Hey guys, sorry this isn't an update (but look for one today, Saturday, or Sunday! :D) but I just wanted to let you know I have a poll on my profile about what this (currently no name) girl shall be called! Go check out! I really want your guys' opinions! :D P.S. I can't update even if I wanted to though, because I can't figure out the 15 document limit thing!! Can any one pm me or review on how to fix that?? Thanks so much!! :D
Unfortunately, I am not Stephenie Meyers. So I don't own any of these characters. (Except the new ones, that I made up :D) So ya, not S.M. :(
Thank you for reading this, enjoy!
JPOV (obviously! lol)
"Jasper!" I could hear my wife shout in pleading desperation to try and stop me, "Jasper stop!"
But it was too late to detain me.
The monster inside me was breaking free, awoken by the sweet scent of shed human blood.
It didn't help that we had been hunting. My instincts were already released out from underneath my carefully composed human façade. I was a predator, on a hunt.
The rational side of me pleaded with the monster as I rushed through the forest.
"No, not a human, you've been working too hard for too long for this!"
"So sweet… just this once…"
"Think of Carlisle. Bella and Edward. Esme. Rosalie and Emmett. Renesme. Alice."
That last one almost stopped me in my tracks. The pain of just the thought of hurting her, my beautiful Alice, was staggering. But I knew nothing could stop me now. It was too late to save this innocent human's life.
The scent grew ever-stronger as the human came into view. A young girl, sitting at the base of a large tree. She was inspecting the cut on her left leg with care. The sight of the blood made it even more tantalizing to the monster I was.
I had to hurry; I could hear Alice in the distance. Her lithe footsteps barely graced the forest floor at her present speed. I could also hear Emmett's less agile ones on her heels. Together they would be able to separate me from my prey. But I still had some time before they could do that.
The look on the innocent girl's face barely registered as I sprinted to her; the blood like a magnet, the closer I got, the more it pulled me and called to me.
I could hear a small gasp less than a second before I slammed into her. The tree's trunk splintered, it crashed behind us. My teeth made contact with her velvet throat. The blood flowed smoothly past my eager lips.
She didn't even have time to scream. I could tell death wasn't far for her; I took pleasure in that fact. I felt bad enough without having her to suffer for long.
It seemed all of this had passed in this than a second, but I had been drinking for over a century. Then a force struck me and I reluctantly tumbled off my prey and back onto my feet a few feet away from the fallen tree. Emmett.
I growled menacingly from deep in my chest.
"Jasper…" he warned in a threatening voice. I wasn't scared though. I had faced much more frightening things than Emmett.
I sank into a crouch and quickly tried to lunge around him back to the girl. He rammed into me again. He pinned me on the ground. I snapped my teeth at him, not really intending to bite him. I knew all to well how much pain our venom caused, I wished none of it on my brother.
He held me down though, not budging an inch. Out of the corner of my eye I could see Alice approach the girl. I could sense her hoping that somehow she had survived me. I frowned. I could feel the pain of my beloved hit me like a bullet. It made me go limp beneath Emmett's hold. The girl's heartbeat was slowing; soon it would be no more.
It was a sudden and surprising relief when I felt her pain turn to astonishment. I lifted my head to make sure she was alright.
I mentally groaned when I saw what had caused this emotion. The girl's hair was splayed around her head on the tree trunk; her neck was revealed. A large, bloody crescent scar was revealed.
I had just turned this girl into one of us; a monster.
Okay guys, I'm not sure if I should continue with this story. I mean, I'm not sure if it's any good. So, it would be fantastic if I just got one little review telling me if I should continue or not. I have almost another chapter written, but I don't want to put it up if nobody likes this story. So it would be so awesome if I could just get one reviewer! Thanks so much! :D
Okay, this is my first OC story. I don't usually like reading these, and I know a lot of other people don't either. So thank you so much to all of you who are reading this! This is not just some random... I put myself in my own fanfiction, ya da ya da ya da. This new character is not me (unfortunately :D) but a character I imagined completely up by myself. I will update as soon as possible! Once again, this is way different than from what I usually write (canon character couple fluff and angst and such) but I hope you enjoyed! Please review too, it makes my day! :D
-Ember