My new story. I deleted the stories I have no interest in. They bore me. I want action. They weren't giving any.

My newest motto: You expect great writing from authors. Others expect the same thing. So make yours how you want others to be.

I am going to try harder at writing and make it amazing.

So this story...isn't Twilight. It is just the characters. Here is the summary. MAJOR OOC

"When people see the words, vampire love novel, they expect everything to be nice and simple. As much as the author wants there to be action between it, there is none. This isn't a story with sparkly vampires nor vampires that drink blood from animals. This is an hardcore story about the real vampires. The vampires I believe are out there.

This story is about two people, Edward Cullen and Bella Swan. Edward lives his days, drinking from humans, running away from his past. His family joins him, their hunger for the human blood is unbearable. They can't help themselves. The burning in their throats, making them scream. Their blood lust is hard to understand. They know the true pain of fire. It lives everyday in their lives. In their throats. They wish for death on every human, and will gladly make in possible. The only reason they let humans live after tasting their sweet warm blood, is so they can mate and make more blood-filled bodies for the Cullen's to feed off. Well sometimes it too hard to stop. Even if they stop, it doesn't turn the human to a vampire. They would need the vampire's blood in their body. But their life style is soon to change.

Bella Swan enters their lives. Her blood is the most sweetest they have ever smelt. Edward finds it impossible to not drink her blood. He wants to have her warm beating heart racing as he grabs her. He wants to put his mouth up next to her neck and suck his fangs in. The only thing that stops him is how interesting he finds Isabella. He doesn't understand the way she is. He finds himself wants more than to drink her blood. But he wants her, in a lust way. He doesn't understand how, but he does.

Bella Swan lives her days in Forks, WA. She lives and keeps care of her father, Charlie, the chief of police. She looks at new things with exciting eyes and isn't scared of adventures. She loves reading, mostly fiction. She loves her life and doesn't want it to end. Then she notices people going missing from her town and gets a weird feeling of someone watching her. Is she crazy? Or does she have a stalker? A vampire stalker to be exact."

Does it sound good? Or bad?