I won't," she replied. "I'm still alive."

All the cats gaped at her in amazement. "You're really alive?" Stormfur asked. Brambleclaw's and Squirrelpaw's amber eyes glowed with relief. Crowpaw's eyes were filled with a mixture of love, relief, and astonishment. Feathertail scrambled to her paws, only to fall back down with a groan of pain. Suddenly, one of the Tribe cats yowled, "Sharptooth is dead! We are free to live!" Cheers erupted in the cave. Meanwhile, the six journeying cats went back to the cave; Feathertail was leaning heavily on Crowpaw's shoulder.

When they got to the Tribe of Rushing Water, most cats already knew about Sharptooth. Crag came up to congratulate Feathertail. "Congratulations," he meowed. She didn't even try to answer; her eyes were glowing with pride.

Stoneteller came up to her. "The Tribe thanks you," he said softly. "Do you have any wounds?" "My shoulder really hurts, but other than that, it's fine," Feathertail replied. Stoneteller sniffed her shoulder. "Try to move it," he suggested. Feathertail tried and winced at the pain. "Dislocated," he murmured. "Let me get the herbs for you."

When the herbs were applied, Stoneteller used his teeth to get her shoulder back in place. There was a loud click and Feathertail screeched in pain. Stoneteller put three poppy seeds in front of her. "Lick them up," he instructed. Feathertail obeyed.

Just then, Crowpaw came in. Stoneteller must have thought they wanted some privacy, because he went away over to the fresh-kill pile. Feathertail was filled with delight. Crowpaw was looking slightly embarrassed, and shifted his paws. "There's, there's a feast out in the fresh-kill area," he started. "I...I wanted to give you this." Crowpaw dragged an enormous brown rabbit. "Thank you, Crowpaw!" she exclaimed, her eyes glowing with pleasure. Crowpaw only grunted.

But Crowpaw didn't leave the cave. "I also wanted to tell you something… something you probably already knew a long time ago. And I know you feel the same way, just telling by your actions," he mewed. "I love you."

Don't you think she will love him back? Think about it. She shows affection for him in the book. Also, should Stormfur stay in the mountains, or should he go back to RiverClan? Please tell me in your review!