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It started out low, so low that it was barely audible to Naruto, even with his audible senses. However, as it increased in volume, he realised what it was.

Kyuubi was growling.

"Ha! As if I'll break again to you mongr-" She snapped, before Kushina blurred.

Naruto blinked. There his mother was, pinching the Kyuubi's nipple. "Now, now, bitch," Kushina lectured with her other hand, "We were doing so well, you didn't even say a single word while you let Naruto-kun and I talk. Bitches should only be seen, not heard," She wagged with her free index finger, "Unless they have something important to contribute. Like what you didn't have just now. That means punishment time."

"Wha-no, Mi-" Kyuubi let out a cry of pain as Kushina twisted, and the foxgirl's upper body tilted over, until suddenly Kushina twisted even more, and the fox-cum-human collapsed on the floor, stomach to the ceiling-

And suddenly Naruto was there, his geta on her bare lower torso, idly noting that she held the precise same seal that he did on her own abdominal region, as if the two were mirror images. With a morbid sense of satisfaction, he also spotted the female laying under his foot letting out a gasp of air as his foot had slammed into her with enough force to knock the breath out of her. He also had to very conspicuously not redden upon catching sight of her bare breasts again, the one quickly reddening as a result of his mother's brief torture session.

"Wow, good work!" Kushina had both her thumbs up, and her teeth were shining (he shuddered at that, as it seemed too close to Maito Gai's 'Nice Guy' pose for comfort). "I didn't think you'd be that fast to take the initiative, but you did." Bending over, she hissed into Kyuubi's face, "You see that, Kyuubi-chan? How does it feel to be pressed down to the floor, not allowed up?"

Naruto could see Kyuubi's face shaking visibly in anger, the muscles of her neck tensing, and even hear her teeth grinding, but she seemed to be restraining herself from an actual outburst. Naruto almost whistled. His mother really had broken the fox in her own time. But like she had stated, he couldn't really expect that to hold. He needed to break the Kyuubi down even further, and then rebuild her as being totally loyal to him...

It was here, when his mind began to churn over the many possibilities, that Uzumaki Naruto could be said to have truly thrown himself into the project of making the Kyuubi no Kitsune his slave.

"I wouldn't say that, mom," He said, and when Kushina looked up with a confused "Huh?", He clarified, letting his foot off of Kyuubi's stomach, planning for what he was about to say next. "She isn't Kyuubi anymore. Now that she's only showing one tail, maybe we should call her..." And here, he donned a foxy, malicious grin, "Shukaku."

That did the trick. The foxgirl underneath him tensed, and within a split second jumped at him, her coiled frame providing a great burst of acceleration, her claw-like fingernails ready to tear him apart. The mere comparison of her to her single-tailed sibling had been sure to set her off, and the Kyuubi found herself howling as she leapt.

What she hadn't expected was to be slammed back into the ground again belly up, and she instinctively let out another cry as her nipple was twisted again, the skin around the areola reddening even further than before.

"Now, now, Ichibi-chan," Naruto waggled at her with his free hand, his foot also back on her stomach, "Really, trying to fight me won't get you anywhere, Ichi-chan. You may as well just submit to me and give me your power right now." He finished off by punctuating with a grin. Off to the side, Kushina just marveled as she finally understood what her son was saying. The personified Kyuubi didn't, which was why she fell so cleanly into the blonde's trap.

Her face quickly reddening with fury, the newly dubbed Ichibi started yelling at her warden. "Y-you, you, YOU BRAT!" She started, spittle foaming at her mouth as she attempted to break free of her hold. "I AM THE ALMIGHTY KYUUBI, I WILL NOT BOW TO YOU LITTLE HUMANS AND YOUR PETTY GAMES! IT'S MY POWER, I WON'T LET YOU HAVE IT! JUST WATCH, I'LL BREAK OUT OF HERE AND RAZE YOUR PRECIOUS VILLAGE TO NOTHING!"

And Naruto was certain she would have continued to rant had he not bent down with his free hand and twisted her opposite breast, cutting her short as she choked on the sudden pain.

"For somebody who likes to talk about destroying things a lot," Naruto remarked, "You sure don't have a lot of pain tolerance, Ichi-chan. But tell me, did it feel good to let all that out now?" He smirked. "You'll find repeating the same dredge as you always have won't affect me anymore." Suddenly, Naruto found himself chuckling.

"What's so funny?" His mother asked.

"Ah, I was just thinking of what Ero-sennin, Jiraiya-sensei, that is, would do if he were still alive and here to see this," Naruto remarked. "Probably cite it as inspiration for his next book. He did get me to proofread some of his writing, it wouldn't surprise me if he started using my experiences next."

Kushina just sighed. "Under other circumstances, I would have liked to find a way to take him back from beyond the grave just so I could send him back into it." She looked at the one-tailed foxgirl on the floor. Kyuubi, no, Ichibi she supposed she should call her former tenant now, was just about choking, face still red, just from a mere couple of titty twists! Well, Kushina supposed that was what happened when you were an almighty mass of chakra and never had any concept of pain. Even her legs and tail had tried to retract in on herself as if to protect her torso, though that was rather difficult with Naruto's foot planted back onto her gut. "But I guess it'd be hypocritical of me right now to say that."

"I miss Ero-sennin, mom," Naruto said, finally freeing his hands from the newly-dubbed Ichibi's chest. "But really, if he was here right now, everything would have been more chaotic." Kushina just nodded in response, wondering what her son would do next, now that he had let Ichibi go on her rant, only to shut her up, demonstrating how little he had to care about what she said.

Slowly, Naruto allowed Ichibi to recover, her breathing becoming steadier as the seconds passed by. Soon, slit red eyes stopped shaking, and gained focus, warily matching his own gaze. Naruto kept a stony glare at her for several seconds before his heart leapt as the foxgirl averted her eyes. Now that he was no longer single-mindedly dedicated to forcing her submission before his gaze, he found herself admiring her facial features.

Although she had no such whiskers as he did, her dark red hair and fox ears added an exotic appeal to her. If everything his mother had said about her own days as the Kyuubi jinchuuriki panned out for him, and he survived this upcoming war, then surely kinky days would be ahead. He repressed a giggle. Jiraiya had trained him well.

Naruto followed the lithe body of the foxgirl down, skimming past her large bosom, acquainted as he was with it after having handled her a couple of times already in the last few minutes. He made note of her thin torso, and the fox tail that had wrapped around her waist. Appraising the girl he now called Ichibi's tail, he expected he could find a few...uses for it.

And then he froze as he hit a patch of red hair, followed by the...while he had seen the upper bodies of females many, many times, a result of his lecherous sensei's peeping on onsens around the Elemental Nations throughout their training trip, this was his first time seeing a girl's lower body in the flesh. For the first time in dealing with the Kyuubi no Kitsune, Naruto hesitated.

Kurama spotted his freezing up, and her lips curled up in a vicious grin. Vaguely, she had the idea her container was trying to play a mind game with her. Well, two could play at that.


After the previous chapter in which Kyuubi-chan didn't speak at all, and it being like nearly three years since I wrote the last segment, she gets to speak a lot more. The main thrust will probably be a psychological war of words between the two for a while. Naruto holds all the metaphorical power, but Kyuubi/Ichibi still has the power to employ words that sting.