Hey guys! It's me again! I'm finally back! After months and months and months of waiting. :D

thanks for being SO understanding about all of this :) i love you guys!

I'm sorry i took so long AGAIN... but my dog died... and he was family! think of it as me losing a best friend or a little brother... :'(

But, yes, onwards to the story.

The campers slept soundfully in their beds, engulfed in the land of dreams, not a care in the world.

HONK HONK

Everyone jumped and awoke immediately.

'What the f-'

'AAAAAAAAHHHHHH!' The screams of some of the other competitors muted Zakk. And for a very good reason as well, they were about to be squashed by a truck. Turns out their beds had somehow been moved to the middle of a road. In the country. With no reason why.

The contestants scampered quickly to the side of the road, but their beds were trampled. Somehow, the truck kept driving without any damage (don't ask how).

'OK, where the hell are we?' Jessica asked, confused and irritated.

'Looks like we're stuck in the country.' Tara stated.

Another voice piped up. 'Well duh, that's obvious enough.' everyone turned to see someone they really didn't want to, Paris.

'What the firetruck is she doing here?'

Paris glared at Tara. 'How the hell am I supposed to know?'

Tara returned the fierce glare with one of her own.

'Okay girls, calm down.' Kaila stood between them.

'Yeah, we really need to figure out how to get back to camp.' Wes said.

The two mumbled their 'okay''s and started to walk away before they heard a sudden shout.

'YES! I KNEW IT WOULD BE HERE!' Ace exclaimed happily as to the other side of the road, grinning. Unfortunately (for the girls) he found a bike, the same one they got as a reward. And it had somehow multiplied and there were now 11 new shiny bikes.

'Sweet!' Hex yelled. Then all of the boys ran over and each grabbed a bike.

'You mean you lost TWO challenges in a row!' Paris asked angrily. 'Well you're all freaking useless, aren't you?'

'Stop complaining, princess.' Jessica snapped, getting annoyed.

Breeze walked up to them. 'I found this map.'

They all looked at her hands, she was holding a folded piece of paper. Paris snatched it, gaining annoyed looks rom her teamates. She smiled evilly.

'This map was supposed to be given to the boys.'

The Shopaholics looked over across the road, where each of the Mallrats were just about to ride off. Then they looked at each other and smirked.

Mallrats

'Sucks to be the girls right now, doesn't it?' Kelvin smiled as they started riding, leaving the girls behind.

They stayed in a compact group, never going to fast. After a while, Leo noticed something.

'Um, guys? Where are we going?' he asked, slowing. Everyone stopped abruptly.

'Why did we not think that...' Wes mumbled. Kelvin groaned.

'Great! Now we're stuck in the middle of nowhere!' he got off his bike and kicked it. 'This is f**king perfect now, isn't it?' he remarked sarcastically. 'The girls are probably having more luck than us!'

'Agreed.' Zakk said angrily.

'Ok guys, let's just calm down and think. How can we work through this situation?' Eric said, also getting off his bike. 'Now, what direction are we in.' he looked to the sky, the sun was still very low, it had only risen about two hours ago. 'That way's east.' he stated, pointed towards the sun.

'But how are we supposed to know which way the mall is in, Mr. I'm So Smart?' Kelvin asked, annoyed with him. Then, they all heard sobbing. They looked at Marv. He was bawling his eyes out. 'Um, dude, what's wrong with you?'

'We're lost!' he wailed. 'We may never be found, and then we'll die here, alone, and it's all my fault!' The mallrats exchanged confused looks.

'Why would it be your fault, Eld?' Ace asked slowly. Marv's expression changed from sad to angry.

'It's not my fault! It's yours!' he yelled.

'But dude, you just said it was your fault...' Hex said. Marv's expression changed yet again. He now wore an apologetic look.

'Oh, I did, yeah sorry... It is my fault. I was awake when they moved the beds... and I didn't try to stop them.' he frowned. Morhin's face lit up.

'So, that means you know which direction the mall is in then?' he asked excitedly. Marv's nodded slowly, then grinned. He got back on his bike. He started heading north.

'This way!' he started riding. Everyone got back on their bikes and followed.

Shopaholics

'Ok, I need to rest. My legs are killing me!' Rey exclaimed as she sat down on the dirt. May nodded and sat next to her.

'No resting!' Paris yelled. 'We have to beat the boys!'

'Oh shut it Barbie! We've been walking non-stop for three hours now! We NEED a rest!' Jessica glared at her. Klaira was still bouncing with energy.

'Awwww, rest already? I was having so much fun!' she grinned happily, before plopping herself down next to Neveah.

'You know, I really hate Chris!' Neveah groaned.

'Same. I can't believe he actually left us here!' May exclaimed.

'At least we have the map, look on the bright side! And we have the same amount of team members as the boys again! It's not that bad!' Jayli optimized. Paris rolled her eyes at her.

'We. Are. In. The. Middle. Of. NOWHERE. You idiot!' she screamed at her, then walked away to sit by herself. Jayli frowned.

Tara comforted her. 'Hey, don't let that b-i-t-c'

'Don't say it!' Paris yelled.

'Whatever.' Tara continued. 'Just don't let her bring you down, we need to hear some positive things right now, thanks.' she smiled and the others nodded in agreement.

'Okay!' Jayli smiled again and stood. 'But I think we should start going again, we don't have much time.' The others groaned and got up, then they all started walking again.

Mallrats

'Please tell me we're nearly there.' Morhin panted. The others looked to Marv. They were all sweating heavily.

'Nearly.' Marv said. Finally, a tall building came into view. 'We're here!' he exclaimed. The others cheered happily.

'I wonder if we beat the girls?'

'I hope so.'

Shopaholics

'There's the mall!' Neveah cried happily. Everyone else saw it too, and they started running.

'Finally!'

'Woohoo, we're here!'

'I knew I could get you slackers here.'

Everyone stopped and looked at Paris. 'What? It's the truth.' they just rolled their eyes and kept running.

Chris and Chef stood waiting at the finish line.

'Why are they taking sooooo long!' Chris moaned. 'I only sent them a couple hundred miles away, why aren't they here yet?'

Chef shook his head.

'Finally! I see one of the teams, wait no, I see both teams! They're racing to the finish line, Shopaholics are in the lead but the Mallrats are close behind on their bikes!' Chris commented. 'Who will win?'

The Teams

'Hurry! The boys are catching up to us!' Rey called to her team. The girls sped up considerably.

'The Shopaholics are getting faster, we have to beat them!' Morhin said, pedalling faster.

'I don't hink we can catch them, they're just to far ahead!' Eddy exclaimed.

Wes frowned. 'Don't give up!' They all started speeding up as well.

'And both teams have started to get faster and faster, but even with the bikes, the boys just can't seem to catch the girls.' Chris grinned. 'Butt, there's still a few hundred yards to go, this will be a close race!'

The teams raced with all they had, pushing themselves to the limit of all their physical abilities. As they got closer, so did the Mallrats to the Shopaholics.

'We have to win!' Maylene yelled as they got closer.

'C'mon girls! Just a tad faster...' Jayli grimaced as she forced her feet to move faster, as did the others.

'The girls are going to beat us, we must pedal quicker!' Eric said, forcing his feet to speed up.

Everyone was in major pain, and Chris wasn't helping. 'The suspense is killing me! They are neck and neck, and still the girls lead by a bit! They're nearly there and-'

The winning team crossed the line, their last player inches before the other teams last player.

'Wow! That was too close!' Chris grinned as he looked down at the competitors, who had all collapsed in exhaustion and were lying on the ground. 'Chef! Photo finish please?' Chef walked up and handed Chris the camera. He studied it closely, before raising his arms to reveal the winners. 'Congratulations to the fastest team, it is- wait,' he paused, studying the contestants closely. 'Why is Paris here?' he asked. The campers raised their heads to look at one another, confused.

'You mean you didn't know she was here?' Kaila asked, puzzled.

Chris shook his head. 'Nope, I have no idea why she is here!' he replied, bewildered.

'She's here because you're fired.' a hard female voice came from off-screen. The camera (and everyone else) turned and saw a young woman (maybe even teenager) stepping out of a limo. She had long and thin dyed mint green hair with sweeping bangs which was decorated with a light blue and purple flower. She was wearing a black singlet and a black three quarter leather jacket, she also had blue skinny jeans on and whit pumps. She had really pretty pale skin and no acne, and her eyes were a rare violet surrounded by black eyeliner and a little black eyeshadow as well. Chris gasped.

'Karaya?' he exclaimed, surprised.

'Yes, it's pronounced Kuh-ray-ah though, and you know that. And like I said, Chris, you're fired. So, skidoosh!' she made a "shoo" gesture. He frowned.

'What?'

'Ohhhh my goddess. Do you not listen? I said, YOU'RE FIRED! Sacked, axed, layed off! OUT OF THE JOB!' she bellowed. The competitors (who were now sitting) looked surprised, confused and a bit glad. They looked from Karaya to Chris.

'Who are you?' Thunder asked. Karaya sighed.

'My name is Karaya, I'm here to rid you of Chris forever!' everyone gasped.

'Wait! What gives you the right to sack me?' Chris said, exasperated. Everyone looked at her expectantly.

Karaya smirked. 'The right that is lawfully mine, as I own the show!' Their eyes widened and Chris' lower lip started trembling.

'What! You- I- When did this happen?' Chris obviously didn't know who owned the show, until now.

'But Chris, if you didn't know her as the owner, how do you know her then?' Paris asked slowly (maybe even getting jealous).

Karaya smirked. 'Oh, Chris got his ass kicked by me sometime last year.' she glared at him as he looked away nervously. It was quiet for a second, then everyone started laughing (except Paris,who glared at everyone).

'You got beaten up by a girl Chris, wow. Real tough.' Tara giggled. Everyone laughed louder, and Paris clenched her jaw, death staring Tara.

'Hey! Watch it!' Chris shout at her. She raised an eyebrow.

'I don't have to, because you're fired!' she grinned. Tara looked at Karaya. 'He is fired right?' she aked, just to make sure. She sighed annoyingly and nodded. Tara smirked.

'You can't do this!' Paris screamed, tackling Karaya. Two bodyguards stepped out of the limo and went to help Karaya, but she gestured for them to stop. The green-haired female quickly gained the upper hand, getting Paris into a headlock.

'Don't touch me!' she yelled at the blonde, tightening her grip. Paris started choking.

'Karaya. Stop.' a deep, smooth voice came from inside the limo. A young man stepped out. He had tanned skin, brown hair, a light stubble and a great body. In fact, he looked a lot like an underwear model/model. He was wearing skinny jeans, a dark blue dress up shirt rolled to his elbows and gray canvas shoes.

Karaya immediately looked up and stopped. 'Sorry... got carried away.' she mumbled.

'That's okay, you're cute when you're fighting.' the underwear model/model looking guy spoke again, this time everyone could hear that it had a slight Scottish accent to it. Karaya smiled and walked over to him, leaving Paris gasping for air.

'And you're always cute.' she replied, making the super hot guy smile back. She turned back to the contestants (and Chris). 'Guys, this is Gordon.'

They all waved.

'But back to the main point. Chris, get packing, I say you're out, so I'm in!' she grinned. The competitors gasped.

'You're our new host?' Neveah asked.

'Yep.' Karaya replied. 'And I plan to start as soon as that ugly piece of cruelness gets out.'

Paris and Chris glared at her.

'But- NO! I've been with the show for four years. I have to get something for that!' he wailed. Karaya though for a second.

'Fine. You don't have to go.' Chris and Paris cheered and the others groaned. 'But you're not hosting. You can help Chef out.' she said grinning evilly.

Chris' eyes widened. 'Chef's assistant! Wh- why- NO!' he exclaimed.

'Ok, back to packing then.'

Chris sighed. 'Fine!' he yelled, before sulking away.

'Ok! So, isn't this awesome!' Karaya exclaimed, clapping her hands together. 'I had to bring back Paris, her manipulative personality was just too good!' she smiled at the campers. 'But, there are other things that need to be taken care of, so...' the contestants looked at eachother in confusion. 'Meet your first intruder... GREG!'

A brown-eyed 16 year old with silky brown messy hair got out of the limo. He wore a black plaid shirt, blue ripped jeans, black sneakers and black tined shades. He smiled and waved at the others. 'Hi.' he said.

'Hey.' The others said in a unison. He walked over and joined them.

'So, that's Greg! He likes playing music.' Karaya said. Zakk walked over to Greg.

'Hey. I play the guitar.' they fistbumped.

'Cool.' Greg replied.

'Ok people! Get Greg to his new bed, and your new beds, I got new ones for you guys, after Chris demolished your other ones, then get ready for the next challenge!' Karaya said as she walked away with Gordon and her bodyguards. The competitors shrugged and started walking to the cabins.

(IC)

Greg: Ok, so, I've made one friend.

Paris: They brought me back. I knew they couldn't stay away. -smirks, then frowns- But almost firing Chris! And that b**ch Karaya! I hate her!

Hex: New dude in the cabin! Wooooo, party!

Ace: I wonder who won the challenge.

(static)

Mallrat's cabin

'So, Greg, seen any cute girls?' Zakk smirked, then he frowned. 'Stay away from Jessica.'

Greg just looks at him, confused, then shakes his head. 'Um, no. I haven't seen anyone... yet.' Zakk glares at him.

'Eh, don't mind him, he's just super paranoid about other guys liking Jessica, even though he doesn't have the nerve to tell her that he's secretly madly in love with her.' Ace said. Zakk now glared at him.

'I don't like Jessica!'

'Um, sure.' Morhin replied.

'What about you guys? I've seen the looks you've been giving some of the girls.'

'I agree with Zakk.' Ace announced. 'Wes, it's obvious you like Jayli,' Wes blushes. 'Eddy, you like Tara.' Eddy blushes. 'And Kelvin, even though you and Thunder fight, pretty much everytime you see each other, you definitely like each other.' Kelvin blushes.

'I- I do not!' They all said togther. The other guys just laughed.

Shopaholics's cabin

'What do you guys think about Karaya?' Neveah asked.

'I HATE HER!' Paris screamed. Everyone else just ignored her.

'She's fine. But her boyfriend! What a yummy man!' Jayli grinned and the others nodded vigorously in agreement.

'She is one lucky girl!' Tara said.

'He has that sexy scottish accent too!' Maylene swooned. They all broke out in laughter.

The contestants stood in front of Karaya.

'Ok everyone! Today's challenge will be to find two contestants, wherever I've hidden them.' she smirked. Everyone looked around, no one was missing. 'Everyone still here? Not really. You just haven't met the other two intruders.' Their eyes widened. 'That's right, two more competitors, so, chop chop! Each team will be assigned one side of the mall, so you must find which shop I have hidden them in! Could be anywhere! Oh, and don't let me see you until you have the intruder or you lose! Go!' she yelled as they ran to opposite sides of the mall. 'That sure gets rid of them easily...' Karaya mumbled.

Shopaholics

'We need 3 groups of 3 and 1 group of 2!' Jessica told the others. They quickly did this (Thunder, Breeze and Klaira, Neveah, Maylene and Reyann, Jayli, Tara and Kaila), and somehow, she ended up with Paris. 'Great...' she muttered. Paris got ready to reply, but Jessica cut her off. 'Now, Paris and I will take this floor, and each group must take the others.'

'But there are five floors!' Kaila stated.

'Yes, but the top floor is the hosts'! So, no going up there unless we're absolutely certain that the intruder isn't down here! Okay?' they nodded. 'Let's go then!' they all scattered.

Mallrats

'4 groups of 3, one on each of the first floors, and if we haven't found the intruder on any of those levels, we all go up to the top floor together.' The guys ran off in their groups.

Shopaholics- Angel, May & Rey (Floor 3)

The three girls were all looking in different shops.

'You found anything?' Neveah called, while looking into a dark room.

'Nope, but I found this killer skateboard!' Maylene walked out holding a black skateboard with purple lightning bollts on it, and it had neon green wheels. 'Isn't it cool?'

The other quickly popped their heads out to look, chuckled then went back into their shops.

'I'm sure you can keep it, but May, get back to looking for the intruder.' Rey laughed. May sighed and walked back into her shop.

Shopaholics- Thunder, Breeze & Klaira (F2)

'I'll take the candy shop!' Klaira squealed, running to a dark corner.

'There's a candy shop here?' Breeze looked at Thunder in confusion, who shrugged.

'She must be imagining things.'

They walked over to the other shops.

Shopaholics- Jayli, Tara & Kaila (F4)

'Well, that shop's empty.' Tara walked to the next one, where Kaila was, to see how she was going. She was sitting down reading wearing a weird outfit. 'Um, Kaila?'

'Do you know that they have a manga/cosplay shop!' she squealed in delight. 'I found a Cross Academy uniform that fits perfectly!' she was literally jumping up and down in excitement. 'I can't believe I never saw this!'

Tara looked at her in complete confusion. 'Erm, Jayli...' she called.

'Yeah!' Jayli shouted from the other shop.

'Do you have any idea where Cross Academy is?'

'No.'

'Then I think Kaila's gone crazy.'

Shopaholics- Paris & Jessica (F1)

The girls weren't speaking to each other... until-

'Hey Asia!' Paris screamed. Jessica immediately went to the blonde and glared, raising a fist.

'Call me that again, I dare you!' she yelled, she hated racist people, with a passion.

Paris raised an eyebrow. 'Chill out, I just thought you migt have wanted to know, I found a note addressed to you, from Zakk, if you want it, you're gonna have to do something for me.' she grinned evilly. 'Unless, of course, you want me to read it out to everyone.'

Jessica dropped her fist but kept her glare. 'Give. Me. That. NOTE!' she seethed. Paris shook her head. 'NOW!' she yelled.

'No.' Paris stated simply. 'You can't beat it out of me, I want a favour, or no note.'

Jessica gave up. 'Fine, what do you want?' she asked angrily.

'And you won't back down from this favour, or tell anyone?'

'... You have my word that I won't tell anyone about this, and I promise I'll see your favour through.' Jessica agreed begrudgingly.

Paris smiled. 'Good. Now, I want you to promise that you won't vote me off, in return, I won't vote you off.' Jessica started to protest, but Paris held up the note and she quickly nodded.

'Fine.' she snapped. 'Now, can I please have the note?'

Paris handed it to her. 'Pleasure doing business with you.'

(ic)

May: I hope I get to keep the skateboard.

Klaira (eyes darting around the place while grinning like the Joker): There is candy! And I ate it all! Well not all, because there's a lot in there, but stil I ate quite a bit, and now I feel weird. It-

Tara: I have no idea what Kaila was talking about.

Kaila (jumping up and down in her uniform): Cross Academy uniform! Cross Academy uniform!

Jessica: I cannot believe I just agreed to be in an alliance with Paris!

Paris: Yeah, I blackmailed her, but that's the game, you have to play dirty if you want to survive.

(static)

Mallrats- Marv, Wes & Leo (F1)

'I'm bored!' Marv complained as he searched through tiny boxes. (?)

'Well, we can't stop here until we've finished looking.' Wes said, opening a book about cars.

'Yeah, sorry, but if you want to do something more fun, you have to speed up.' Leo agreed, trying to decide on which paintbrush he liked better.

Marv frowned. 'Why is it taking you guys so long to look through one shop? You are looking for the intruder, right?'

The other two froze. 'Um, yeah.'

'Totally.' they said, quickly stopping doing what they were doing and started searching again.

'I'm still bored...' Marv complained, again. 'I know how to speed things up!' he grinned. Then he raced out of his shop and darted in and out of the other ones. Finally, he stopped. 'The intruder isn't on this floor!' he announced. The others stopped too, then decided to double-check Marv's quick examination.

Mallrats- Kelvin, Eric & Eddy (F2)

Kelvin and Eric went to walk into the same shop.

'Where the hell do you think you're going?' Kelvin asked, getting angry.

'Into this shop.' Eric replied, then started walking in. Kelvin stopped him.

'No way! This is my shop!' he yelled. Eric was about to yell back, then re-thought it and decided to leave it.

'Fine, you may have this shop.' he then walked away and Kelvin walked into his shop triumphantly.

Eddy, who had seen the little squabble between them, just shook his head and started looking.

Mallrats- Morhin, Romeo & Hex (F3)

'I'm looking in this shop.' Morhin said, before walking off. Romeo looked at the shops.

'I'll take these ones, can you do those please?' he asked Hex. Hex looked at him.

'Wait. I actually have to do work?'

Romeo blinked at him. 'Um, yes!'

Hex sighed and went into his first shop, as did Romeo.

A few minutes later, Hex was asleep in his shop. Morhin noticed this and decided to place rubber snakes around him.

He smirked. 'That should teach him!'

Mallrats- Zakk, Greg & Ace (F4)

Ace grinned cheekily as he saw Zakk sitting writing a note.

'Zakk?' The guy in question jumped and quickly tried to hide the note.

'What!' he asked defensively.

'That note wouldn't happen to be for Jessica would it?'

'What? No! Why would you- haha... don't you dare tell anyone.' he grit his teeth.

'Don't get so touchy, I wasn't going to! I was just wondering if it was a follw-up to that other note you wrote to her earlier.' Ace smiled.

'How did you find out about that!' Zakk blushed a deep shade of red.

'Oh, I have my sources.'

Greg walked in. 'Could you guys please get back to work? I'm the only one searching here.'

Ace walked back out, but not before winking at Zakk knowingly.

'Sorry dude.' Zakk apologised to Greg, then started looking again.

Hex wakes up

'AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!' he runs out screaming as Romeo high fives Morhin.

(ic)

Morhin: He better start working harder now.

Hex: WHY SNAKES?

(static)

Shopaholics

'We didn't find anything on floor 4.' Jayli told the others. Tara looked at Kaila, who was still admiring her uniform.

'Well, nothing in the way of intruders anyway.' she added.

'We only found this awesome skateboard on floor 3.' Maylene held up her new skateboard.

'Floor 2 had candy!' Klaira bounced happily.

'... and floor 1 hasn't got anything either.' Jessica finished. 'So that means...' everyone looked up.

'Floor 5!' they all chorused.

Mallrats

'Clear.'

'Nothing.'

'Floor 2 is pretty much empty.'

'And so is floor 1. And that means the intruder must be on the hosts' floor.'

They all looked at each other nervously, before starting to walk up.

Shopaholics

The girls stood at the entrance.

'Who wants to risk it?' Rey whispered, looking into the suite. The walls were covered in red velvet and there was a major plasma in front of expensive sofas. The kitchen was sparkling white and there were several doors leading to other rooms.

'I'm not! No way can a juvie not cause a racket!' Tara backed away.

'I'll do it!' Klaira shouted. The others quickly covered her mouth and shook their heads.

'We need someone quiet.' Paris explained. Everyone looked at Breeze and Thunder. The two girls looked at each other, then Thunder stepped forward.

'Ok, you need to get in there and find the intruder, but you cannot be seen by Karaya!' Jessica told her quietly. Thunder nodded and silently walked into the room.

Mallrats

'Who's basically silent?' Wes asked. Everyone looked around at each other. 'No one?'

They all shook their heads.

'Fine. I guess I'll do it.' he stepped into the room, and alarms sounded.

'Aaaaaah!' Marv sqealed.

'What the f-'

'Why is it so loud in here!' Karaya walked out of a room, wearing a nightgown and rubbing her eyes. 'I finally found a quiet place to sleep, and you guys blow the challenge. Nice one!' she added saercastically. 'By the way, you lost.'

The boys hung their heads in defeat.

(ic)

Wes: I can't believe there were alarms!

Marv: We lost :'(

Ace: It's probably going to be an elimination, which sucks!

(static)

Shopaholics

'What the hell was all that noise?' Tara asked, after hearing alarms.

'It doesn't matter.' Paris snapped. 'We didn't cause it, so we shouldn't bother with it.'

Tara rolled her eyes.

Thunder

Thunder walked slowly into the kitchen, she had already looked in the lounge, one of the rooms and now, she was going to try the cupboards in the kitchen. She searched through most of them, high and low. Finally, she opened the last one. She gasped. The intruder looked like they had been held hostage, they were tied up, hands bound, feet bound and tape over their mouth.

'Are you okay?' she whispered, untying the ropes. The intruder nodded. Quickly, Thunder ripped the tape off.

'Ouch!' the intruder exclaimed. 'Thanks, I'm Gemmy.' she told her. Gemmy had straight (dyed) jet black hair with almost unnoticable green flecks dyed into it and she had green eyes. She wore a black baggy tank top, dark blue skinny jeans and white pointy flats.

'Okay, I'm Thunder, let's get out of here!' the two quietly creeped out.

Shopaholics

'You found her!' Neveah cheered as Thunder and Gemmy walked out. Thunder smiled and walked back over to Breeze. The others greeted Gemmy and introduced themselves.

'Ok, now let's get back to Karaya!' Rey fistpumped and they all ran off.

'Good job!' Karaya grinned as she saw the Shopaholics come into view, with the intruder of course.

'Gemmy!' a small voice shouted as she saw the new contestant.

'Sparky!' Gemmy ran up to the girl who called her and hugged her.

The others looked at them.

'Girls, meet Sparky, she's the other intruder.' Karaya explained as Gemmy and Sparky separated. Sparky had dyed jet black hair and forest green eyes. She wore a black baggy tank top, light blue skinny jeans and black pointy flats. The two girls stood side by side, and as the girls looked at them, they realised something,

Sparky and Gemmy were twins!

Finally done! So, what did you think? I would like to thank the awesome xXCookieGiverXx for letting me use her OCs for the three intruders :)

Wow, there were a lot of changes in this chapter, but I did warn you! I had fun writing this, and again, sorry for taking so long!

What did you think of this chapter? Did I do a good job? Did I include all of the characters a lot? Was it long enough? So many questions... One more, got any challenge ideas?

I really hope you liked this chapter and I hope I can get the next chapter out sooner! Don't forget to review, your reviews make me happy, and when I'm happy I write more :)

Okay, BYE!

-kara-