I miss you
This is my first fanfic about Saito and Louise. Please read it, and review, would really like to know what you think of it. I think Saito and Louise is a really cute couple.
«Hey Saito!» Siesta yelled after Saito.
Saito was walking around, and just thinking about everything. He missed Louise. Even she used to hit him pretty hard, he still missed her.
Lousie had been gone for almost three months now. She was gone with a boy name Leon, they had a mission they were going to find out.
In the start Louise had sent some letters, actually she sent one letter in the week. But not anymore. And Saito didn't know why. Maybe she was dead? Maybe she was been taken away, forever? Saito didn't like to think of that, but maybe it was the truth.
«Earth to Saito!» Siesta said, she was now standing in fron of him.
«Oh, Hey Siesta!» Saito said, he hadn't seen her before now.
«So, how are you?» Siesta asked, while they were walking around.
«Eh.. fine. And you?» Saito said, and looked around.
«great!» Siesta said and laughed a bit.
«what's so funny?» Saito asked, almost angry. Here he was, worry about Louise, and Siesta just laughed of something.
«Oh, sorry. It's just that you look really wierd when you are walking around here, like you are looking for something» she said and smiled.
«Well, I'm waiting for Louise to come back.» Saito said simply.
«you know Saito, that Lousie might not come back?» Siesta sounded a bit sad and happy in the same time.
«I'm sure she come back soon» Saito said and walked away.
*****LOUISE*****
«LEON!» I yelled and tried to wake him up.
He was dead, I knew it, but couldn't stop. Leon was one of my best friends. And we had been sent out on a mission to get some important spells back. Leon and I knew it was a difficult mission, and that we might come back. But we had to try! So we had went out to get the spells back, and here we was. Almost three months later, a dead boy (Leon) and a very hurt girl (me). Some tears ran down my cheeks. Saito had insisted to come with us, but I had refused. Deep inside I loved Saito, and I couldn't take it if he died. It was hard enough to loose Leon.
But right now I wished Saito could be here with me, he always used to protect me. And now, he was probably back in school with Sieste. The thought made me angry, but right now I refused to think about it.
«Leon, please wake up!» I yelled once more. But knew that it was too late.
«I'm going to miss you so much Leon. It's not fair that you leave me here, all alone!» I said and cried.
I raised up, I knew that I couldn't stay here much longer. They would come after me, and kill me, just like they did to Leon. Leon was a big boy, so I couldn't take him with me back to the school. I had to leave him there, just like he left me. I took some flowers who was growing around there, and put it on Leon. He looked more peaceful now, and I closed his eyes,,, for last time. I also kissed his cheek and whispered: I miss you, I love you, I will never forget you.
And with that I started to walk again. Trying to get back to the school. In my backpack I had the important spells. Leon and I had done it, but it had cost Leons' life.
I wasn't sure wich way it was to come back to the school. But right now, I just wanted to get away from here. So I started to run as fast as I could. 'Saito I miss you so much!' I thought.
'Louise I miss you' I thought while I walked back to my room. Actually it was Louises room, but I lived there too.
Lousie had just taken with her; her backpack, some clothes, food, water. Not more than that.
I lied down on the bed. Usually Louise would never let me sleep in her bed, but now as she was gone I used to do it. It made me feel like I was together with Louise again.
'You know Saito, that Louise might not come back' I thought of what Siesta had told me earlier today. I just sighed and tried to sleep.
It felt like I had just slept in three minutes, but I knew it was more. KNOCK KNOCK!
There it was, the sound that had made me wake up. I sighed and walked to the door. On the other side stood a girl she looked excited and happy.
«Oh my God! Have you heard it?» she yelled.
I just looked at her confused.
«No...?» I said.
The girl sighed and smiled.
«LOUISE IS BACK!» she yelled and screamed of joy.
«What?» I asked, I thought I had heard wrong.
«Louise is back. She is in the hospital now! You have to go to her!» the girl yelled and ran away.
I ran back inside, and took a sweater and run out of the room. Down the hall. To the righ. To the left. Down the stairs. To the left. To the left. To the right. To the left.
A big crowd of people were standig around a bed. I could see some pink hair. I was now standing on the crowd. It wasn't just me that noticed that Leo wasn't there.
«OK, let them have some privacy!» someone yelled. And slowly the crowd got smaller. In the end, it was just me.
«Hey Louise!» I said and sat on the edge of her bed.
«Hey» she whispered back.
God, it was good to hear her voice again.
«How are you?» I asked and looked at all the badage she was had.
«Horrible!» Louise said, and started to cry.
«He is dead» she whispered and continue to cry.
«Oh, I see.» was all I could say.
It was some minutes with silence, but Louise broke it.
«I love you, Saito» she whispered and fell asleep.
I smiled.
«I love you Louise» I whispered back, and kissed her gently on her cheek.
OK FINISH! So, what do you think. Sorry, I know it's not that good. But I had a kind of hurry, so at least here it is. Please review :)
I will maybe continue on this one!