Hi! I just started watching and it was really interesting and this story really hit me. Tamaki and Haruhi pairing. At first I didn't think they were perfect, but I guess the last episodes changed my mind. This was written in a neutral point of view. Please read and review. I know it's lame so please tell me you honest opinions. Thanks.

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One Promise

She sat there waiting for her next guest. She sighed once again. He was watching her from afar.

"Tamaki? What's the matter?" his guest asked him.

"Nothing my princess."He smiled and his guest sunk into her dreams. He was still secretly watching Haruhi waiting. After a few minutes, a big guy came. Tamaki was too shocked that this brute was Haruhi's customer. This man had a room reserved. They were going to be alone. He couldn't allow it. He was her daughter. He stood up and said, "I'm sorry my princess, but I must be off."

He waited outside the room.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!" It was a loud shriek.

He busted into the door. "Haruhi!"

She was on the farthest corner of the room holding a vase. She dropped the vase and ran to Tamaki. The shattered vase was the only sound heard followed by large sobs. She was hurt. She needed help, and he was the only one who gave it to her.

"Get out!" His eyes were daggers directly hitting the guy. But the guy didn't budge at all. " I said Get out!" Still he didn't move at all. " Haruhi? Please look away." Tamaki said to Haruhi in the most comforting way possible.

She shut her eyes so tight, and covered her ears. She merely heard whimpers of defeat, but she didn't know who it was from.

"Tamaki-sempai?" She was so scared. She saw Tamaki full of bruises.

"I'm sorry Haruhi, I didn't … get to …beat ...him up ………for you." He still said with a smile.

"Thank you so much Sempai!" She said as her eyes flush another set of tears.

"No problem" He said, and thought that she was hurt and he couldn't bare to see her like that again.

He said, "I promise I won't let anyone hurt you again."

End

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