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User Name: Chocolate Kiss
Story: Orihime Fashion Queen
Summary: Orihime had the hard stick in life and she was always competing with Rukia Kuchiki. When she finally gets the job at a modeling agency along side Kurosaki Ichigo, she finds herself having to deal with Rukia, who out of her jealousy goes and tries to take everything away. Will Orihime be able to make her pay.
Genre: Romance/Action
Fan Work Number: 3:8:1

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Author's note – I was inspired by Orange Strawberry's story. Her stuff is all right, but she doesn't support Ichihime. I'm also not copying Vanilla River. She stole my idea and plagiarized my idea.

Orihime Fashion Queen

Orihime looked out the window as she held her bags clutched in her hands. She had just graduated from high school and felt that her life would be getting better. For a long time she had been bullied by one Kuchiki Rukia, a girl who thought she was everything and anything all rolled into one. Rukia had even stolen away her best friend Tatsuki by bullying the girl so much that her family had to move and she thus hadn't seen her since their Freshman year.

"What are you going to do with yourself? Are you going to find a job in this new town? You're lucky that someone set up an apartment for you and it hopefully you won't ever have to see them again. That girl I mean... Rukia. She was so horrid to me."

The girl watched as the train stopped and she got up, trying to find the path to the apartment. She followed the map, bumping into a young man as she tried to follow it. "Um... excuse me."

"Don't mind me. I was just off to get some things at the corner store."

Orihime couldn't help but like the orange hair but pushed it aside to go to the apartment. She then found herself heading up the stairs and she found the nice apartment with boxes already there. She went to the window and looked out the door, leaning over and letting the wind blow through her hair. She closed her eyes, letting the sun also touch down on her head.

The dust in the room floated about the room. The girl blinked a couple of times before she headed out to buy some food to eat. She arrived at the small store, only to find herself crashing into the person on his way out. She apologized again. She went through and purchased anything that looked good and she headed to the counter to buy her things.

When she was finished she headed towards the stairs at the apartment, only to find the young man crashing into her again, this time knocking her to the floor. She looked up just in time to hear the young man speak to her. "Sorry. I was going to go and get my mail." He then paused then held out his fingers in a picture frame. "You know... I think you will do."

"What do you mean you think that I will do?"

"I want you to be my model."

OMAKE

The first review Chocolate Kiss received was from 6eGrrrrrlll. "I love this story. You should honestly write some more. It sounds all nice and sexy and all, not to mention the fact I like your prose."

"Thank you for the review. I hope to update soon, but there is no guarantees."

Vanilla River of course had her own say. "How dare you accuse me of plagiarizing your ideas, but then you go and plagiarize my story? That line 'She had just graduated from high school and she felt her life would be getting better' is plagiarized off my line 'school was over Rukia had graduated from one of the best colleges and gotten a degree in fashion as well as business'. I want a public apology from you!"

"You're not going to get any form of apology from me. Those line say two very different things and you're the one whose plagiarizing me. So you need to be the one to give me a public appology."

Another review from someone named King of New York came through. "Hi. Could you switch Ichigo out for Kon?"

"No way! What ever is the matter with you. I don't want to write about you OC!"

Another review came from Chappy Chan Chan. "Well... we like your story except for the part where I am supposed to be a bully. We wouldn't say we are against Ichigo and Orihime being together though." A similar review came from Orihime-chan.

Orange Strawberry then wrote a review. "I'm not really for or against what ever Ichihime is. I think though you are referring to Chappy Chan Chan and Orihime-chan as they use my account for posting stories on instead of their own. This story isn't bad except for the fact you made Rukia into a bully. She isn't that way, so perhaps you should change it. She really isn't that way."

"What would you know? I think you're a troll and that Chappy-Chan-Chan and Orihime-chan are also your accounts. Pretending to be someone else won't make me give in to you bullying me into trying to change my story."

"Hold on. I never told you that you had to change it. In fact, I used the word 'perhaps' in there. How is telling you that Rukia isn't a bully being a bully to you. Or is the reason you're writing her off as a bully happens to be because you don't understand what a bully is. I've dealt with bullies a good portion of my life, so I really don't like it when someone goes and labels someone as a bully when they aren't that way. There is no honor there."

"You did say that I should write the story the way that you wanted me to write the story. You also told me that my story was horrible. So please... can it. That's why you're a bully."

"Stop putting words into my mouth. I said 'this story isn't bad' in my review. Seriously... stop accusing me of something that I didn't do."

"I'm going to ignore you now. This conversation is over."

Another review came from Jolene Meyers. "Don't listen to the person telling you that you can't write Rukia the way that you want him to write it. Someone told me I couldn't write Ichigo the way that I wanted to write him. The interpretation of the characters is quite subjective and each of us has our own interpretation, so nobody else can tell us that our interpretation is wrong."

"Thanks for the review, but how did you like the story."

"I liked it, but I don't know if I'll stick with it. I actually prefer stories with an OC in it. Don't care if there is romance, but maybe I do."