Soooo… at long last, I return from the grave… maybe… I still haven't decided if I truly am coming back or if I just feel terrible for leaving all of you hanging for AGES (eek!) !
I'd like to give a big thanks to snowwygirl4 for snapping me out of my story neglection and making me realize that people still care.
So this miniminiminiminisuperdupermi niscule update of only 173 words is just to tie you over until I, hopefully, will post something new. My goal is to give you something in one month's time. If I give you nothing by then, please, PLEASE, form a mob and beat me until I spit out some words.
November 12, 1996
"Tom, there's no way you are going to do this."
"You don't get it Wayne, I have to. They're threatening my family; what other choice do I have?"
Wayne, worried for his friend, tried to think of a solution to the dilemma that had Thomas Vinitoria's life in a death hold. "Forge information. Falsify documents. Do anything but give Fletcher Corp. the folder. You know firsthand what's happening to those kids, the ones in the valley. They're going to keep experimenting, on kids just like Connor and – "
"You leave my son out of this. You have no right to put your nose in my personal business."
"You killed him. She thinks he's dead. You convinced your wife that your son died. Do you have any conscience at all?"
Over the years, Vinitoria had learned to perfect the art of the lie; a necessary skill to possess when making a profitable deal. "You know they've drained it out of me. Connor was – is – just another subject. Trial number 24B7, nothing more."
"I've got a patient waiting."
Dial tone.
So you were probably noticing how nothing I just gave you had anything relevant to do with the story. Well, folks, that would be the wrong assumption to make. I have decided that whenever I cannot come up with something of value to give you, I will simply pull something out from the story's past.
**Hint Hint** both characters presented are important from now on. I will eventually try to blend the past and present together in some fantastical time-smoothie! Just kidding. But they are important.
So enough of my random long A/N's… I have something serious to say.
I want to go back end completely edit the story. I originally posted it YEARS ago and the writing is awful and there are quite a few things I want to change. I want your input. Should I redo it or just let it be? Just keep in mind that I DID sorta completely changed plot lines halfway through the story…
So yah. REVIEW PLEASE! You know I love hearing your lovely electronic voices whispering sweet things in the night…
Ok. I seriously need to sleep. Sorry for that last line. :)