I don't really know how well this is written. It's my first story I'm posting here on Fanfiction.

Soooo Please review and tell me if you like it...

I'm not to sure if I wanna continue this into a story, but let me know if you want me too.

Disclaimer: I don't own Maximum Ride JP. does.


I walked down stair looking for Fang; I froze dead in my tracks when I saw him and her sitting on the couch.

I hid behind the corner were they couldn't see me. I watched as she flip her long dark red hair over her shoulder looking her earnest and flashing Fang a smile.

I felt acid burning in stomach as I continued to watch the scene in horror. I wanted to go and interrupt what ever they were doing, but I made no effort to do so.

I looked away when Fang leaned over, tiled her chin up, and kissed her; just like he had once done to me back in the cave.

I looked back in disgust as she warped her arms around his neck her deepening the kiss. I couldn't help but compare that one vile moment at the school back in Virginia to now.

I stopped breathing and stood up. I silently walked out of the front door then ran to the back yard.

I looked around me scanning the area and leaped into the air. I unfurled my wings hard and fast, when I was airborne

I used my super speed to get as far away from the house as possible.

I brought myself to a halt when a deserted beach came into view. I tucked my wings in and aimed downward.

I landed ungracefully near the shore and sank to my knees. My hands dug into the ground clutching the sand.

I squeezed my eyes shut trying to rid the image of Fang and her locking lips.

Dang it Max! Why are you acting this way? It's not like you like Fang, I mean come on. You're probably stressed or something.

I tried to tell myself until my voice cut in. Max just admit it you like Fang! Jeb-er-the voice said.

Can it, and just leave me alone! I screeched inside my head. Mr. oh wise fortune cookie is not helping the situation at all.

I sighed a breath of relief when the voice didn't respond. Okay so maybe I do like Fang, but it's not like I going to admit it.

Besides, it's not going to change anything because, he gave me a reason to breathe, but now he's with her.


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