Hey, guys and welcome to my rewrite of my story, Ice Age with Kyle. Suppose, I wanted to call it, Ice Age with Kyle: Missing Link. But then again… never mind.

So, whoever reads this, please review or comment. Thank you. :D

Ice Age with Kyle

Chapter 1: The Invention

Hello, this is my strangest story ever! But first let me introduce myself, hi my name is Kyle, Kyle Stanford to be exact. I'm a loner… I don't have any friends. Can you believe that? For some reason, nobody doesn't want to be my friend. I've been a loner in twelve years, I'm sad and I don't have parents to comfort me. *Sighs* so, let's change the subject for now. Let's begin with the story.

It was summer vacation, and I was watching TV at the living room. Oh, forgot to mention! Extort is my keeper… hard to explain and the word that goes with it. But who knows, so yeah, Extort is a scientist who was working on a project. It's a secret but he'll show me someday.

So, I was watching TV on Animal Planet. Since this summer, is Ice Age week, I have to watch this boring, pathetic show about prehistoric animals. Extort told me to, so whatever… Watching was a bore, I fell asleep watching it.

My eyes blinked twice, and everything was dark. The atmosphere was dark, the walls, everything was dark! I couldn't see my hands either. I thought I was dreaming when I saw this bright light to Extort's laboratory. The door of the bottom came out bright light that made my eyes burn. I blocked with my arms as I opened the door. Out of nowhere, I saw Extort in trouble with this machine that was terrifying! It jumped like if there was an earthquake, I fell to the ground but I manage to get up at that time.

"What's going on? I asked, trying to balance myself from the shaking.

"The time portal got wet!" Extort replied.

Then, my mind just zaps like lightning bolt. He is creating a Time Machine, I finally realized. Wow…

Extort unplugged the wiring of the Time Machine as it shut off.

"Wooh!" he was relieved.

"That was so cool!" I was astonished, with my eyes opened wide.

"Thank you, Kyle. I think you should go to bed. We need our sleep" Extort said, as he closes his laboratory door.

We walked off to my room and his room. I was impressed that Extort was creating something, that'll change the world. I wonder why? The next you'll know, is maybe he might test it out! This is so exciting!

So, tell me what do you think? Did I improve from my first story?

Review and comment. :D