Thanks sooooo much for your entries i rally had trouble writing one.

i really hope you like this one it was sent in by a reveiwer and i thought "why not"

It's based on Archlanta so plz enjoy! :D

xoxoxoxoxox

a small one-shot on my new fave old song "that's the way i loved you" by Taylor Swift

"Wow, you look really beautiful tonight" he said smoothly. He gave me a peck on the cheek and flashed me that award winning smile that made many girls go weak at the knees.

"Thanks" I finally manage to squeak out. I smile weakly at him.

'Come on" he takes my hand and leads me towards his brand new red convertible. It feels comfortable but not right.

He opens the car door like a gentleman and I slide pass him.

He hops in and takes my hand, gives it a squeeze and smiles gently at me.

I struggle to smile back.

He is sensible and so incredible
And all my single friends are jealous
He says everything I need to hear and it's like
I couldn't ask for anything better
He opens up my door and I get into his car
And he says you look beautiful tonight
And I feel perfectly fine

When I get back to the brownstone I barely get five steps in before Theresa yanks me upstairs pushes me in her room and locks the door.

"Ohmygodwhathappend?!" she yelled excitedly, bouncing up and down.

"God Theresa, calm down" I say rolling my eyes, I sit down on her bed and let out a sigh.

"How was it? Was it good? Bad? Great?, did he kiss you?, well of course he kissed you but that doesn't matter, any way did you kiss him back?" she started jabbering on before I got up and put a hand over her fast moving mouth.

"Ok a-it was good, b-yes he did kiss me, and c-yes I did give him a peck back, now if you don't mind I'm quite tired so I'm going to go to bed goodnight Theresa"

I finished on a firm note, and walked out of the room leaving Theresa to take in all the information I gave her.

But I didn't go to my room I went upstairs to the roof to look at the moonlight.

I lent against the brick wall in the darkness and cried.

But I miss screaming and fighting and kissing in the rain
And it's 2am and I'm cursing your name
You're so in love that you act insane
And that's the way I loved you
Breaking' down and coming undone
It's a roller coaster kinda rush
And I never knew I could feel that much
And that's the way I loved you

You see Davis is great an all

He always respects my space leaves me alone when I'm upset

He never makes me wait and he's never late to dates or meetings.

He calls when he Sais he will, he always Sais I look beautiful.

He's close to my mum when it comes to schooling and stuff; he talks good business with my dad.

He's perfect, charming, romantic everything that a girl ever wants in a guy.

But he's not every thing that I want in a guy.

He respects my space
And never makes me wait
And he calls exactly when he says he will
He's close to my mother
Talks business with my father
He's charming and endearing
And I'm comfortable

But I can't even remember the first date i went on with Davis

But I can remember every single date I went on with him,

He took me to this carnival near town, we had a picnic where we joked around like normal, we fought playfully over which rides are better then other rides, we both had tons of fun on a roller coaster and at the end it started raining so we ran under shelter to dry off, I spun around on the pole then he lent in and gently kissed me. I felt electricity flow through me it felt perfect.

But I miss screaming and fighting and kissing in the rain
And it's 2am and I'm cursing your name
You're so in love that you act insane
And that's the way I loved you
Breakin' down and coming undone
It's a roller coaster kinda rush
And I never knew I could feel that much
And that's the way I loved you

I look up at the stars, every night I after a date with Archie I would sneak up here and look at the stars and I would always think of the crazy date we had just been on, I would laugh and the things we joked about and then smile a true smile.

I look up at the stars tonight after my date with Davis, I thought of the perfect date I had just been to, but I couldn't remember the last time I truly laughed at a joke that Davis had said I couldn't even remember a joke he had mentioned tonight. I tried to smile but I all I felt were tears and they were tears of sadness not joy.

he can't see the smile i'm faking
and my heart's not breaking
cause i'm not feeling anything at all
and you were wild and crazy
just so frustrating intoxicating
complicated, got away by some mistake and now

I get off the cold floor and walk over to the balcony; I lean on the edge and take in a deep breath. I shiver because of all the cold when I suddenly feel something warm drape over me.

I turn around and stare into the eyes that I still love so dearly, they were warm, caring, funny and curious all at once.

"Um thanks" mumble, I don't know why but I suddenly break down and start crying,

He pulls me close like he used to, Davis never does, Davis just walks away thinking I need space.

"Hey, don't cry it'll be ok"

"I'm sorry" I stutter.

i miss screaming and fighting and kissing in the rain
it's 2am and i'm cursing your name
i'm so in love that i acted insane
and that's the way i loved you
breaking down and coming undone
it's a roller coaster kinda rush
and i never knew i could feel that much
and that's the way i loved you oh, oh

"You're sorry for what?"

"I'm sorry for how we ended, It was stupid and now I realise how perfect we were and how much fun we had and how much fun we had, I miss having with you around, and I'm sorry and I know you don't feel the same way but I do I feel-'"

I was cut off by Archie's lips pressing down on mine, they were soft and warm and I remembered.

Before I could stop myself I kissed back, he deepened the kiss by placing a arm round my waist drawing me closer.

He broke the kiss and we stared lovingly in each others eyes

"I love you too" he whispered.

and that's the way i loved you oh, oh
never knew i could feel that much
and that's the way i loved you

there done!

phew! i know its crap but i enjoyed wirting it

so R&R

thanks

peace out!

xoxoxox