Rate: T (just for sure!)
Just something I thought about after watching the episode "How Long Is Forever?"
Take place after TT: Trouble in Tokyo!
The Alternated Future
Everything was calm at Titans Tower, actually too calm. Everyone was at the living room, everyone was in uncomfortable silence, and the only noise that could be heard was metal tickling in metal: the last adjustments were being made in a huge machine.
"I don't want to go" a girl around 13 years said breaking the silence "I want to stay hear and help in the war!"
"You need to go" A half metal man said, he was about the forties, but he was in really good shape for his age.
"But 20 years? Don't you think it's just too much?" the girl asked, she had beautiful big green eyes.
"Yes, they're planning it since you were born and the alliance was made, it'd better if we get prepared for it before you were born. Otherwise, we might don't be able to win this war." A woman wearing a blue cape approached, she was serious, but concerned.
"What if the past you consider me a treat or something? It'd be better for one of you go, don't you think?"
"You know as best as we do that we couldn't go even if we wanted" the same woman in blue cape replied again "We don't know what can happen if one of us find our past selves. It is a paradox"
"But I still think I can be more helpful in here, I can control my powers now, let the younger ones go, they'll be saver there"
"No way" A tall masked man with black clothes got closer "We'll stay here and fight, you'll go. Besides, everything started with you, so the best would be if you go"
"I can control my powers now, I swear! Please let me stay! I can be of assistance! I can fight!"
"You're going, and that's final" He said in his ordering tone, she knew this tone very well, she sighed, there was no way she could change his mind, he was just too stubborn to change. Another woman approached, touching her shoulder and smiling.
"Everything is going to be alright, you will see"
"Okay. But how I'm I suppose to come back? I can't take future's technology with me, or the time machine. Maybe I could take the papers of how to make the time machine, but according to our files, this technology doesn't exist yet in the time I'm going…"
"Give it to the past me, He'll build it, and when you turn it on, we'll manage to find your signal and Raven will grab you back just like se did to me when I got lost back in time" The half metal man said giving the girl some papers with things draw and written on it.
"Don't worry, you'll be just fine! We believe in you!" A green man with pointed years said trying to cheer her up, like he always does when she is sad, and so does his daughter.
The half metal man pressed some buttons at the machine he just finished to adjust, he turned it on, a black vortex opened, the green eyed girl looked at them for one more time, all of them nodded, and the red haired woman also smiled for her, she tried to smile back, and then entered the into the black vortex. The time was going back, she couldn't know how long she was inside the vortex, and all she knew was that when it ended, she fell to the floor of a dark room.
I decided to rewrite it cuz I thought it was not good enough, and besides, I had another ideas that wouln't really fit in the old story, so here I am, rewriting it all. I hope to get reveiws from people who read the other one and say if it's getting at least a little better or what should I do to get better.
So please, make this authour happy and leave a little review for me!
Itban Fuyu