So I got this idea from listening to a song. The song is "In The Dark" by JoJo. I wrote this tonight. I wanna get some feedback on it. It's short and slow but it will pick up. Please read and review :)
It was a late Friday night in New York City. Santana Lopez walked into a strip club with some of her friends. She usually hated going to these places but her friends were trying to cheer her up since she recently broke up with her girlfriend.
"Lopez," Puck smiled. "You want a lap dance?"
"Maybe later," Santana said.
"Come on! It'll be fun." Puck pushed on her shoulder.
"I'll get one later. I need a drink right now."
"Get me a Jack and Coke."
Santana nodded and headed to the bar. She sighed and took the drinks back to the table. She gave Puck his drink and sat back. She watched the dancers one after the next. She wasn't really paying attention until a blonde sauntered out on stage. She leaned forward, eyes glued to the girl. Puck looked over and smiled. Once the blonde walked off stage, Santana sat back and let out the breath she had been holding.
"Now do you want that dance?" Puck smiled.
"I'm good." Santana shrugged.
"What if I get her?" Puck pointed to the blonde. Santana smirked. "It's settled then."
Puck smiled the entire way over to the blonde. He gave her the money and pointed at Santana. The blonde smiled and walked over to Santana. She softly grabbed the brunette's wrist, pulling her to a private booth. Santana's skin was on fire. She was softly pushed onto a soft chair. Looking up, the most beautiful blue eyes she had ever seen were staring at her. She swallowed hard when the blonde started dancing on her.
Before she knew it, the dance was over. Santana was tempted to buy another one but decided against it. She walked back to her table with a stupid grin on her face. "Thanks, Puckerman," she laughed.
"Someone's in love," Puck mocked. "What's her name?"
"No idea."
"Oh come on! You're a wimp, Lopez."
"Give me time. I'll make my move."
After spending another hour at the club, Santana decided it was time to go. As she laid in her bed, she could only think about the gorgeous blonde. When she closed her eyes, she saw the beautiful blue eyes.
"Damn it." Santana sat up in bed, running her hands through her hair. "I don't even know this girl's name and I can't get her out of my head."
Should I continue or no?