Hello Peoples, this is my first attempt at writing a Victorious story. Okay, actually it's my second, but this one actually has a plotline. And I actually intend to publish this one. :D
I do not own Victorious. It is owned by Nickelodeon.

Tori was scrolling through the updates on The Slap when she heard the doorbell ring.
"Who is it?" She called out.
"Pizza delivery." Jade replied, putting on a generic man voice.
Tori stood up and walked over to the door.
"I didn't order any…" She began as she opened the door slightly. "Jade?"
"Hi." She answered solemnly.
"Did you even bring pizza?" Tori remarked.
"No, I need to talk to you." She replied, with not a hint of sarcasm in her voice.
"Why? We're not friends."
"You're the only one that can help me right now."
"Well I don't help people that hate me…or call me that word." She defended, making reference to an earlier conversation.
"I'm sorry."
"I don't care if I was acting like…" Tori began before realising what had just been said. "Wait, you're sorry? What's wrong? Are you sick?" She freaked as she took a step back.
"No. I'm not sick. It's about Beck."
"I'm not getting you two back together again." She stated.
"He's in a coma." She managed, before bursting into tears.

"What?" Tori panicked as she felt her heart drop into her stomach. "What happened?"
"He…driving…car flipped…" She choked out.
The room went silent for a while.

"Is he gonna be alright?"
"I don't know. He had a cat scan and some major surgery, but we're waiting for results."

"Who else knows?" Tori asked as she tried to comfort Jade.
"Just his parents and me and you."
"Should we tell the guys?"
"No. His parents don't want anyone to know until they get his results back."
"Oh."

Not knowing what to do next she walked over to Jade and wrapped her arms around her.
"Thank you." She sobbed.
"It's okay. It's all gonna be okay." She soothed.


"Hello Jade. It's Theresa."
"Oh hey Mrs. Oliver." She replied, trying to sound relaxed.
"We're getting Beck's results back and we thought you might want to be here."
"Ok thankyou. I'll be there right away." She replied before hanging up.

Jade scrambled around Tori's living room looking for her missing shoe. She didn't want to go home the night before because her mother wouldn't be at all sympathetic and all she really needed was a calm environment, not her mother breaking up with her newest boyfriend and turning around and screaming to her about how she spends too much time with Beck.

She found her boot under the pile of blankets she'd tossed off the couch and she proceeded over to the mirror where she noticed her makeup stained all down her face. Her eyes were crimson from the tears and her hair was matted and frizzy, but she couldn't care less. She snuck into Tori's room and grabbed the can of deodorant off the dressing counter.
"Bye Tori." She whispered over to the teenager still fast asleep in her bed.

She picked up her car keys off the coffee table and walked out the front door and over to her old black pick-up truck. She wiped the dew off the windscreen and climbed in the driver's seat. For a moment Jade prayed, not that she'd ever admit to it. She prayed that everything would be alright.


"Hey Mr and Mrs Oliver. How's he doing?" She greeted as she walked over to the emergency room Beck was in.
"He hasn't improved." Brian, Beck's dad, answered first. "He's still unresponsive, but they're waiting for the anaesthesia to fully wear off from the surgery."
"Well how long does it take for it to wear off?" She interrogated.
"It depends on how well your body is burning it. It could take anything from six to sixteen hours." The doctor interrupted, causing Jade to count back the hours when they first gave him anaesthesia.
"His surgery was thirteen hours ago. It should already be burned off." She protested.
"Not necessarily. He may not be fighting it well. These things can take time." He reassured her, before looking over his chart.

Jade kept reassuring herself that Beck was fine. 'He's a fighter.' She told herself.
"Oh my." The doctor sighed.
"What? What's wrong?" Mrs. Oliver began.
"Well, according to this, his brain activity has dropped. It is still functioning enough for him to come back into consciousness, but if it continues he may become brain dead."
"No." Jade screamed. "He can't."
"Jade honey, its ok." Theresa soothed as she pulled Jade back. "He's still okay. He's gonna be okay."
"Can we see him?" Jade asked, after she'd calmed her meltdown.
"Certainly." He replied, before pushing open the door to the room Beck was in.

Jade eyed over the person lying in the bed. It didn't resemble Beck. There were wires and bandages and stitches everywhere, and they'd shaved off most of his hair. She knew it was him though. He still had the same beautiful face.
"Beck." She sighed as she kneeled next to him and reached for his hand. "I love you."

Then she felt it. His finger twitched.

"He twitched his finger." She yelled in joy. "He moved."
"Oh my goodness." Theresa replied, almost so relieved she could faint.
"Beck can you hear me?" Jade enunciated into his ear.
Nothing.
"Beck. Can you hear me?" She repeated, whilst clasping his hand tighter.
"Mm…" He mumbled.
"Beck." She squealed as she hugged the motionless boy in front of her.
"Excuse me please." The doctor interrupted, pulling Jade off her boyfriend. He beckoned the nurse over. "Nurse Roberts, we need to do another MRI. Can you book that ASAP."

The nurse nodded and scurried out of the room.
"Why?" Jade snapped. She thought she was doing a good enough job of bringing him back to life.
"We need to see if his brain activity is improving." He assured her.
"Of course it's fucking improving. He almost spoke." She argued.
"Please Miss Oliver. Do not swear in this hospital."
"What? I'm not his sister, I'm his girlfriend." She fought back. "And I swear whenever I want to."
"I apologize then Miss…"He paused.
"West." She prompted.
"I apologise then Miss West but you're still not allowed to swear, especially with Beck in the condition he's in. A negative environment is not good."
"Doc." Brian interrupted.
"Yes." He answered.
"His eye's twitching." He exclaimed. "He's gonna wake up."

So I was originally going to leave this as a one-shot and finish it all now, but then I decided, Hey, I should make it at least a two-shot. That way I can get your opinion on what happens to Beck. Does he die? Does he wake up? Etc.

Please don't hate me for almost killing off Beck. It just provides a plotline. I'm not going to tell you until later if he's okay or not.

I will reveal this though. Jade is going to start a blog about what happens to Beck and I need help coming up with a name so leave a suggestion in your review. And Tori will reappear, with possibly other characters.

And please review.
Luvv ya,
xxMini