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"Goukakyuu no Jutsu" – jutsus being announced

"Brat" – demon speech

'What an idiot' – thoughts

"Dobe" – speech

"Son of a -" back-round voice

Redone

Naruto age – 16

Rookie 9 - 13

Prologue:

In the village of Konoha, the fourth Hokage Namikaze Minato had just finished sealing Kyuubi, but had messed up the seals. So, while Kushina was able survive giving birth and Kyuubi's extraction thanks to the newly arrival of Tsunade, when he resealed the Kyuubi the seal was change into a transformer seal due to his rushed actions. In a feedback loop he was knocked unconscious and changed his newly born son named Naruto on a genetic level never seen before. The result killed the original Kyuubi and started its process to be revive once it recovered its full strength. The only man to witness such an event was a man with yellow silted eyes who took the now glowing yellow Naruto before any other ninjas arrived. While the Sandaime with his two Anbu arrived to witness Naruto's kidnapping they failed to stop him.

A Few Months Later in a Hidden Lab

Laying on an examination table was no other than Naruto surrounded by a few scientists. Two of the scientists was no other than Orchimaru and his apprentice Kabuto. For months they had been running test to find out what was so different about Naruto and the results were stunning to say the least.

"He is the human form of a bijuu" smirked Orchimaru as Kabuto nodded glancing at his pad full of notes.

"He has the same organs as a human does, but they are supercharged to an explainable degree. I can't even examine his blood due to the fact its now pure charka. The minute it leaves the tube and touches air, it evaporates into a mist and disappears" spoke up Kabuto showing a small needle full of Naruto's blood. He dropped a small amount of it on the table and watched as it started to evaporate into a yellow mist.

"If he is a bijuu, then that would make his charka bijuu charka and not regular humans' charka. He follows the laws that they do. I can assume he will eventually have the power to rival the original Kyuubi or maybe even more as he grows up. Maybe we can take charka from him and make our own army of jinchūriki?" spoke a random scientist as Orchimaru shook his head no

"I already knew his chakra was a bijuu types. I tried to seal the charka into another person, and it corded the man from the inside out. His charka is not stable for sealing yet. He will need to mature more. But if I can't have an army of jinchurkin then what about an army of bijuu's" finished Orchimaru with a smirk making everyone stare at him confused. Pointing at his privates he continued

"He has a reproduction system so he should be able to reproduce once he matures and his charka becomes fully stable. The female he reproduces with must be an active ninja. Their wombs will be naturally stronger than a civilian's which would allow them to be able to hold the baby without killing them both. While we wait for that day, I will train him to be my secret weapon against all those who oppose me" he finished with an evil smirk

For the last 16 years Naruto was locked up in a cell in a place called Oto. If you would consider the place, he was living in a cell. He had gained a lot of knowledge from Orchimaru and Kabuto along with some remaining memories of the original Kyuubi. For his height he was tall for his age being 6'2, long blonde hair in a pony tail, blue eyes with a black slit like pupil, and a seal on his right side of his face going through his eye and cheek. To top things off he had a strange curse seal was on his right shoulder that had multiple effects that Orchimaru didn't let him know about yet. One of the things that set him different from others along with something Orchimaru enjoyed were his eyes. It could analyze any technique or bloodline with a glance and be able to tell its strengths, weakness, how to improve it, and how to disable it. Because of this Orchimaru used his help make his jutsu's to which he complied with since he was bored and owed the man a lot. He may be cruel and weird, but he raised him.

To pass time he would usually summon a glowing hovering ball that would show him the outside world to keep him entertained but that can only go so far at times. He watched as his birth parents always be on the lookout for him or Orchimaru but continued with their lives, with having twins a boy and girl. He watched them progressed through life since birth to their current life. When he saw them in danger, he used his charka which slipped through the village to protect them. Something Orchimaru still doesn't know how he accomplishes.

He gave them clues using his charka for help on problems too hard and watched how they made friends with the so call rookie 9. He also watched other nations at times and their choices like the civil war in Mizu along with the organization called Akatsuki hunting for the bijuu. Once in a while he would play a prank on them through the globe here and there. He was a teen after all.

He was currently looking at Suna's jinchūriki as he killed people off for fun when Orchimaru came in. Now his cell or room wasn't like the others. Orchimaru wanted the best of the best comfort when coming to him. The floor was made out of the most expensive carpet, he had a big sofa that was bigger than him in the corner that he would always lay on, huge gold silk covers that would be wrapped around him, and little decorates here and there like a tree and a few more sofas. He could leave his room whenever he pleases but he liked to keep out of public eye. Its why he has a back door that lead to a beautiful forest area and a pond in the middle. He was currently laying on the shore of the pond wearing only swimming trunks enjoying the sun and looking at the projected orb. Next him was a plate of food a servant had recently brought in. Without even looking he could instantly sense the man behind him.

"Hey Orchimaru, want to watch the show?" asked Naruto chewing on some food the servant brought in not too long ago

"What are you watching Naruto-kun?" asked Orchimaru smirking

"Suna's jinchūriki. Messed up kid really"

"True but I have a question for you that has always plague my mind" said Orchimaru turning serious

"Well shoot"

"Why don't you complain and try to break out. Like goal rogue and do whatever you like. You never told me why" said Orchimaru

"Well it's really simple, the original Kyuubi no Kitsune is out there and it probably wants to kill me in revenge. It's too troublesome running from a crazy Kitsune for the rest of my life. There is also that organization that you where apart of once that would bother me all the time. Last I like living off of you and watching you. You're funny. Like when you are angry at this one person's failure, so you smacked him into a wall which turned out to be a female's side of the baths. Poor soul didn't stand a chance in that pin" said Naruto smiling

"Well those are pretty good reasons, but I'll still think there are other reasons" said Orchimaru smiling as Naruto pointed to the food in response

"So, what do you want now? I know you are planning something big since you are building up your forces" said Naruto narrowing his eyes

"I can't get something pass you now can I. Well I will be attacking Konoha at the chuunin exams and reveal your existence to your parents to gain an edge in the fight. You will help me destroy Konoha" said Orchimaru smirking at Naruto's shocked face.

"You must really hate Konoha to reveal my existence?" asked Naruto

'OR DID YOU JUST FORGOT WHAT WE TALKED ABOUT NO MORE THAN 15 SCEONDS AGO! Everyone will be after us if you do so' thought Naruto enraged

"Of course it's perfect. I will talk to you later about all the details and plans. If I require your assistance be sure to be ready and don't mess around too much. I know a certain someone has been visiting you lately and I don't want you having any kids until I say so. I want to study that" said Orchimaru walking out with a smirk as Naruto had a blush on his face

'SHIT, SHIT, SHIT! That baka! You will be a major target for Konoha and all the Shinobi nations for holding a human turned Bijuu. Akatsuki will come for us and worst of all KYUUBI will surly come for us! Or more pacifically ME! I must make a backup plan now. Thanks a lot, fucking dick' thought Naruto closing his eyes to think as a red head popped out from behind the tree.

"How did he know that it was me?" she questioned as she slowly walked up to Naruto and straddle him. "But shall we continue?"

A few months later after 2nd part of Chuunin exam

The doors opened once again for Naruto's room it reveals a slightly angered Orchimaru holding a female no older than 16 by the arm. She was in ragged clothing and had long black hair that went to her ankles. Naruto and his companion were staring wide eyed from the bed at Orchimaru who threw her into the bed. Naruto looked at the frighten female staring at him before he looked back at Orchimaru.

"What is the meaning of this? I'm busy at the moment!" yelled Naruto not liking were this was going. He could feel his hair sticking up at the back of his neck.

"Ori-orchimaru-sama. I can explain" stammered the red head

"No need Karin I already knew" he stated cutting her off

"So, h-he does exist. Orchimaru's own bijuu. I thought it w-was a myth" stuttered the girl

"That is Tsuchi Kin. She had failed me in the Chuunin Exams and is of no use of me. She had a choice of being my experiment or die in one of my jutsu's. She took too long to answer so I made her decision for her" said Orchimaru making hand seals that Naruto immedaitly recognize with a shocked face.

"No! You wouldn't" said Naruto shocked

"What's going on" asked a terrified Kin

"Oh, but I will" said Orchimaru still continuing

"Can we talk about this hmm" asked Naruto smiling a little

"No we can't my decision is final!" said Orchimaru

"Aaa mess up! Tora not Inu, Tatsu, Uma. Whoa you forgot one. Hey watch out" shouted Naruto trying to mess him up making Orchimaru sweat drop.

"That's really pathetic" said Orchimaru

"Well it's worth a shot" said Naruto

"What is this jutsu you are doing" asked Kin

"I will activate his seal that would put him in a persuasive mood and depending on his will he will follow my orders or not. I still have issues fully controlling him, but the mind control is not the experiment. Naruto, I want you to impregnate Kin. Karin too if you want but Kin must become pregnant. I want to document the growth and possibilities of this" chuckled Orchimaru as he finished his last hand seals and Naruto's seal on his right face glowed white causing him to clinch it in pain. Orchimaru left as Kin screamed for forgiveness before he closed the door after him.

Later on

Kin must have been sitting there in a corner for at least 2 and a half watching Naruto as he was sitting down on the bed in pain fighting to keep control of himself. Karin was next to him holding onto him whiling doing her best to lessen his pain. But they knew it was a losing battle. In order to remove the pain, the order must be fulfilled.

"I'm…. sorry Kin…...that's this….is happening to…. you. I never thought I would be a father like this" said Naruto struggling before coughing out blood to the side they disappeared in a yellow mist.

"It's not your fault really. I should have won the fight so it's really a little bit mine fault. What is your name? I'm sure you don't want to be known as the bijuu" asked Kin

"It's….Naruto"

"Well thanks for trying Naruto. How long do you think you can hold it?" asked Kin

"10 more minutes…. been holding it for…... 2 and a half hours and by each…. Minute it's gets more powerful and annoying" said Naruto

"Damn" growled Karin

"I'll try not to kill you and to make up for this…. I guess I can protect you from anyone, make sure Orchimaru keeps harmful things away from you, and well I can train you" said Naruto shocking Kin

"Thanks for the first 3 but training me" said Kin confused

"Yes, I will train you to become as strong as you can be with my type of training…. that is if you accept" said Naruto

"Thanks I'll take it. Maybe I can use this training to get revenge on Orchimaru" said Kin removing her clothing and walking up to him.

"What…are you doing?" asked Naruto

"It's going to happen so I might as well get it over with and try to enjoy it" said Kin petting his head

"Are you sure you don't want to wait until the last second" asked Naruto

"Release it" whispered Kin

"I'm…. sorry" whispered back Naruto finally releasing his control as Karin stepped back to look on before making her own choice on what to do.

2 days later

Kabuto came down to the room to see Naruto sleeping peacefully while holding a naked Kin and Karin who were also sleeping but cuddle close to Naruto's body. They were all underneath the covers of the bed covering them from view.

"So, Naruto-kun how did it-"

"-bring me my meal and something for them to eat and drink or you will die" interrupted Naruto glaring at him.

"You are not in the position to make-" started Kabuto again but was cut off again when Naruto released an amazing amount of killing intent that could make his heart pop from shock if a little more was added. Naruto released it daring him to disobey his request so he can kill him.

"Hai, Naruto-dono" said Kabuto going back up to get some food as Kin woke up as soon as he closed the door.

"Morning Hime, how are you feeling" asked Naruto looking at her as she laid her head on his arms.

"My legs are a little sore right now, but not that bad. Why is that! I should be in a wheel chair paralyze for life after all that sex!" said Kin

"That's because I've been healing you so would have no damages on your body but just a little sore here and there. Also Karin special ability allows her heal others when you bite into her. Something you did a lot" smirked Naruto

"Thanks" said Kin blushing

"Your body feels so warm. It's like I can stay here forever" said Kin

"You can stay there for a while if you want. As a matter fact stay there. We have company" said Naruto as the door opened up revealing Kabuto holding their food followed by Orchimaru smiling. Kabuto had placed the large tray on table before stepping back.

"OOooo so Kin you are looking quite healthy. That is good we will check later to see if you are pregnant or not" said Orchimaru

"She is mine now. You will use the upmost of care while examining her pregnancy. Have fun with THAT pet if you are feeling testy" growled Naruto nodding his head to Kabuto

"Hn, it has been a while since I gave you a gift so fine, you may keep her, and I will use the upmost of care" said Orchimaru smirking as he left with Kabuto

"So, I'm yours now huh?" said Kin smirking at him

"What's with the sudden change in personality" asked Naruto

"Well what can I say, I had fallen for you. My knight in shining armor" said Kin

"Yyeeaahh…..SO back to training. I will have a mental link set up between us three so we can keep in constant communication. I will teach you several ninja arts while using my charka to put your body into shape for the most part. Working out your body is something we will fix when we cross that road so eat up before we start" said Naruto before he started to cuddle Karin more while laying back down

"Thanks" said Kin as she started eating. When she finished she stood up so she was standing in front of Naruto until she notice something. She was still naked, but she hated the rags Orchimaru gave her.

"Yeah, we can't have people looking at something that is yours like this can we" said Kin smirking at him putting her hands on her waist

"We can't have that" said Naruto as he sent yellow charka at Kin as it wrapped around her. When it disappear she had a white bra and panties and over it was a white silk like clothing that you would picture a goddess would wear with white heels(Tsunade type heels). Her clothing wrapped around every curve of her body but let her back up to her waist be shown. In the front the left and right sides of the dresses waist was missing. It went over her legs down to her ankles. It completely shocked her.

"It looks amazing. I…I look amazing in this" said a shocked Kin

"Of course you do. I would want you to look the best. You are after all one of my mates now" said Naruto using his charka make a finger to point at a tattoo on her neck that was a picture of a fox chasing its tail.

"What does that mean?"

"Its meaning is something I'm still trying to work out. Maybe you are half bijuu or something with a lot more benefits. I can tell your life is bound to mine through that seal so you will live as long as I do, shared that mental connection we talked about, super healing, some bijuu abilities, maybe eternal youth, and a few more things we can talk about later" said Naruto as Kin looked at him in shock before she ran up to him jumping on him and hugging him while she cried.

"T-thank you. You don't know what it means to have someone to really care for you when you have no one" said Kin

"It's ok. I do care for you Kin-hime. Now step back some so I can tell you the final parts of your clothing. It's still surprising Karin is asleep through all this. She really is a heavy sleeper" said Naruto as she stepped back away from him.

"Charge a little bit of charka into your clothes" said Naruto as Kin did what she was told and her clothing glowed white before the light disappear revealing white old style battle armor that the Shodai and Nidaime would wear with black and gray tattoo's on it.

"This armor will protect you better than any armor could but as you can tell it is light, like the clothing before. It's flexible so you can dodge and do many things while in it and can be repaired with just charka" said Naruto as Kin looked at her armor in shock.

"Amazing"

"Yes, it is now let's begin your training" said Naruto leading her to the back door while picking up Karin bridal style

This is the Redone version of the original story

P.S. There will be quite a few skips and it is with reason. He doesn't do anything important and the twins are the same age as the rookie nine so it's safe to say that the Kyuubi attack happened early on. There will be a lot of surprises in this like people not expected to be alive and a few OC's. People from others forgotten pass maybe

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