These are my opinions. I apologize if I offend any fellow writers. I am just very outspoken, as you might say.

Disclaimer- Ouran High School Host Club = NO.

10 things I Dislike About Fanfiction: OHSHC

Number 10-

"Omg. Do you see how HUGE this is? Shit."

"That's what she said."

"Shut the fuck up, Megan!"

"Hey Riley. Wanna play a game?" The "interesting" twins locked their arms around Riley's neck/shoulders, with a devious, mischievous look in their eyes and smirk on their face.

"Let go of me." Riley tried to break away, but the twins had him soon in an arm lock.

"Mariah!" Said Mariah twitched and pushed her glasses up silently with two fingers. "Yes, Tamara?"

"Tell those twins to stop harassing Riley! Riley! Do you need any help? Let go of him, you devilish twins!"

A black haired little girl with huge, incredibly cute brown eyes stared up at her cousin. "Joanne?"

"Yes, Rose?"

"Is this school going to be fun?"

".. I don't know."

All of them walked into the hallowed halls of the school, somewhat ready to face the world as it comes toward them.

Meet Catherin and Megan Brown. They are beautiful blonde haired girls with the deepest, natural hazel eyes. They are of American descent, and all the boys in their old school had gone gaga over them. They didn't seem to find the "one" because together, they shot those boys hearts down like a veteran soldier in the army shoots their target. Dead center. They seemed extremely close, mad close. They moved to Japan so their importing/exporting business could expand to "infinite possibilities," as their millionaire mom had put it. They desperately begged their mother to bring their friends. The twins wore her down. Now, their best friends were facing the whirlwind of changes surrounding them.

Riley Keagan. A normal, middle-class boy. He is a person who prefers casual clothes, wearing the Ouran uniform was a big step for him. His messy brown hair only complimented his amazing onyx eyes. He is discouraged that he had to quit his job to move to Japan, but he is planning to still work. He is in the twins' class, they are all freshmen. He is somewhat handsome, although, completely oblivious to the fact that his best friends have insane crushes on him. He is the understanding of the group.

Mariah Magcalas. The unsaid nerd of the group. She is usually seen with her laptop, which no one besides her is supposed to use. She usually carries around a notebook, writing who-knows-what in there. No one should touch her belongings without her permission. Unless they'd like to face the Wrath of Mariah. It was a trademark series of threatening words and actions. Her friends are somewhat afraid of her at times. Not a morning person, glasses wearing, and incredibly intelligent. Her jet black, shoulder-length hair is straight, and she has side bangs, covering her left eye, and glasses. This annoys her. She wants to change her hairstyle, soon.

Tamara Cam. She is the eccentric of the group. She has a definite crush on Riley, and makes it supremely obvious in her outlandish ways of trying to impress him. She gets jealous easily, especially when she sees the twins and Riley together. Mariah is Tamara's best friend, and the feeling is mutual. Her reddish hair is normal, but what stood out were her eyes. They were green, with specks of blue in them. Her eyes were quite a sight to be seen. She gets annoyed easily, often isolating herself in a corner until she snaps back to her senses. She is in the same class as Mariah. They are both sophomores.

Rose Augustin. She is short for her age, but her impeccable cuteness makes up for it. Her light brown hair and blue eyes certainly make her a prize. Some people even think that she's 7, not 17 and a junior in high school! She is a very well rounded girl. She likes playing sports and is excels at martial arts. She has a little friend named Shelly, a stuffed animal who happens to be a turtle. Go figure. Her cousin is Joanne, by their relatives' previous marriage.

Joanne Rivera. A very tall girl, has short black hair, with reddish highlights and chocolate colored eyes. She is very pretty, sometimes called the most beautiful out of all of her friends. Although, she doesn't see that because she is very quiet, somewhat shy. She watches over Rose, and they are as close as the twins are to each other.

They all argue about which room is their respective homerooms. Riley soon gets fed up, and opens a random door: Music Room 3. They are all greeted by magical flying rose petals, and 7 boys saying "Welcome."

"What the fuck?" Megan exclaims.

The Hitachiins' smirk- "An English speaker, huh? This will be interesting."

They all meet the Host Club and fun/hilarity ensues.

Chapter 3:

"So, let's all go on a date, everyone? A.. septuple date?" Riley says.

Everyone nods excitedly, with the exception of Mariah and Kyouya. They stared at their friends.

~ Yes. Sometimes, the story doesn't turn out to be funny at all. You can already tell who's going to end up with you. What fun is that in a story? I just had to make this story so UNBELIEVEABLY HORRIBLE. So cliche, and yes, I used the Host Club's personality so I can show my point. Seriously. Some stories are like this out there. This story is mine. :l

#10-

Generally Bad OC's. (Original character)

Yes, I know that there are some OC's out there that are super special mega awesome. But honestly, most are exceptionally horrible. There are so many faults. I dislike when there are so many damn OC's, that you get confused with who's who. No one knows your characters immediately after the first story, if there's like 10 of them, with no thorough description or relation to the story. Dear Authors, it's true. You don't want to confuse your readers. That is a massive fail. It's usually better to stick with the original anime characters that everyone knows, loves, and hates!

Also, Mary-Sues. I know people don't try to make them like this, but they end up trying to make their characters perfect, beautiful, or super awesome cool people. No human is perfect, or impeccably cool all the time, so I consider your character unhuman. I'm sorry. I said it.

Don't make your OC an hero/heroine then kick them out of the story in later chapters. If they're important, make them stay there. Even if they're completely horrible. Stick with your super special mega awesome OC-including story, or bad, horrible, sucky OC including one. Hey, you wrote it. That's your writing style.

Remember people-

Even one bad OC can ruin a good story with a good plot, etc.

Rant over. Weeeeee. I'm so outspoken. It's a mystery how I don't get criticized for it in school.

Review, because if you got this far, you must have been interested in it enough to read the entire thing. Am I right? So, yes. Review. Another one of my pet peeves are ghost reviewers. Just plain ew. Alright?

*I'm not an author who leaves stories hanging for months. A week or so is my update intervals.

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