Well Holy shit twizlers my here is my first attempt at a Fanfic. ATTENCION: NOW ACCEPTING OCs!

I rewrote this story because the previous version was REALLY sucking in grammar and other things as well. I fixed plot holes that I could find and I removed plot points that didn't make sense. The O.C's that were chosen already ARE STILL THERE. Please enjoy the 'New' version of Mass Effect Galactic Orbital Defence. GOD.

"Ethan…Ethan….ETHAN! WHAT THE FUCK? WAKE UP!"

I stirred in my bed slowly before slowly opening my eyes, to find my roommate towering over my bed.

"Dammit Mike" I murmured "You don't have to yell IN MY FUCKIN EAR!" I said shouting the last part.

"Well, you didn't wake up so I yelled." "Besides it's 4 in the afternoon and you need to get your ass in gear".

"You know (cough) Mike?" I asked looking at him "If you weren't so heavy (cough) I'd throw you out the window." I said as I slowly got up. "Yea Yea Yea" said Mike "Get a diet, I know. But if I do that then you might be able to pick me up and I think that fall would hurt" he said laughing.

"(cough) Whatever dude" I said walking towards the bathroom.

I looked at myself in the mirror, my hair looked like it just went through a playthrough of Kayne and Lynch 2, my eyes were tired and I just wanted to go back to sleep. But alas, Mike and I were going to the gun range later on and I was looking forward to it. I put on my contacts, brushed my teeth and took a shower. After that I went to eat breakfast with mike and then we got our pistols ready.

I had your run of the mill Beretta 92fs Inox. While Mike had a Glock G38.

"Can't wait till the zombies come." I told Mike while inspecting the firearms.

"Yeah they can't mess with us." Said Mike as he inspected his magazine.

We loaded everything into my car, and went on our merry way. "So Ethan...who do you think is going to be at the range today?"

"I'm not sure" I said as we passed some crowded parking lots. Something to do with a celebration or something.

"I just hope (cough) it's not too crowded." I continued. Mike nodded in approval but than stopped when his eyes caught onto.

"FIVE GUY´S." He called out.

I did a chuckle sigh. "Really?" I asked as I pulled into the parking lot.

"Oh come on, I'll order it to go. Everything extra large."

"Like your ass?" I lazily asked as he got out of the car. "Like my ass." He said as he shut the door, but then re opened it. "Do you want anything?" I shook my head. "No I'm good."

After close to ten minutes Mike finally got his food and we made out way towards the shooting range.

"Please try not to stain the leather." I pointed out. "Ok. Fine." Sighed Mike. "I'll be extra careful."

We turned on the interstate and started entering a long tunnel when I noticed something was off.

The lights.

"(cough)Mike?" I asked

"Yeah?"

"Shouldn't the tunnel lights be turned on (cough) or something?'' I said as I turned on the headlights.

''Yeah your right'' realized mike, ''Maybe they needed to fix the lights, so they shut them off." said Mike.

''Right.'' I whispered ''Maybe.''. I suddenly felt a pain in my chest and I started to feel numb and I was coughing uncontrollably

''Dude what's wrong?'' Mike asked suddenly getting very concerned.

Everything was starting to fade into darkness.

"Dude what the fuck is wrong with you?"

I was losing it, and fast.

The car suddenly started to go very close to the edge of the tunnel.

"ETHAN SLOW DOWN, HOLY SHIT, SLOW DOWN!''

I couldn't move my body. Shit, Was I dying?

Suddenly the lights in the tunnel shot back on and we were about to hit a semi going the other direction.

I heard a scream.

Or was I already dead?