DISCLAMER: I DO NOT OWN TWILIGHT OR ANY OF THE CHARACTERS!!Ok with that said and done, this is my first fanfic and I most likely suck. So please please please let me know if I should continue or not. Be honest I can take it I am a big girl!! Enjoy!
Living in Forks sucks, there isn't anything to do. Currently I am sitting in a car on my way to my new house looking out at the rain. When my parents died I was moved her by social services to live with an adoptive family. The Cullens. The parents Carlisle and Esme, apparently can't have children of there own so they settled on adopting me. BIG MISTAKE!! I have an attitude and have decided to not speak with others.
"Bella, please be good for these people." Judy my social worker begs me. I ignore her as we pull down a long road covered in trees. We pull up to the house and I think I dislocated my jaw. The house was more like a mansion; I have never seen anything like it!
"Come on Bella!" Judy gets out of the car and pops the trunk. I grab my bags and my backpack. We knock on the door and the most beautiful blond guy I have ever seen is standing there.
"Hello, I am Carlisle, you must be Isabella, please come in." the living god says.
"Hi, this is Isabella, but she prefers Bella." Judy explains. As we walk in I realize that the inside was better than the outside. We walk over to a couch and I sit down. A beautiful woman walks in.
"Hi, I am Esme, nice to meet you!" We shake hands and I notice how cold her hands are they are also hard, like a rock, but really smooth.
"Well, Carlisle have you introduced her to the kids?" Wait KIDS?! I thought I was the only one!
"No I haven't, KIDS, come down here!" I turn around and see five gods and goddesses. If I thought Carlisle and Esme were beautiful than these kids were beyond words it was almost painful. When they stopped in front of me, I stood up.
"Hi, I am Alice, I cant wait to go shopping!" alice as she said her name was, was short and had black hair that stuck out every which way, but on her it worked. I shuddered at the thought of shopping. Next up was the other girl had blond hair and was tall. If you looked up the word gorgeous you would see a picture of her.
"I'm Rosalie" she introduced herself with acid in her voice. Next was a tall blond who was slim but still had some mucles.
" Hello, I'm Jasper, it's a pleasure to met you Bella." His voice was soft and calming. I instantly felt better. I was introduced to the biggest one next. His mucles were huge, I doubted that I could fit my arms around them. He was really friendly, he ran up to me and scouped me into the biggest hug I have ever experienced. I couldn't breath.
" Hey there little sis, I'm Emmett!" I knew that I would like this guy. The last guy had odd reddish brewn hair, he wasn't as tall as Jasper or as buff as Emmett, but he still looked like he could eat you alive!"(a/n: lol vampires I know cheesey)
" Edward" was all he said. His voice was harsh, I actually flinched , but I still could hear how velvet it was. I overwhelmed, by not only finding out about the other five kids, but actually meeting and seeing hoe beautiful they were. I was starting to get dizzy and thay all were staring at me. I should have had breakfast. I could tell that I was getting light-headed. Next thing I know I am falling and everything is going black…
Again please tell me what you think what I need to improve if I should keep going in the first place. Please all reviews welcome!