Alright you little critics, I'm going to share a little secret with you. Fanfiction isn't a book (le gasp). So when you leave reviews about grammar and whatnot, you're only showing how little you know of the internet. This is Fanfiction, note the word FAN, as in mostly young adults come on here to write their own reality down and then decide to share it, hoping that there is someone else out there who shares the same thoughts.

We're not writing essays that will be graded for quality of a person's grammar; we're writing it for the joy and the plot. If you want the grammar then read a book. Now please get off the internet before you continue stomping around like you know what you're doing. You're embarrassing yourself.