Hi! This is my first fanfic so I'm not really sure if it's any good. Please comment on it and tell me whether or not you want me to continue, cause I don't want to be writing something no one wants to read. Thanks :)
This actually isn't the story yet! I'm just introducing the characters here, because most of them are pretty different from how they are in the books. Oh, and know that no one's a spy in this story, so the school everyone's going to is Roseville High.
Disclaimer: I don't own the Gallagher Girls series or characters– though I wish I did :)
Enter Zach - Irresistibly hot (and he knows it), wittily sarcastic, he's the bad boy all the girls secretly crave but can never get. So it's strange when he arrives to school one day with a girl on his arm – and the resident almost-supermodel, Macey McHenry, no less.
And so of course there's Macey herself - Like Zach, she's a beyond-gorgeous hottie. Their difference? Whereas Zach never dates, she goes through guys faster than she goes through new outfits (and that's saying a lot). She seems to be serious about Zach though…
There's also Cammie, otherwise known as the Chameleon. She's your typical girl-next-door with a bonus – her ratings in the looks department are just as high as Macey and Zach's, yet boy does she not know it. Best friends with Zach since they were toddlers, and finding a new friend in Macey, even she is surprised when she sees the linked arms between them at school one day. She has a secret too though – she's been secretly in love with Zach for a year.
Josh Abrams – He's definitely a cutie, and Zach's best friend. Sweet and considerate, he's got his fair share of admirers. Too bad he only has eyes for Cammie when Zach is the only one she wants.
Bex Baxter and Grant Newman – They were the school's IT on-and-off couple before Zach and Macey happened. Both very close to Cammie, they see through her calm exterior to the hurt she feels when she sees Zach with Macey. Unnoticed by the Chameleon, they devise a plan as to how to get Zach to fall in love with Cammie.
Liz Sutton – She's probably the smartest kid at school, but it's not definite because of a special somebody. Not very popular by herself, she's been living a much better life ever since she helped Cammie with a math problem and earned herself a new friend.
Jonas McHenry – Yes, that's right folks. He's the brother of Macey. Not such a bad looker himself, it's his love for school that keeps girls from tossing themselves at him. This is the guy that's making Liz not so sure of herself anymore. Is it really just a battle of intelligence going on between the two – or is there something more there?
Your typical teenage love story? I don't think so. Hearts will break, secrets spilled, lessons taught, and miracles may just happen, but we must remember that these are still normal teenagers we're talking about. Or are they?
Excerpt from story:
Cammie POV
I felt my heart shatter into a million pieces. So this was it, huh? My four years in high school spent dropping tiny hints at Zach about my true feelings, which, by the way, if he'd noticed, he never mentioned about – they'd all been nothing. Who was I to think that someone as perfect as Zach Goode would ever want to have anything to do with a plain Jane like me? Sure, he was my best friend. But even then, I was just "one of the guys." Out of all the girls in the school, only Bex and Macey could meet up to Zach in the quadriple threat department: good looks, personality, IQ, and athleticism, and since Bex was already taken, that left only Macey.
I walked up to my mirror and looked at myself closely. Straight dirty blonde hair. Check. Neutral green eyes. Check. Cute nose. Check. Stubborn mouth. Check. Average cheekbones. Check. Yep, still plain old me. And this was when my hope of living happily ever after with Zachary J. Goode truly flickered and died.
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