This is the story of me in the bullworth acadamy with my real brother Raul

It was a long drive to get to Bullworth Acadomy I was asleep for most of the drive when I woke up I was with my twin Raul and the reason we had to go to this god forsaken school raul tricked me into skiping but a cop got us both but me and Raul ran before he got to us but we both got rundown and we got expelled so we had to go to this school but it all isn't so bad at least i have my brother. But what I saw as a rampant clique bonanza the only one's i recognized were the Jocks and the Bullys me and raul went to the main office to get our uniforms raul got a blue one and i got a green uniform with the school emblem on it but when we got to the boys dorm 3 bullys got us they seemed to know how to fight and i said to Raul that he should grab his baseball bat and raul could fight with fists but he does better with a bat. when one of them was coming at me I punched one of them in the nose and I kicked the other one in the stomach and raul beat the 3rd one down with the baseball bat I told raul these guys werent so tough but when we were about to go inside a huge tall bully came he said his name was Russell and me and Raul did the only thing we could do run. We ran into the dorm and into a room that had two beds and locked the door damn it i said to Raul not even an hour here and we have the biggest kid here on our ass and he said we should stay together so we dont get jumped.

Me and Raul went back to the office to get our schedual and they thought it was a good idea to put us into the same classes together but me and him got busted for not wearing the school uniforms so we went back to the dorm and got on our uniforms and Raul with his blue and my green one and our first class was art which i thought i would suck at but i passed today but Raul failed but the next class was gym which was me and Raul going up against a nerd in wrestling. I thought it was a little harsh but me and raul passed and the last class for the day was metal shop and the teacher told us to tell our names to the class i told them my name was Carl and my brother told them his name me and Raul pased by helping eachother make a bike and the teacher said that we could keep it. but during lunch raul told me to go to town and grab some food because the food was being handled by an ugly old woman and on the way on the bike I saw to rich kids bullying a little girl and I ran up to them and kicked one in the face and punched the other one in the gut the little girl ran which made me happy but when I least expected it one of the kids grabed me but I elbowed him in the face. I rode back to school and told Raul what happened so me and we just ate some apples but me and Raul split up and walked around but Raul told me he joined the football team and wouldent get back until 6:00 and I got back to the dorms and i met a girl named Pinky.

this is my first chapter so please dont critisize to harsh since im not a natural writer