WHEN IN DOUBT…. SCRAP IT! And then back to the drawing board!

ok I have an apology for those of you who like this story. well two really, first Id like to apologize that I've left this story for so long. THEN, I'd like to apologize that this isn't actually a chapter because I know the feeling of seeing an email alert for a new chapter of a story I thought was extinct and then realizing it isn't a chapter. You get really psyched and happy, and THEN you realize that the son of a b*** author is f-ing with you almost. So for those of you who rather liked submit to me, you may enjoy this or completely hate it, who can tell? It probably helps that I got a new desktop and I can type rather fast. Some of my biggest problems were with the story itself. The storyline was sound but the writing itself felt awkward and juvenile to me. It's largely because I was pretty young when I started writing these. 17. Also I'm older now (22.5) and a better writer I feel.

At the time I had a lot of different events happening like my father dying, my brother and sister moving out, working to find a job etc. Just a lot of stuff happening. You guys genuinely deserve better than what my stories were. If you compare chapter 1 to chapter 16 you'll see a difference. I'm going to be re-writing submit to me. For those of you who like how the old story is written, don't panic. I'm going to leave it up. I'm just going to rewrite the story from scratch and you guys can compare.

There will be some differences in the new and the old story and to that end I leave the old submit to me up for adoption. No joke. You can copy the chapters word for word if you'd like or edit them and put them up in your version. You can continue the storyline from there as to how you feel it should go, what ideas you may have for how it happens. All I ask is that you send me the links so I can read it because I think it would be nifty to read your versions if you want to write your version. As for me, I'll be working on getting the rewrite done.

For anyone wondering about IKWYA and Run I'll also be retaking those up in my spare time. I've really let them go lol. So I'll try to get it done soonish and the first chapter redone.

-HWKFT