Hello my fellow JOALers, I decided that I'm going to rewrite the story over again, I don't like how it's turning out, but I have a pretty much idea who the main characters are, it's not a lot. Okay, I know it's been long since I updated a complete chapter in a while, so I'm going to write out the first few chapters before I type them on the computer, I'll try to make them longer. The first chapter of the rewritten story will be out in the beginning of next month or the end of this month. I told you I won't give up on this story, I just didn't like how it was going. Since I don't want to get reported here's a little story.

London's POV:

I tripped over a rock, and landed on my left side, I felt a sharp pain, but I just ignored it. I had to get away, they are behind me, they want to kill me. I don't even know why they want to kill me. I have done nothing wrong, I just arrived at camp and they already turned against me. Run faster you silly girl, the voice in my head practically yelled at me, which caused me to cover my years. By the way, I am not crazy, not crazy at all, I just so happen to be sharing MY body with someone else, her name is Aoibheal, yes, I'm sharing a body with the Irish faeire queen Aoibheal. She is by far the most annoying person I know, and I know some annoying people.

I kept running, with my sword that i retrieved my self, the sword that Lady Aoibheal herself work with, I had to do a lot of digging and searching for this sword, which I am in love with.It's kind of hard NOT to fall in love with that beautiful sword, Aoibheal said dreamily. She remined me of Luna Lovegood from the Harry Potter series, when she talks about Nargles.

I almost tripped over another rock, but I catched myself before I fell this time. Up ahead was a river, Dive into the river, they won't be able to touch you there, her voice rang in my ears. I ran faster than I ever thought I could, I really need to get away. I was just two feet away when I felt a arrow strike into my body, close to my heart, I know I'm going to die, but I won't allow that, I kept running. I finally made into the river, that was very rocky, but I dived in anyway, I avoided every rock that I could, sometimes bumping into a few, but that's expected. I will go under water most of the time, popping my head up once in awhile to see if they were still chasing me, even though I couldn't see them, I had to keep going, until I find it, find Aoibheal's lost city, where they will greet me as their queen, well that's what Aoibheal told me.

Do you guys like that? Would you read this if it was a story?