This story will be written in Caitlyn and Nate's point of view (POV), and occasionally, Dana's as well, but this chapter will be written in Shane and Mitchie's POV. Hope you enjoy!
(Mitchie's POV)
We all sat there around the campfire, as we watched the firewood burn into ash. All of the differences between us, the "rockers", and Camp Star were burning with it. The owner of Camp Star, Axel Turner, was now out of business, since most campers from Camp Star was here with us, including his daughter, Dana. That'll teach him for trying to mess with Camp Rock. That is why we (and, unfortunately, Camp Star) can stay for the rest of the summer! Yes! More time with my old Camp Rock pals, my new Camp Star buddies and, most of all, my boyfriend, Shane Gray.
I was sitting with him, Caitlyn (my best friend), Tess, Peggy, Ella, Baron, Sander, Jason and the kids his been taking care of this summer. Nate was walking towards us talking to Dana, whom he had just started dating. Shane couldn't wait to talk to her, to find out if she really was, as Nate says, "amazing". Shane has dated many girls that he says were "mistakes", because they would date him just to impress people. They'd say things like, "I just made out with Shane Gray!" or rather, "Do you know that lead singer of Connect 3? I had sex with him last night!" None if it was true. Thank God!
More to the point, Dana seemed like a nice girl. So far.
(Shane's POV)
Now's my chance to test Dana. She didn't seem like she was going to break my brother's heart, but you never know…
Jason and the kids left to play or something and Nate and Dana sat down on a log near the fire. Nate introduced her to us and all of us to her.
"So Dana…" I said, "… heard my brother wrote you a song."
"Yeah, it was really sweet!" Dana said, "In fact," she started to take a piece of paper out of her pocket, "This is a list of things only I know about Nate!"
Was it just me or was Dana bragging? I snatched the paper out of her hand to read it, and Mitchie gave me a look that mothers usually gave their children when they are disappointed in them. I read it.
"But Nate, everyone knows this stuff about you!" I said, and then I turned to Dana and added, "He was talking shit when if he said that no one knew all of this crap."
Dana looked at Nate, and he told us, "I don't remember telling any of you guys a single word on this sheet of paper!"
"You didn't have to," said Caitlyn, "We all got to know you and we all learned this on our own. You didn't have to write a song to help us get to know you, and we didn't even go all Godzilla on you because you didn't tell these silly little things about yourself."
We all looked at Caitlyn and chuckled, even Mitchie. I expected Nate to be angry, but he kinda looked like he was proud of Caitlyn. Dana looked embarrassed and furious. Bingo!
I was happy that this remark came from Caitlyn. Nate and her were like BFFs, and she was a really fun person to be around. Mitchie said she used to have a crush on him before, but she doesn't anymore. I hoped that last bit was a lie, because I think it'd be cool if there was someone who could make Dana miserable. I would have if I hadn't promised Mitchie I'd be nice to her.
We talked for about a half an hour, and for the first time, I thought that Tess Tyler and I could be great friends. Every time Dana said something that we didn't like, Tess would say something to embarrass her, and we'd all laugh. Nate seemed a little pissed off at all of us. I could tell none of us liked her. From the second I saw her at Camp Star's bonfire, I knew that I hated Dana Turner.
Later, Jason came back with a birdhouse in both his hands, and Nate introduced him and Dana to each other.
"Yeah, I remember you! Anyway, let's talk about something that actually matters…" Jason said, and we all giggled, "Have you seen the kids?"
"No," said Peggy, "But why?"
"Jason, did you lose them or something?" Nate asked.
"No! They glued my hands to my birdhouse and ran away!" he complained, "Now they're hiding. Kids, hey? Gotta love 'em!"
"Not me," Dana said.
We looked at her as if she just told us she's a vampire and that her brother was Edward Cullen and that she was going to rape Nate and suck his blood, because Nate wasbragging about how perfect she is all day long.
Dana ignored our expressions and carried on, "They're annoying, bratty, disgusting and fucking childish."
"That's because they're children!" Mitchie snapped. Atta girl, Mitch!
Dana ignored Mitchie's response and we all gave her disgusted glances as if she were an alien. She did kinda look like an alien (Have you seen how creepy her eyes look?), so what did Nate see in her? He had his arm around her and looked at her as if she was a combination of Princess Diana and Jessica Alba. When I go home, I'm gonna beg mom to take him for an eye exam!
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