SsZ-13
AN: Yo! :)
I thought I'd do a more updated version of this one, kinda to show how I might have improved.
And thank-you for all the nice comments in the last part, it means a lot to hear from you guys! =D
Speaking of which, to Night Reader:
I'm so sorry I haven't updated, so, I'm gonna try a little harder this week to get a few updates up! As a thanks for reading my stories! I'm pretty up to date with my work... So... shouldn't be so hard! :)
NOTE: Rare language, adultery themes.
Roll `em!
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This isn't the best way I wanted to spend my weekend…
Don't get me wrong! May, my best friend, is awesome! It's just, I've already seen this movie with her a hundred times!
Why, you ask? Because she absolutely loves it! I can't blame her though. Avatar is practically the best movie made…
Oh well, I suppose I could just grin and bear it for the next few hours.
"I'll go get the snacks," I said to her.
"Kay," she said, handing me some money.
"Don't worry about it..," I smiled, heading to the counter.
I ordered what we wanted, and began to make my way back to the outside area of the cinema where May was waiting.
Then I saw it. Woah. Standing right in front of me, him. His raven black hair sticking wildly out of his cap; his tanned dark skin; his tall well-built body-
Bang!
"Ouch…" I said getting up. Popcorn was scattered all over the floor, and so was…
"Oh my god! I'm so sorry!" Stupid stupid stupid… I scolded myself as I looked at the boy on the floor… drenched in Coke.
I stretched out my hand to help him up, which he happily took.
"No worries," he smiled. "No harm done."
No harm done?! I tell you now, if someone was to spill all of their large Coke on me… That would be the last thing I would say.
"Here." I said franticly, pulling out my serviette.
"Thanks," he smiled. Smiled?! I just spilt my five dollar Coke all over this guy, and he's smiling?!
Still, how sweet.
"What movie are ya watchin?" He said noticing the ticket in my hand.
"Oh, uh, Avatar!"
"Cool! Us too!" He said signalling his friends. "Is it just you?"
"No, it's-" I looked over at May, and noticed her laughing hysterically. "-Me and that clown over there..."
"Why don't ya watch it with us?" This guy could not be serious. After what I just did, and he wants me to watch the movie with him.
Well, how could I refuse.
"Sure!"
"Awesome. See ya there." He winked at me, and made his way back over to his friends.
I walked back over to May who was, of course, still laughing like a hyena.
"You...him...Oh god! You blew it before you even had a chance!"
"A chance at what?!" I snapped.
"Oh please," she stopped laughing...kinda. "I saw the way you were looking at him. He was walking back from the bathroom, and you were staring at him like a god! You were so star-struck you didn't notice he was walking towards you!" She cracked again.
"There's something wrong with you..."
"So, what's his name? Is he nice? He didn't seem so angry that you...yeah." She giggled.
"His name is... Oh. I... I didn't catch his name. But he invited us to watch Avatar with him."
"Well, as long as you two don't get too lovey-dovey on me, then that sounds like fun."
"Don't say crap like that... I don't even know his name..."
We walked inside the cinema, and he spotted us right away.
"Over here!" He shouted. A few people... Scratch that, everybody in the cinema looked at us, but just as quickly went back to their own conversations.
We walked over to him and his mates, and found our seats.
"Saved ya a spot." He grinned. I blushed.
May leaned over and whispered something in my ear. "He saved you a seat..." She giggle.
"Shush." I hissed.
"Thanks, uhh..."
"Ash."
"Dawn." So, Ash was his name. It was so unique, yet, suited him so well.
As the lights dimmed, everyone got comfortable, and you could hear small hushed sounds coming from the back. I don't know about Ash, but at the moment, all I could think about was the person sitting next to me. It felt kind if awkward, but he didn't seem too uncomfortable.
I kept trying to keep my eyes on the screen, but I could swear every time I looked back, he would glance at me! But every time I went to look, he was staring straight at the screen. The only time I caught him looking at me was when he was offering me some of his pop corn.
About half way through, I felt his hand softly graze mine. His skin felt like a silk feather, and it sent electric bolts up my arm. He shot me a look, kind of scared. It was almost like he though I was going to bite him for touching my hand. He twitched his hand away, and with all the courage I could find in my thumping heart, I took his hand in mine. His hand jumped a little, but he grinned and took my hand as well. Though, we both refused to look at each other. But we both knew exactly what the other was thinking.
It seemed the closer we got to the finish of the movie, the closer we would get. And by the end, I had almost completely lost interest in the movie (that of which I had watched way too many times.) All my focus was on him. The soft and homely feeling of his jumper as a snuggled a little closer. The comforting feeling of his hand trailing up and down my arm. I could just about fall asleep...
"I love this movie!" May said, standing up as the lights switched back on.
We both split as though the lights were spotlights shinning down on us.
May grinned.
And I chortled.
"No wonder you weren't paying much attention..." She said huskily.
"Shh!" I panicked, which only made her grin wider.
After about another hour, we decided it was time to split. May winked at me and hopped on her bus.
"You comin' Ash?" Said one of his friends, although, the grin on his face said he already knew the answer.
"Nah. If it's alright with her, I'll take Dawn home." He looked at me with question.
"Sure, I'd like that."
"Kay, see ya later Ashy-boy." Ash's face grew red at the name.
"I'm just gonna head to the girl's room. Back in a sec..."
"Kay."
I walked inside the public outhouse, and started to almost inspect it. It was horrible. Toilet paper all over the floor and walls; even the ceiling! Water left its puddles all over the floor, and a few trails down the cream walls. The toilets weren't in any better condition... Lets just say they weren't as white as they should have been... I'm always left wondering what girls do in here!
I stepped inside one of the cubicles on the far end, and shut the door.
Clank...
My ears perked up at the sudden sound. I ignored it, thinking it must have been one of the pipes in the walls.
Clank...
Or not... I stayed perfectly still, and listened. I could feel someone else's presence.
Was is Ash? Why would he be in here... Was he going to...?! No. He wasn't that type of guy... Right?
I resumed what I was doing, only to hear the sound again.
Clank...Clank...
Someone was defiantly here.
"Ash?" I whimpered.
No response.
I quickly finished what I was doing, and cautiously opened the door. No one...
I looked twice, three times, four, no one... Then, I went to rush out. Screw washing my hands... It's not like they could get any cleaner with the state of these taps anyway.
"Come `er!" A rough voice exclaimed, and before I knew it, my arms were forced behind my back and my mouth and nose were covered.
I couldn't think straight... I could feel the blood pound in my ears. Soon I found I was having trouble standing. I couldn't breathe! I begged for air, I needed it now more then ever; but his hand didn't move an inch, no matter how hard a thrashed.
"Mmeeeah. Mem me mu..." I was begging for him to let me go. "Maahhhhhh!" I was screaming.
My vision got worse and worse as the lack of oxygen finally made my knees buckle. I suddenly found I didn't have the strength to move. My body fell limp in his arms, and he chucked me across the room. My head hit the wall, but not quite hard enough to knock the conciousness out of me. I still had to suffer through the sight ahead of me...
My vision was so blurry, but I could still see a dark figure make its way to me in the contrast of the light coloured walls. My brain still wasn't comprehending what was going on, but I knew I was in danger... Before I had the chance to scream, I felfhis cold hand slap itself on my mouth, and his other hand roughly grope my thighs. He tore my jeans from my body with no hesitation. My legs jumped as I felt the chilled wind hit them. I heard something small and metal rattle, and noticed him fiddling with his belt. Then it hit home. My worst nightmare. He finally managed to strip of his belt, and bring his pants down to his knees as he kneeled on the tiled floor.
I felt his hands make their way up to my hip. His cold fingers finding their way to my most private area...
Then, the chance I had be waiting for. He removed his hand from my mouth, and down towards his own pants.
I had no hesitation.
I screamed.
"Stupid little bitch! You're mine-"
"Like shit!"
The scream took so much out of me, but a feel of relief flooded over me as I realised he was lying flat on the floor.
"What the hell?!" He casted an echo of his rough voice through the bathroom.
"You lucked out..." He was knocked to the floor again with the hard hand of Ash.
The man lied there unconscious.
"C'mon..." He said softly. I was surprised at how calm he acted, although, when he lifted me up I could feel his entire arm shaking.
He helped me stand, all while staring at the man on the floor.
"Can you walk?" I groaned. My head was repeatedly pounding the entire situation in my head. My head dropped down, and the blurred sight of my blood on the white floor was enough for me. I fainted.
beep... beep... beep...
That sound echoed in my head. Which, mind you, hurt like hell. I could feel the blood pulsating in my head. I began fidgeting, praying that loud thump of my blood would stop.
"Dawn?!" I heard a gasp. I opened my eyes, and slowly regained vision. Towering over my was the sight of two dark eyes. And, without notice, it seemed the unwanted thumping had stopped.
I smiled at the sight. The sight of him made my pain go unnoticed.
"Please say something..." He looked so tired. I wondered why. Was he really that worried about me?
"Hi..." I whispered.
A sigh of relief escaped his lips. "Thank god you're ok..."
"I wouldn't exactly call this ok. But it could be worse, but it's not. Thanks to you..."
"Yeah, but it could be better... I'm sorry..."
I took his hand. "Don't be..."
He smiled. "It's good to know you're alright... You're mum's coming by the way. The nurse found your record, and called her straight away."
"Thanks." I whispered gently, my eyes drooping shut.
I felt him pull his hand away from mine, and soon felt all the heat in the air disappear. I felt so lonely, very quickly as my hand quickly jumped back to his.
He shit back around.
"Please, stay with me..."
He smiled softly at me, and shifted over, so he was sitting next to me on my bed, his head leaning on the back wall.
I snaked my arm over his chest, and leaned into him, digging my face into the soft, homely feel of the fabric of his shirt. He wrapped his arms firmly around me and kissed my forehead.
"Dawn! Are you ok?!" I heard my mum screech. Suddenly I could hear that thump again...
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AN: Still wasn't really my best… It sounded kinda… cliché.
You'll have to try and ignore my sluggish writing for now, when I started I was still trying to wake up... Then I had some drama to attend to (multiple actually) and now I'm begging to get to bed...
But still, I enjoyed writing it! Lets just hope I don't get some twisted lucid dream about it X)
But, once again, thanks for reading!! =D