~~~~ A/N - hey yall. this is my first fanfiction story. i need feedback. i know its probably not great, but any comments are welcome. so here it goes. ~~~~

summary- Bella is a 14 year old girl, living in the small North Carolina town, Red Oak. When an unexpected person shows up in Bella's life how will her story change? first Fanfiction.\

Ugh. I don't know how much more of this I can take!

I mean, sure life in the NC was fine, but shit. If I had to go home to my mom and her loser boyfriend one more time I swear I was going to hurl.

Last night was only the FOURTH time that she forgot about me and went to 'bed'. Not to mention that she locked me out of the house.

Geez. Who did she think that she was kidding!? I knew that as soon as she went to bed she had Jim enter through the window of her bedroom. Come on! I was 14 almost 15 years old! I knew exactly what went on in there. I just decided to let it go. I just tried to pretend like it didn't happen.

I've been doing that my whole life.

When I was 2 my parent split. I have never heard anything from my dad. The only thing I know is that his name is Charlie and that he lives in some tiny little town in Washington, Forks. Ha. The name still cracks me up. Forks? Ha-ha.. Is there a spoons? Plate? Knifes? Anyways, back on subject.

So that's my dull life story. And now here I am, working the night shift at the ice skating rink about 5 blocks from my house. It was the only one in all of Red Oak.

I spent my time sitting behind a counter with the occasional skater. Mostly I just fantasized about my dad.

I wondered if I looked like him. Talked like him? Had anything in common with him?

These were the thoughts going through my head when I first saw him.

The hottest boy I had ever seen in my whole life.

He had jet black hair, it was cut short. But not in the buzz cut kind of way, more the 'god I just want to run my hands through it' way. He wore a plain white v-neck tee-shirt. But damn. He made it look good. It fit perfectly to his abs, which I could just barely see through it. He had a pair of tightly fitted, denim jeans. But he pulled it off. He looked a little older than me. But that didn't matter to me. He was just hot.

In the time it took me to make my assessment he had made his way to the counter.

Yeah. He was right in front of me.

"Hey" he said.

…. And I just looked at him like an idiot.

"Uh.. H-hey." I said. God, pull it together.

He chuckled. Oh my lord. His laugh. I was pretty sure that my heart just melted.

"Your Bella, right?" he asked.

He was amazingly oblivious to my swooning state. That or, he was just a good actor.

"um.. yeah." I said."Do I know you?"

He laughed again.

"Nahh, you have a name tag." He laughed again.

"oh yeah.." and my famous blush made its appearance.

"Hey, I'm Jacob, Jacob Black" he told me.

"Nice to meet you." I said. Then I realized what he probably needed. "oh right, uh what size skates?"

He laughed again… His impossibly perfect laugh.

"No, I don't skate. I'd fall and make myself look like a complete idiot." He smiled at me. Damn. His smile. It made my head go haywire. It was like I couldn't think.

"oh.." *insert embarrassed laugh here*"then what did you need?" I asked.

He looked kind of nervous "I came to give you a message." He said. Never meeting my eyes. "It's from your dad."

Wait. What?!

~~~~~ A/N - so..? what do you think? review. there better than a hot Jacob Black. ok.. maybe not. [: REVIEW! ~~~~~