KI WIELDING NIN

CHAPTER ONE

Naruto woke just before dawn, ten seconds before his alarm went off. With a sigh he stood and slowly began to dress in his horrendous orange jumpsuit. Naruto knew that his jumpsuit made him a walking bullseye, but it was all the shops would sell him. Naruto wasn't as dumb and happy go lucky as everyone claimed him to be, he simply wore a mask to keep everyone off his back. With another sigh, the blonde left to meet his team, throwing on his smile as he neared the exit.

Team seven walked towards wave, their client Tazuna trailed behind them, standing near the jounin. Taking a glance forward from his book, Kakashi spotted a puddle of water. Making a quick handseal, he put his plan into motion. It was then that all hell broke loose. His team was able to hold of the demon brothers while they were attached by their battle chain, but when Sasuke broke the chain, the two showed why they were worthy of being called chunin. Kakashi still held faith that his team would overcome the two, with teamwork, but that didn't happen. The two brothers split, forcing his team to do so also. Sasuke struggled for a bit, but quickly forced his opponent into a defensive position. Naruto on the other hand struggled. Just as the nin was about to kill the blonde, his eyes iris split into a spiral. As Naruto looked at the man in front of him, he saw a spiral spread across his body, starting from his heart. As the spiral finished spreading, Naruto noticed eight large circles appeared on the lines of the spiral in different places. On above the heart, both lungs had one, the man's liver, larynx, diaphragm, the center of the man's body, just missing the organs and leading to the spine, one on the man's forehead, indicating the brain, and one over the man's kidney. All around the spiral was hundreds of smaller circles, which would take a senbon to hit.

Acting on instinct, Naruto stabbed a kunai into the large circle above the man's kidney. Unknowingly Naruto added chakra into the kunai, and the spiral on the man split and shattered as the man fell to the ground bleeding profusely. Before Naruto could react, he felt his body being pulled. Turning, he heard a scream from his teammates as he saw them sucked into a swirling black whirlpool. Without warning, Naruto felt his body fly into the darkness, and everything went black.

Naruto woke with the sun glaring into his eyes. With a groan, he stood and took in his surroundings. He was on a beach, surrounded by water on all sides, which lead him to believe that he wasn't in fire country anymore. He noticed a small kid with a stick poking Sasuke. The kid wore a yellow top with a kanji in the middle of the circle in the middle of the boy's shirt. The sleeves were forest green along with his pants. He wore black sneakers and a hat with a small ball on top with four stars. Looking closely, Naruto noticed a long brown…tail? No way was that a tail, humans don't have those, right. Further down the beach Naruto noticed his sensei and an old man, both reading the orange porn Kakashi had, giggling as they turned the pages.

Naruto walked towards Sasuke as the boy slowly woke, putting his hand above his eyes to block the sun.

"Hey dobe, where are we?" Sasuke questioned.

Naruto snorted before looking around. "No fucking idea teme." The blonde responded.

As Kakashi noticed his students awake, he walked over to them. "Hey Naruto, what was that power you used earlier and where did you get the Rasengan (1)?"

Naruto looked at him pensively. "What are you talking about, what power and what the hell is a Rasengan?"

"It felt like my body was sucked into a whirlpool, and the Rasengan is a doujutsu. Try channelling chakra to your eyes."

Naruto did and once again his eyes split into a spiral. "Hey I can see a spiral over you guys too."

As this exchange took place, a man with spiky black hair, wearing an orange gi with a blue undershirt watched. His black eyes widened in surprise as the blonde's eyes changed.

Walking over to the trio, he spoke. "Hey I'm Goku and this is my son Gohan. Who are you and what's with his eyes?"

"I'm Kakashi and these are my students Naruto and Sasuke, my other one, Sakura is lying over there." Kakashi pointed to the mound of pink beneath a tree. "His eyes are a special ability called the Rasengan, meaning the Spiral Eye. It's a family trait that his clan has."

Before anyone could say more, a woman with light blue hair and a lab coat walked out with a tray of drinks. Handing them out, everyone looked to Kakashi as he went to drink, hoping to catch a glimpse of his face. The all face faulted when he drunk through his mask, before drinking their own. As they drunk, a short bald man with six dots on his forehead, wearing orange stepped out of the house.

"I'm Bulma and the short guy here is Krillin." The blue haired girl said as Sakura stirred.

Naruto's eyes shot to the sky, seconds before a voice boomed. "KAKAROT!"

A man wearing black pant, black boots, and thick rubber chest armor floated down just on the edge of the island. His black hair extended down to his waist and on his right ear was a head set of sorts. The ear piece was green and a green half visor hovered in front of his right eye. Looking around, they watched as yellow numbers flashed on the visor, before the man smirked.

"You've grown. Even still I recognize you kakarot." The man said, confusing the group. "That's right, don't you remember your name."

Goku's face scrunched up in confusion once more as Krillin spoke. " This guy must be nuts."

" Kakarot, what have you been doing all these years. Your mission was to exterminate the life on this planet, why hasn't your mission been completed?" The man said, slightly frustrated.

Krillin, upon noticing the man eying Goku curiously stepped forward. " Listen mister, I think you've got the wrong party." The man smirked. " Shoo. Shoo. Allow me to show you off the island." Krillin stepped forward, causing the numbers on the radar to blip a couple times.

The man's brown belt began to glow before it shot out and sent Krillin flying from the powerful hit. Naruto looked at him shocked, as he noticed the fluffy brown belt was actually a tail. Ignoring Goku as he called to the bald man, Naruto turned to the man.

" What's with the tail?" The blonde questioned, causing everyone to look at the tail in wonder. " You some sort of monkey."

Goku looked at him shocked. " He's got a tail too!" Goku spoke still in surprise.

The man smirked again and crossed his arms before speaking. " So you know who I am at least?"

" What are you talking about, I've never met you before." Goku call placing a hand on Gohan, who had wrapped around his leg. " Gohan, get back." The small boy ignored the order, instead clung harder, crying. " Daddy"

The man's smirk faded as he growled. " Grr. Tell me you must have suffered a serious blow to the head when you were young right?"

" What?" Goku retorted, clearly frustrated with the unknown man.

" When you were a kid, did you ever suffer from head injuries." The man said as he watched Goku try to pry Gohan off. " Did you hear me?!" The man said stepping forward as Bulma took Gohan.

Goku growled in response. " Yes. I don't remember it very well, but I did hit my head as a child, heh I even got the scar to prove it."

The statement made the man frustrated. " Fool! You forgot."

Before Goku could respond, the old man decided to speak. " Goku, there's something your grandfather told me that I think you should know. Along time ago, he found a spaceship of sorts in the woods. Laying in the ship was you. Gohan tried to take care of you, but you were wild, uncontrollable, and unusually powerful. You outright refused Gohan's kindness, until one day there was an accident. You fell into a ravine and badly injured your head, you recovered, but you were different. After that day, you were calmer, happy and loving."

Goku looked at the old man questioningly. " You mean I'm from outer space?"

" Yes, it seems that way." Came the reply from the old man.

Turning back to the tailed man, Goku queried. " Who are you then and what do you want from me?"

As Krillin began to get up, the man answered. " I want to put you to work." Came the short reply.

"Goku, be careful, he's not normal." Krillin called as he walked towards the group.

The man snorted. " You are not normal either my forgetful friend. You, like me, were born on the great planet vegeta. You are a space fighter, a saiyan warrior just like me."

The shinobi looked at the two shocked, having never dealt with warriors that weren't human or summon.

The man smirked once more. " Allow me to introduce myself. I am Raditz, your elder brother." Every eye widened, but the shinobi who had no idea what was going on.

" Goku has a brother?" Came the question from Krillin.

Goku's fist clenched hard as he growled at Raditz. " Why should I believe you?"

" Yeah, if he's from your planet, then why does he live on earth." Krillin threw in.

Raditz smirked. " Simple really. We saiyans can be considered planet brokers of sorts. We find planets that would go for high prices and purge them of life, making the ready for sale. So when are client requested a planet such as this one, we sent Kakarot down to clear it of life. You see, for the strong planets we must send out our adult fighters, but for weak planets such as this one, one of our babies will suffice. Kakarot was sent to clean up this planet, but he obviously forgot his mission."

Everyone around growled, but it was Naruto that spoke. " If what you say is true, then you saiyans are abominations. To send a baby out into the depths of space alone with no one to teach them or nurture them is barbaric." The jinchuuriki spat.

" Enough, don't get me mad. Kakarot, with the help of the full moon, you could have destroyed them all in just a few years if only you had remembered." Raditz growled.

" Full moon, what does that have to do with anything." Goku called, shocking Raditz.

" Even with memory loss, surely you must transform at the full moon like every…" Raditz then noticed his brothers lack of a tail. " What happened to your tail?"

Goku looked confused for a moment. " It was removed a long time ago."

" Fool! Do you know what you've done?! Your true power is gone now that you have lost the ability to transform at the full moon. Now I see why you are on good turf with such weaklings!" Raditz growled.

" Listen! This is my home and these are my friends so it doesn't matter what you say I am. And you don't seem like any brother I'd wanna have. My name is Goku and I live here! Now leave us alone."

" Yeah just go." Bulma called. " Yeah leave us, and even if he was your brother, he doesn't have to destroy peaceful planets like you do." The old man called. " Goku even saved this planet once mister, so go away." Krillin stated.

Raditz chuckled. " Sorry, no can do. Our home planet met with an unfortunate accident. Three years ago a large comet smashed into it, causing it to blow, wiping out everyone left on the planet. Only a few survived, you Kakarot are one of them. Now, you are eeded. We have a planet that is sure to bring in premium rate, but the job requires more man power. That's were you come in Kakarot. So what do ya think?" Raditz was now face to face with Goku, who backed away slightly. " Are you excited? You should be. I've come to tack you back into the fold."

Goku was in front of Bulma and Gohan, who was whimpering in fear.

" I've had enough." Goku called. " You don't have to worry about that, the answer is no." Naruto walked up to Goku, followed by Sakura, Sasuke, and Kakashi.

Raditz looked surprised as his scouter blipped when Sakura stepped in front of it. " Well it seems someone else has saiyan blood."

Naruto and the other's looked at Sakura in shock, having not expected on of their own to be an alien. In fact, from the shock look on her face, Sakura must not have known either. All of them stared once more as the scouter blipped at Gohan.

Raditz smirked, noticing the boy's tail. " Now that's a true saiyan. Since you won't come along, I'll that the boy instead and I'm sure there's something we can do about the girl's tail."

Naruto and Goku slid into a stance, Naruto's surprising his team. " We'll see." The two called together.

Naruto made a quick hand sign and several clones popped into view around Sakura and Gohan.

Raditz looked at the clones. " Impressive, if you were a saiyan I'd bring you also, but alas this is a saiyans job." Goku growled. " I see it brother, the fire in your eyes. Come with us brother, it's in your blood, you love to fight."

The elder brother stepped forward. " Now then." Goku tensed as he continued forward.

" Get 'em dad." Gohan called from the center of the clones.

" I'm with you Goku." Krillin called stepping up beside Goku and Naruto.

" Stay close to Sakura and Gohan." Goku called as raditz closed in on them.

Naruto looked at his opponent carefully. " Heh, finally a challenge."

Everyone looked on in surprise as the blonde grinned. " Oi dobe, what are you talking about." Sasuke called.

" That. It's always dobe this, dobe that. Did it ever occur to you all that I was hiding my strength." Naruto's statement surprised all of them, especially Kakashi, who figure there was something wrong with the blonde.

Kakashi had always wondered how the blonde could pull of such elaborate pranks, but fail the genin exam twice.

Before anyone could comment on the statement, raditz laughed. " Boy, you would make an excellent saiyan. Too bad you aren't though, you could probably have surpassed me one day." raditz blurred out of view and appeared in front of Goku, his knee in Goku's stomach.

Naruto watched as Kakashi lifted his headband, revealing his Sharingan. Naruto grinned before activating his Rasengan.

" So you changed your eyes, do you really thin that's going to help you." Raditz said.

Naruto knew he was right, as all of the large circles but the one above his brain was covered in armor. The armor was too thick for a kunai to pierce. Naruto charged forward and attacked, only to be dodged and kicked in the back. As Naruto hit the ground, Sasuke charged forward, making handseals.

" Katon: Goukakyou no jutsu." The raven haired Uchiha called breathing out fire. The fire hit raditz and did nothing, other than singe his armor slightly.

With a growl, several clones charged and attacked. Raditz swung his foot out, destroying a vast number of clones, before leaping in the air and destroying more with a beam of energy. Sasuke charged at the saiyan with a kunai in each hand. The man dodged the boy, before kicking him away as a kunai flew at his back. Dodging the kunai, raditz heard a loud chirping.

Turning, he saw Kakashi behind him, lightning held in his hand as the chirping became screeches. " RAIKIRI." The copy nin called charging forward.

The Raikiri tore at the ground as Kakashi neared his target, only to be dodged and have his attack hit the ground in a large explosion. Raditz smirked and grabbed Gohan by his shirt, before knocking Sakura out and throwing her over his shoulder. A shockwave erupted beneath raditz as he took to the sky.

OKAY tryin this out. I read the original and was surprised that Gogeta48 didn't continue. Oh well. I decided to try my hand at it so here it is. I have another story coming out, but it will wait for awhile. Check out my trail run harry potter story. Lightning Mage. I will be updating my other stories, but two of them will be put on a temp hiatus because I have no clue where their going. I will try to get them back on track, but I'm focusing on other stories for the time being. Until next time

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