I wanted to say i don't own darkest powers other wise chloe and derek would be older and it wouldn't be so pg in places coughcough in the bathroom after the fight coughcough

thanks to everyone to posting i love them reviews! you should see my face when i read them i glow and the teacher are getting annoyed at the glowing at the beginning of class. oh to chloeify123 in here is the anwser to your question read and find out ^-^ oh person95 i hope this is more clear to read... sorry this is late i was trying to get one more review but i couldn't wait any longer to post ENJOY!

I was still on the ground and blood was dripping down from my mouth when I saw the man take out a knife.

"Lets change tactics…"

He made one cut on my body and turn towards Derek. He looked like he was ready to kill. All the men around him backed off and they made a circle with the three of us inside of it.

With Derek's speed the man couldn't make a hit. Well that's what I thought until this man some how spilt in two. One looked like what a ghost should look like, see thru, and the other was solid. It looked like it wasn't just Derek against one but two.

That man was toying with us and wasn't going to let us go. He had done what I thought that he couldn't do. He was torturing Derek. The ghost somehow could control where Derek went, like it was herding him towards the knife.

In one hand was the knife and in the other was the police nightstick both had blood on them. Once again he hit Derek and this time Derek was thrown to the ground. An evil laugh broke through the freezing air and into my soul.

"Well, well, well, your holding up well I guess that I might still be able to have some fun with… your mate if that's what you want to call her."

"You won't touch her."

"Really now?"

With that the ghost form came rushing towards me and lifted me into the air as if I was some type of prize. Where the form touched me I could feel a burning energy. It hurt more than the sting of the nightstick. Was Derek feeling this pain every time the ghost touched him?

Derek yelled at the man "tell that thing to tell her go"

Now that evil man had Derek in a vice like grib with the knife to his neck

"Not until…."

Whatever that man said next I had no clue to what it was. All I could see was the knife ready to kill Derek. And I HATED IT.

Then it hit me with all the time that I was alone with him and what he was doing to keep me safe I had fallen for him, I care for him. Sure I had thought that I had liked Simon but most of the time Simon was flirting with me, nothing more. While Derek was trying to keep me and everyone else safe, every time I looked at Derek I had felt something weird now I know what that was, affection! Every time he walking in the room when I was alone with Simon I was a little bit happy that he did. Why did it take me so long to realize it?

Still being held by this ghost my fury rose. It felt like I had no control over myself. I had no clue what I was doing but I knew that I wanted this man gone and all of his men. And I didn't care what I had to do to have them disappear. That's when I felt and saw something take over. A bright light covered me and gave me warmth telling me that it will be ok.

Dereks view

I saw chole being lefted into the air. First I saw was the hand than from there the rest of the see thru thing. It was choking chole and it was pissing me off. Something inside my head was calling for me to use everything I had to stop what he was doing to chole. I went for attack when this man stopped to say something. But some how he turned me so my back was facing him and the knife was agaist me neck. That's when I saw the light start coming from chole.

"Not until we get her to open the rift." He whipstered into my ear, I could tell he was smiling.

The air around us started to warm, and … shake? How could the air shake? It wasn't the air but the ground. Many things were crawling out from the ground, even in the dark I could see them them. Crys ands yells came and along with it a stink. I took me eyes off of the crawling things and turned my attentions to chloe. Her eyes caught me, they were no longer the sea blue but a glowing crimson almost black. What was she doing? This couldn't be chloe, she would never use her powers like this.

Then she spoke. But it wasn't just her voice but an thousand other ones humans and nonhuman alike together.

"How dare you think that we would bend to your will and let you destroy this girl? This girl is more powerful than the likes of you. You are a parasight drinking lifeblood to have powers of your own. We will no longer allow you to live."

The voices coming from chloes mouth started to chant I knew It was in another language but I caught the meaning.

" dust to dust life to death"

but there voices started to fade then it was just chloe's voice again...

hey hope its still a good story line yea i know its totally different than the book but i want chloe to fight back and this is my way of making her strong! (yea by making her lose her self to the power yea real smart- inner being) Can i hope for 30 ( more like 27) lets prove my inner wrong we can do it!

any misstakes or anything that could change to make anything clear don't be scare to shout it out i don't bite. unless your grammer then i bite. i bite hard. i hate you for making my life hard.