ok this is my first story on fanfiction. I hope you like it,. Only the first part but ill try to upload soon. Reveix please but just enjoy . and tips to make the story better will be great but the best part hasnt come in yet. I have a surprize with Fang for all you Fang loves (i know he is totally awesome lol) sorry about the shortness of the next 3 chapters they looked really long in word lol ill try to make future chaptures longer

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Disclaimer: I dont claim the characters are JP's (JP i love your stoy i think its awesome ^-^)

Copyright:While i do not claim the characters i do claim the story line its mine no one else can have no touch if its not urs dont touch it

Chapter 1 Too Quiet

It had been two months since the hurricane in Florida. There were no Erasers, no wacked out scientists on our trail, in fact even the voice was gone without a trace. I finally had my head to myself.

Tonight we were sleeping in trees in Pennsylvania somewhere. It was a clear night. The stars were bright and the moon was full. The rest of the flock was sleeping in nearby trees. Fang was above me. It was peaceful, quite. Come to think of it, too quite.

I heard a rustle of leaves down below. I bolted upright. What was that? I put out my wings just the slightest bit to keep my balance. I jumped down to the branch just below me. There it was again, only closer. I climbed back up to fang and the flock. I trapped Iggy's hand twice and nudged everyone else up. We all gathered on one tree.

"Look guys I think-", I never got a chance to finish my sentence because the tree shook with such force that I nearly fell out. The branch where I sat sagged so much. I turned around and nearly fainted. Ari? How could Ari be hear? He expired more than six months ago.

"Hello, Max," He snarled.

My breathe stuck in my throat. Maybe it really was Ari. Maybe he really didn't expire. No that couldn't be, I saw him die right before my eyes, but then how?

He smiled evilly showing his extremely yellow teeth. "Beautiful night isn't it? Better enjoy it cause tonight is the last night you see the stars."

He threw a punch at me. I could have sworn I heard the air whistling. I jumped to the side to dodge the punch which would have been fine if I wasn't in a stinking tree 60 feet in the air. I pulled out my wings to catch myself. Ouch. Why do I keep doing that, Oh right because if I didn't I would most likely die.

I looked up to see fang fighting with Ari. I looked below there were about 90 other Erasers swarming the tree. About half had wings. Great. I turned back to the flock about to yell up and out but all the pressure of the world suddenly came down on my head. Well more like in my head.

I grasped my head trying to hold my head together hoping my brain wouldn't leak through my fingers. I tucked in my wings. I would have gladly died then have to go through this. I tucked in my wings and curled into a ball if that is at all possible in the air. I started to fall.

"Max!" someone shouted my name, I think. It was to far away for me to tell. I was still falling. I knew I would hit the ground soon, but no ground came. "Max," someone said my name softer. Then I felt the ground, but I came softly. Someone was touching my shoulder. I hardly felt it. My brain was still falling apart. I knew the flock would be around me. I wanted to yell at them to run. To fly. To get anywhere away from here. I don't know what happened next. My mind went blank and I slipped into unconsciousness.