Part Nineteen

"I will go get the first aid kit Sarah," Cameron spoke softly as she entered Sarah's bedroom letting the woman down gently to stand on her feet.

"Cameron...wait." Sarah grabbed a hold of Cameron's hand to stop her from walking out of the door again. "Close the door for a minute."

Cameron regarded her curiously before reaching out and closing the door behind her.

As soon as the door shut with a soft click, Sarah lunged forward and grabbed Cameron by the shoulders pushing her gently to lean against the door.

"Sarah, I need to clean and tape your hands," Cameron protested lightly as she placed her hands on Sarah's waist to steady her.

With a mumbled 'later', Sarah leaned fully into Cameron's body as she attacked Cameron's lips, devouring the full rosy lips with a hunger that she couldn't contain anymore. Pushing her tongue insistently into Cameron's mouth, Sarah groaned harshly as she felt Cameron's tongue intertwine with hers, tasting and teasing, driving her wild. She needed Cameron with an almost painful urgency, her desire to feel the girl in her arms driving her mad.

Breaking away to draw in a ragged breath, Sarah lightly caressed the back of Cameron's neck as she placed her forehead on Cameron's chin to steady her jagged nerve endings.

"Sarah, I need to clean..." Cameron started again only to be interrupted as Sarah gripped her neck firmly and pulled Cameron's head down again to hers.

"Cameron...I said later...I...need...this." Sarah breathed out roughly as she captured Cameron's lips again, wanting to feel the girl in her arms and on her lips. Sarah needed to assuage the hunger and the devastation that had been building inside her, to confirm that Cameron was really with her.

Breaking away to catch her breath, Sarah peppered light kisses along Cameron's neck, along her throat, down her chest then back up again to lips red and moist ready to be kissed again.

Cameron knew she should protest but it felt too good to have Sarah kiss and touch her again. She had missed this, the solid form of Sarah pressed tightly into hers, their bodies melding into each other, the feel of Sarah's soft curves against hers. Her systems were overloading with the feel and taste of Sarah, making thinking of anything beyond Sarah difficult. Closing her eyes, Cameron gave in to the feeling, revelling in the sensations coursing through her body as Sarah's lips left hers and started to blaze a trail of fire down her throat, Sarah's lips and tongue kissing and licking every piece of skin they touched.

"Off." With a growl Sarah stepped back from Cameron slightly pulling on the girls t-shirt urgently as she ripped it over Cameron's head and flung it across the room.

Tracing her fingers lightly against Cameron's collarbone down in between her cleavage, the light scars peppering her chest, Sarah marvelled at the dimpling skin in reaction to her touch. Nipping at Cameron's throat lightly, her tongue leaving a trail of wetness in their wake, Sarah reached behind Cameron and unclasped her bra, letting the material fall from suddenly nerveless fingers. Sarah's breath hitched in her throat as she took in the sight of Cameron's naked flesh staring back at her.

Cameron tensed as Sarah's fingers reached out to trace the curves of her breasts softly, her lungs suddenly losing its ability to breathe as she felt the heat of Sarah's fingers burning her skin. Clenching her hands into fists at her sides so as not to hurt Sarah inadvertently, Cameron was beginning to melt, her systems blaring warning klaxons as her vision started to fade in and out. Gasping softly and closing her eyes to the wonderful sensation of Sarah now teasing and sucking her rigid nipples lightly, Cameron braced herself against the bedroom door as she felt Sarah's leg slide between hers.

"Sarah," Cameron groaned as she lifted her hands and placed it gently on Sarah's shoulders pulling the woman up to ravish moist lips, her need to absorb the woman pressing into her consuming her entire body as Cameron's hips started to rock gently but urgently on Sarah's thigh.

Sarah broke away again from the hungry lips to steady her trembling legs as she clasped tightly onto Cameron's waist. Staring into brown eyes filled with desire for her, Sarah's heart rate went into overdrive and she lost all coherent thought except for her need to have Cameron moaning her name over and over again.

Kneeling gently in front of Cameron, Sarah tugged at the zipper of the girl's jeans frantically her hands trembling with the effort in maintaining her control. Slipping the jeans and underpants down the long trimmed legs, Sarah felt herself going light headed at the expanse of naked flesh searing her eyes. Feeling Cameron's hands grip her shoulders firmly but gently, Sarah looked up to see liquid chocolate staring back at her intently. Grasping Cameron's thighs with the strength of a terminator, Sarah bent her head forward, placing soft lips against the moist heat pooling at Cameron's juncture. Inhaling the husky aroma of Cameron, her tongue and lips began to suck and lick feverishly adding fuel to Sarah's already simmering need.

As soon as she felt Sarah's lips and tongue on her, Cameron was lost again, unable to think and only feel. The waves of sensation crashing over her, battering at Cameron's already fragile defences when it came to Sarah was building into molten lava underneath her skin.

"Sarah." Cameron's groan being pulled from clenched lips as she closed her eyes and fought against the desire to grip Sarah's shoulders harder. Pushing the woman closer Cameron picked up the tempo of her rocking hips as she dropped her hands to her sides to clench them in a tight fisted grip, knowing that she could damage Sarah if she wasn't careful.

At the sound of her name from tortured lips and the tensing of the body under her mouth and fingers, Sarah began to re-double her efforts wanting Cameron to let go, to let her feel and taste and drown in the passion of her.

"Sarah!" Cameron suddenly screamed as she felt her insides clenching, a burst of white exploding behind her closed eyes as wave after wave of heat expanded through her systems, her blood boiling as if her chip was on fire.

"Sarah...oh... I love you Sarah...Sarah...Sarah..." Sarah's name was a mantra on Cameron's lips as she felt herself being consumed, her endoskeleton melting in the heat of Sarah's lips and hands pulling at her.

Sarah reluctantly stood up as she felt hands tugging gently on her arms to feather light kisses on the glistening skin at Cameron's chest, throat and temple. Feeling warm arms wrap around her in a tight clasp around her waist, Sarah placed another gentle kiss on Cameron's lips before finally resting her head on a firm shoulder. Sighing in contented bliss at the love and devotion travelling up and down her body for the metal girl trembling in her arms, Sarah traced light patterns against Cameron's hip bone.

"We should...I should..." Cameron faltered; collecting her thoughts as the waves of sensation began to slowly fade, leaving only a warm hum buzzing up and down her back. Gazing down at the head on her shoulder and the face suffused in a light pink, Cameron traced her fingers lightly up and down Sarah's back.

"I should go get the first aid kit Sarah." Cameron was finally able to vocalise as she pulled away slightly to stare into emerald green.

"Later Cameron," Sarah replied as she leant in and placed another kiss to the tempting lips in front of her.

"Sarah." Cameron's tone was firm this time as she pulled away again to give Sarah a displeased frown.

"My hands are fine...I just want you to hold me for a minute...please?" Sarah pleaded softly as she lifted a hand to trace a soft cheek.

Cameron's gaze softened, the words cutting straight into her heart at Sarah's vulnerability being displayed. Grasping the hand tracing her cheek almost reverently in a soothing grip Cameron gave it a gentle squeeze as she pulled Sarah along and climbed up onto the bed.

"Okay Sarah."

Moving to the middle of the bed, Cameron lay down, pulling the woman along with her as she wrapped her arms and legs around Sarah from behind. Snuggling deeper into the embrace Sarah placed both of her hands on top of Cameron's own and gripped it tightly to her stomach.

Cameron inhaled the earthly scent of Sarah, her nostrils filling with a smell that she would never ever forget. This was Sarah, her Sarah, the woman who loved her, was in love with her and for a metal girl that had had no concept of being human when she was sent back from the future, it was a gift. Cameron's mission was now Sarah, the woman needed her, wanted her and Cameron would do everything to keep Sarah safe.

Sarah sighed contentedly as she felt the warmth of Cameron's soft curves along the length of her back and down her legs, the strong arms enveloping her tightly, chasing away her demons. Finally able to relax and let go, knowing that Cameron was with her, Sarah closed her eyes and let the tiredness drag over her. Smelling the sweet scent of Cameron washing away her pain, her doubts, Sarah succumbed to the darkness of sleep, the nightmares kept at bay by the warm breath caressing her neck lightly. She knew what this was now and she couldn't live without it, live without Cameron.

…

"So Cameron's staying?" John enquired as he stepped into the kitchen to see Sarah sitting at the table sipping her coffee slowly with a distracted smile on her face as she gazed unseeing at the roses on the table.

Sarah blushed a deep red at John's sudden appearance. After waking up from her brief nap, Sarah had gone to shower and change while Cameron went to grab the first aid kit to bring into Sarah's bedroom. After reluctantly allowing Cameron to tend to her hands, they had continued in their lovemaking and to Sarah, it had been...earth shattering. In finally being able to accept and own up to her feelings for Cameron Sarah had become a woman possessed.

As if sensing Sarah's desperation to confirm to herself that Cameron was physically with her again, the girl had allowed Sarah to be control. Sarah had dominated and taken Cameron repeatedly all night long, marking and memorising Cameron's body, until finally Sarah had fallen asleep out of pure exhaustion, practically burying Cameron under her weight as she slept peacefully for the first time since the warehouse incident.

Feeling her muscles twinge in reaction to her head still reverberating with Cameron's cries of pleasure, Sarah hid another blush. She hoped that John had fallen asleep with his headphones on again if he wasn't blushing as hard as she was at seeing him this morning. Cameron and she had not been particularly silent having forgotten anything else existed bar the rediscovering of each other's bodies.

Giving a brief and silent heartfelt thanks the one and only time in her life to Skynet in their aim for perfection in mimicking the human body Sarah shrugged away her distracting thoughts as she felt John's eyes still on her.

Clearing her throat and shaking her head lightly Sarah mumbled a firm, "She's staying."

The smile on Sarah's face and in her eyes was enough to let John know that everything was going to be alright again.

John rolled his eyes at Sarah's blushing as he placed his school books and bag on the table but was secretly relieved that his mother was happy again. She had a healthy glow about her now which was much more preferable to the listless quality of late.

Taking note of the tape around her hands, John hid his grimace of annoyance as he pulled a chair out and sat down, picking up books and shoving them inside his school bag. His mother had an annoying habit of disregarding her safety and well-being to her own detriment. John was extremely relieved and happy that it wasn't going to be only up to him anymore who would be dissuading Sarah from doing anything foolish.

"Where is Cameron?"

Sarah glanced outside the kitchen window at the words, hoping to see Cameron walking up the porch steps at the mention of her name.

"She's outside."

Sarah knew John could detect the hint of neediness in her voice but shrugged off the knowledge. Cameron and her need for Cameron was something that John would just have to get used to. Cameron was a part of her now, a part of her life and Sarah could not deny loving her anymore.

…

Cameron rounded the corner of the house to the backyard and froze as she spotted Derek walking through the gate, taking note of his stiffened form as he spotted her at the same time. Cameron had not seen or thought of the man since the night of the storage warehouse, her thoughts having been preoccupied with Sarah and her safety. Giving Derek a silent perusal, Cameron waited patiently until Derek walked closer seeing the hesitation and unease on his features at speaking to her.

"Derek," Cameron acknowledged blandly.

"Cameron," Derek replied just as blandly as he studied her intently, taking note of the purple marks around the girls neck. Obviously, she and Sarah had made up. Pushing the thought and proof away from his mind, Derek consciously tried to relax his posture slightly and gazed towards the house, catching Sarah's silhouette against the kitchen window looking out, not knowing what to say to the silent girl in front of him.

He had been disturbed by the events of the warehouse incident, his nightmare of the metal girl turning back into a machine coming true.

After John had received the phone call from Sarah, Derek had known without a doubt that the girl had turned 'bad' again and he was ready and willing to take her out, to save Sarah and John and by proxy the world. But Sarah had surprised him, surprised and annoyed the hell out of him actually when she had pleaded for the girl's continued existence.

He had not been aware of how deeply Sarah's feelings had run for the metal girl, assuming that her relationship with Cameron was a phase, an itch that needed to be scratched. But the heartfelt plea that Sarah had persuaded him with to give Cameron a chance had shown Derek that Sarah had not only cared about the girl, but that she was terrified of the idea of losing her.

Weakening to a moment of compassion for a situation beyond Sarah's control, Derek had acquiesced reluctantly at the time to give the metal girl her chance at redemption, to prove to him that her supposed love for Sarah would be enough to change her back. And surprisingly Cameron had come through, had passed his test that she wasn't even aware of having sat.

It was this thought that made him hold his tongue from snarling at Cameron. If she was capable of loving Sarah, then he was capable of trying not to hate her for what she was made of.

"Thank you for protecting Sarah."

The stiffly spoken words startled Derek out of his reminiscing as he turned back to stare at the still bland girl standing rigidly before him.

"Why are you thanking me? I would've filled your head with shot gun pellets if Sarah hadn't stopped me." The words were straight forward, no hate or malice intended. Derek was truly curious as to why Cameron would thank him when he knew she knew he was going to end her.

"Sarah can be...reckless at times. She does not care for her own safety, only of others. I would have wanted you to...kill...me...before I would intentionally harm her."

Cameron stood ramrod straight, avoiding Derek's surprised stare as she gazed out into the distance.

"You would choose Sarah's continued existence over yours?"

Cameron turned back to stare at Derek as the question registered; his face set in a curious frown as if trying to figure out a complicated puzzle.

"Yes." The answer was quick and simple, no hesitation, no thought needed.

Derek brooded over it a minute before sighing and turning to face Cameron fully, his expression now thoughtful and resigned.

"I still...don't understand what Sarah sees in you, but if you're willing to choose Sarah over yourself then I'm willing to give this...truce...a go, deal?"

Cameron tilted her head slightly, weighing the sincerity of Derek's words and body language her expression blank as she studied the man silently.

"Deal."

Derek nodded briefly at the answer and turned away to walk up the porch steps mumbling under his breath as he went along, "Who knows, maybe I'll surprise myself and actually start to like you."

Cameron remained standing, watching Derek's exit as her cybernetic ears caught Derek's words, wondering if she too would get to that stage of her sometimes stilted and strained relationship with the ex-resistance soldier.

…

"Cameron."

Cameron turned around at the sound of her name, her hand holding gently onto Sarah's door knob as she gave John a curious look seeing him standing just inside his bedroom door.

"I'm glad you chose to stay." Walking over towards Cameron, John pulled the startled girl into a quick hug before letting her go again.

Cameron's lips curved into a warm smile as she took in the blushing boy's fidgeting form standing before her. Her heart was melting at the sight of another Connor who had wormed his way into her affections.

"Thank you John...I am...glad...to be staying also." Cameron's words were sincere, the affection showing through clearly in her smile.

Giving Cameron one last relieved grin, John turned back around and headed into his room. "Okay then...I'll be...uh...in my room...if anyone...needs me...listening to music...with the headphones on...loudly."

Cameron remained staring at the closed door with a small smile and then turned and entered Sarah's bedroom, knowing that her choice to stay was no choice at all. Sarah needed her and she would do anything that Sarah asked as long as it did not endanger the woman's life; it was as simple as that.

…

"What did you and Derek talk about this morning?" Sarah enquired softly as she entered her bedroom to find Cameron sitting on her bed her gaze riveted on something in her hand.

Cameron glanced up from the identity card she had been studying and was instantly captured by the sight of Sarah freshly showered, her wet hair hanging limply around her shoulders and a bathrobe hugging her curvaceous figure.

Not noticing Cameron's appreciative appraisal, Sarah walked over and sat down beside Cameron taking the card out of the girl's hand gently to study it critically.

"Not too bad is it?" Sarah muttered softly as she felt Cameron moving lightly to straddle her from behind, Cameron's arms going firmly around her waist to pull her closer.

Cameron remained silent as she lifted Sarah's hair from around her shoulders and started to place light teasing kisses on the woman's neck, inhaling the aroma of Sarah.

"Hmmm." Sarah closed her eyes and tilted her head slightly to give Cameron easier access, her thoughts suddenly becoming jumbled as she felt her body's reactions to the light teasing.

Clearing a throat croaky with sudden desire, Sarah leaned back into Cameron's chest, revelling in the feel of little tingling sensations running up and down her body, "Cameron?"

"Derek and I have reached an understanding." Cameron finally murmured distractedly as she continued to trail light kisses on to Sarah's neck, moving up to capture Sarah's ear in her warm mouth, sucking gently. She had no desire to discuss the ex-resistance soldier or anything else for that matter with Sarah's warm body pressed tightly against her own.

Feeling her breath hitch in her throat as Cameron slowly untied the knot on her bathrobe and the feel of warm hands stroking lightly on her stomach and sides, Sarah continued her soft musings, "That's good, maybe Derek won't be such an ass to you anymore."

Cameron remained silent as she shifted Sarah gently onto her left shoulder and started peppering soft kisses onto Sarah's shoulder and throat.

"Oh God Cameron," Sarah moaned as she felt her eyes close in reaction to the wet kisses, dropping the identity card as her hands wrapped themselves around Cameron's head to pull her down and closer.

"Don't you...don't you think that the new identity cards look real?" Sarah gasped softly, not wanting to give in to the sensations flowing over her yet, needing to just absorb the feelings running through her at Cameron's teasing lips.

Sarah had decided that one of her main priorities since fully accepting Cameron into her life had to be changing the 'official' status of her relationship with Cameron. Being Cameron's 'mother' in the eyes of the law had irked her sensibilities, making her shudder at the thought. She could not be Cameron's mother, even if it was pretend; thus the need for their new identities and Derek's visit this morning.

"Sarah?" Cameron interrupted lightly as she pulled away reluctantly from Sarah's tantalising skin underneath her lips to stare into intense emerald orbs.

"Yes Cameron?" Sarah groaned softly. Her senses were on overload as her eyes were captured by dark chocolate, the blatant desire she could see in them driving all thought from her brain.

"I do not want to talk anymore." Cameron stated lightly as she leaned in to capture Sarah's lips, putting pressure into the kiss. Her hands began a slow trail up to Sarah's soft breasts, cupping and kneading as her thumbs stroked lightly over hardened nipples, making her intentions clear as to what she did want to be doing instead.

Sarah could only respond as she felt Cameron's lips and hands on her, her need now consuming her entire body. She was amazed at the feelings running through her every time she was in close proximity to Cameron. Since having admitted and expressed her love to Cameron wholeheartedly, Sarah couldn't seem to get enough of the girl, her body demanding her to be physically close to Cameron at every moment she could.

It was...scary...and...invigorating all at the same time.

Then there was no more talking or thought as their kiss intensified, Cameron leaning gently into Sarah as her body responded automatically to the urgent request from Sarah's lips. Opening her mouth widely, Cameron sneaked her tongue into Sarah's mouth, touching Sarah's tongue with her own, tasting, sucking, until Sarah groaned with unbridled lust.

Standing up hastily, Sarah pulled Cameron to her feet and slowly lifted Cameron's shirt over her head, her fingers remembering the feel of Cameron's body as they traced light patterns from her shoulders, down to the valley of her breasts then back up to the full pouty lips. Reaching around Cameron's back to undo her bra; Sarah could only stare at the beautiful twin mounds revealed to her, slightly flushed with arousal. Leaning down and sucking a nipple experimentally, Sarah's breath hitched in her throat as she felt it harden even more in her mouth.

Cameron's synapses were on overload again at Sarah's touch, Sarah's mouth on her, her body responding to the carnal pull as she gazed into Sarah's desire laden eyes. Lifting Sarah's head away from her breasts Cameron captured Sarah's mouth in a burning kiss, trying to convey everything she felt into the touch of lips on lips, her hands roaming down to Sarah's naked backside under the bathrobe to crush the woman closer to her body.

"Cameron," Sarah groaned as she began to fumble wildly with the girl's pants, desperate in her need to touch, to feel, to taste. She could feel her insides simmering, the heat of Cameron's hands stealing the breath from her lungs. No matter how many times Cameron touched her, it would never be enough.

"Sarah," Cameron answered reverently between kisses, feeling herself drowning in the sensations flooding her systems at the sound of her name from Sarah's lips.

Tugging at Sarah's bathrobe, Cameron slipped it off Sarah's shoulders with an urgency that surprised her as she turned Sarah around and pushed gently on the woman's shoulders to make her lie down on the bed. Tossing the bathrobe away carelessly, Cameron shucked out of her pants and underpants entranced by the sight of Sarah's naked body as the woman lay staring up at her, hooded eyes heavy with need.

Sarah arched her back upwards as she felt hands on her breasts, tracing the faint scar on her side, her stomach, then back up again, kneading, touching, pulling; her senses overwhelmed at the feel of Cameron's weight resting gently over hers. The solidity of Cameron's body, Cameron's warmth and Cameron's smell sending tingling vibes all the way down to her toes.

Letting out a feral groan, Sarah grasped Cameron's solid shoulders and flipped her over to straddle the girl's hips, knowing that Cameron was allowing her to dominate her so easily again inflamed her primitive yearnings to new heights, fuelling her out of control desires.

Placing another firm kiss to already wet and full lips, Sarah suckled hungrily, nipping and biting, trailing her tongue down the side of Cameron's neck, then back up to the lips again. Grinding herself frantically onto Cameron, Sarah let out a fevered moan as flesh slid against flesh, feeling herself already standing on the edge of a precipice.

Pushing herself up gently Cameron steadied her hands on Sarah's waist as she started a slow rocking motion; her eyes fixated on Sarah's face, watching the reactions of her movements flood the woman's features. Cameron could feel the desire crashing over her, through her as she trailed wet kisses down Sarah's exposed neck to her breasts, suckling urgently on extended nipples as Sarah arched her body, pushing back with a force that made little electrical sparks run up and down her back.

Sarah's breath hitched in her throat again as she was consumed by the sensation of Cameron, her body responding with an almost primal need. She was now moving in a frenetic pace that made her lose all awareness, all self control; her senses almost painful in their intensity as the need boiled hotly in her body, about to erupt.

Sarah felt herself imploding, Cameron's name on her lips and the echo of her own name floating to her ears as she was slipping, sliding, falling, wave after wave of ecstasy crashing and rolling over her shaking body, plunging her into warm darkness, the feel of Cameron surrounding her in her heat.

Sarah's breathing was coming out in erratic gasps as she felt her mind and body quietly settle into a dull throbbing hum, the aching in her soul satiated with the feel of Cameron under her. Resting her forehead against Cameron's shoulder and her arms wrapped lightly around Cameron's neck, Sarah basked in the soft kisses nipping at her neck and shoulder blades and hands trailing gentle patterns on her back, their intention only to soothe not arouse.

Sighing softly and lifting her head slightly Sarah gazed into warm golden brown smiling at her as she placed a loving kiss on the lips she could never get enough of. Pulling Cameron closer in her arms Sarah was fascinated with the feel of soft curves and warm skin as her eyes intensified at the reactions running up and down her body.

"I love you Cameron and thank you for not leaving me."

Cameron's face lit up as she heard the heartfelt declaration from the woman who made her feel human; making Cameron's features softer and more delicate as she leaned her head forward to catch Sarah's lips in another crushing kiss.

"Sarah?" Pulling away gently Cameron gazed into soft viridian eyes, quirking a small smile at the affection shining from within as she easily flipped the woman over to straddle her hips. Holding Sarah's arms above her head gently and her knees bearing most of her weight, Cameron could only stare in awe at the woman underneath her.

"Yes Cameron?" Sarah returned the small smile with a sexy smirk of her own as she gazed up into the warm eyes looking down at her with such heart breaking intensity that she felt her own breath leaving her lungs again.

"I have all the..." Cameron's eyes like steel as she leant down to nip at Sarah's throat, "...sexual positions..." as she continued to trail a wet tongue up to capture Sarah's ear, "...in the kama sutra memorised..." biting softly on the ear as she finally whispered, "...and...I don't sleep."

"Oh God," Sarah groaned as her breathing stopped and then started with a rush as she became lost at the words and the feel of gentle teeth biting and licking at her ear, her body responding again with an almost painful need.

"Cameron?"

"Yes Sarah?" Cameron lifted her head away to stare into green eyes blazing with a desperate passion, bestowing a knowing smile in return as she felt Sarah's warm breath mingling with hers.

Sarah freed her arms from Cameron's grip to reach around Cameron's neck pulling her down urgently.

"Shut up and kiss me."

Cameron's mouth swept into a wide grin as she allowed Sarah to pull her down gently to rest her body against Sarah's, capturing Sarah's moist lips with her own in a teasing kiss. Her tongue pushing its way insistently into Sarah's mouth as her hands roamed up and down the woman's strong yet soft body.

Cameron's lips and hands this time were seeking to definitely arouse and not soothe.

THE END

P.S Hey all! If you've reached this far I want to thank you for reading my story and hopefully you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it. As I mentioned in the disclaimers, this is my first ever attempt at fanfiction writing so hopefully I was successful at it. If I had to do it all over again I wouldn't change a thing, so love it or hate it, this is the story as it is. I only actually really wrote it for my own enjoyment and a challenge to myself to see if I could finish it but of course sharing it and getting positive feedback is a bonus as well.

I am currently working on a sequel at the moment which is unfinished so if anyone is interested start commenting and I'll post Part One at least. This one won't be a fast update as it's not finished and I can feel it's already going to be another mammoth novel. I probably won't be posting it on here though but rather over at my livejournal account, so if you're interested check it out: .com/ only because here has a 60 day grace period on documents before I have to re-edit and re-submit and I can't be bothered doing that.

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