Someone Help me, Please!!

Summary: This is my first fanfiction please be kind. This first Chapter is to give you some back ground, it will get better. Please read and give me a chance. It has taken me along time build-up the confidence to write a story. I have read so many wonderful stories on this site and I hope to live up the standereds.

Please, Please, Please review, because if this story suck I would really like to know so I don't wast my time. Thank you

Bella was a normal girl from a small town, but one day everything changed. Rated M.

All Human, there will be abuse, sex related topics, and more. If you don't like these topics please don't read.

Only positive feed back please

Chapter 1

Bella was born in Forks, Washington to Charlie and Renee Swan. They lived in a two story white house right next to the vast forest that engulfed the Pacific Northwest. She was a happy child with a normal upbringing. Her dad was police chief of Forks and her mom was a home maker, who from time to time would have a wild idea for a home business or would take up a craft like painting or photography.

Bella's best friend since kindergarten was Jessica Stanley. From the first day of school the girls were attached at the hip. They were both only children and thought of each other as sisters but Jessica's home life was nothing like Bella's. Her dad was a drunk and her mom was addicted to pain medications, no-one knew anything except Bella. Jessica's parents acted normal outside the house but when the door shut to blocked-out the outside world their masks where removed and Jessica's nightmare would begin.

Jessica took comfort in that she was always welcomed at the Swan's home. She would spend 90% of her time there, like the second daughter Charlie and Renee never had. The fact was Renee and Jessica's mom Jackie were best friends in high school and Jackie was always working or so she said. Jackie liked that she was over there because she could do has she pleased and didn't have to worry about Jessica and what would happen if her father got a hold of her again.

Jessica's mom was an attorney and her father Dan was a police officer and worked with Charlie. What Charlie and the rest of the world didn't know was that Dan was physically, mentally, and sexually abusive towards Jessica. No-one but Bella and Jackie knew.

Now the girls were in high school and having fun. Jessica all but lived at Bella's house and life was good until the night of November 13th 2009. It was Charlie and Renee's anniversary, they went to Port Angles for dinner and it started to snow hard. They were on their way home when a logging truck lost control and rolled and taking out Charlie's police cruiser in the process.

Bella was left an orphan and unknown to her, Renee and Charlie's will announced Jackie and Dan has her guardians. This shock Bella, Jessica, and Jackie but not Dan. He had convinced Charlie to talk Ranee into this in-case anything should happen to them, he didn't want anything to separate girls or so he told Charlie.

Bella moved into the Stanley home and her nightmare began.

What do you think? Should I continue??