Revised:

Jack's dream~


The orange hazmat suit clad man sat in front of a large table. The table was empty other than one singe plate in front of Jack.

The man himself was absorbed in his desires for food. He was busy banging his fork and knife against the hard wood, causing a beat to go with his chanting.

"Fudge! Fudge! Fudge! Fudge! Fudge! Fudge! Fudge!" he sang loudly.

His happy song only increased in volume as a sweet scent enveloped the room.

"Fudge! Fudge! Fudge! Fudge! Fudge! Fudge! Fudge! Fudge!"

A woman in a light blue hazmat suit sashayed into the room. She was carrying two covered plates of food. Jack cheered at the sight of his wife.

She placed the two plates in front of her husband and revealed the contents with a flourish.

Maddie laughed at her husband's joyful yell. Jack paid her no mind as he dug into the multitude of fudge presented it him.

Peanut butter, caramel, macadamia nut, white chocolate; it was all fudge to Jack. And he loved it all.

The fudge never ran out, Maddie running from the kitchen to the table with another batch every few minutes.

Jack hummed in happiness.


Yeah, this version is a lot better.

Hope everyone likes it~