Hello! WWWOOORRRRLLLDD! XD

what's up?

i miss writing long stories :(

but i got to work on my endings huh?

if your reading this BE PREPARED TO HELP THIS AUTHOR!

:D

so the other day i was reading this manga called: it's love

it's really good!

you gotta read it!

so yeah, i wanted to make a fanfiction like that ! :D

would be awesome if, it turns out really great! :)

STORY:

Haruhi is an orphan at the age of 6.

she was taken in by the family of the famous Ootori, who is related to the Suoh family (long distance cousins)

She's now 16. . .

what happens when her big cousin and older brother,Kyoya and Takmaki, get jealous of the Hitachiin twins, Kaoru and Hikaru, for dating their precious innocent Haruhi?

REMEMBER NONE OF THEM ARE RELATED BY BLOOD SO THIS IS NOT ILLEGAL ;P

here's a sneak peek!

(JUST a rough draft of one part)

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. . .

"WHAT! Haruhi! you can't BE doing THAT with them! ARE YOU? DADDY WON'T ALLOW IT!"

"Tamaki-sempai first, your not my dad. second, they are the ones who made a move! Third, i'm not the pervert here. " The twins got up from behind her and each of them wrapped an arm around her waist.

"Tono, we CAN do that with her! We are her boyfriend soo.." they stick out their tongue out to Tamaki. "BBBBLLEEEHH"

Tamaki turns bright red.

"WHY YOU LITTLE PERVERTED BASTARDS!" Tamaki runs after the twins.

"HAHA! YOU CAN'T CATCH UP! OLD MAN!"

"I AM NOT OLD YOU-"

Haruhi, just watches as Kyoya watches her.

"Haruhi?"

"Hm? Yes, Nii-chan?" she looked down at him.

A secret blush creeps to Kyoya's cheeks.

Kyoya takes a deep breathe

He pushes up his glasses, and tries to forget the feeling.

"You forgot your underwear again in my room, again."

. . .

The twins and Tamaki stopped.

"WHAT!"

"You BASTARD!"

the twins yelled, Tamaki just stood as a dust statue, slowly being blown away.

Haruhi put her hand behind her head and laughed.

"My bad, Nii-chan. I must forgot it when i was doing the laundry."

.. . ..

tell me what you guys think?

lame idea?

stupid?

brilliant?

interesting?

crappy?

ects.

feedback would be really cool and all :D